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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4

As Everytime Rahul comes in Her dreams one sames the same thing which he says every night so that Geet moves on in her life

Geet: rahul tum wapis aa gaye , maine kaha tha sabko ki tum zinda ho lekin koi mujhe pe yakeen hi nahi kar raha tha

Rahul: nahi geet mai zinda nahi hoon tumhe yeh baat samjni hogi aaj mai agar sirf yahan aaya hoon toh bas tumse ek zaruri baat karne

Geet : kya baat hai rahul bolo mai tumhari har baat manougi tumhe pata hai na ki mai tumhari koi baat se mana nahi kar sagti bolo na Rahul

Rahul : promise me geet mai aaj joh bhi bolouga who tumhe mani hogi

Geet : I promise rahul mai wohi karungi joh tum bologe

Rahul: shaadi karlo geet maa ki baat manlo

Geet: lekin rahul

Rahul:lekin kuch nahi geet tumne aabhi kaha tha ki tum meri har baat manogi phir aab kya huwa . geet tum bhul rahi ho meri akhri saans mai tumhe maine kya kaha

tha ki tum jeena nahi chodogi aur dusri shaadi karogi kaha hai who geet joh meri har baat manti thi

Geet : thik hai rahul agar tum yehi chahte ho toh yehi sahi mai tumhari yeh baat

bhi man logungi

Rahul muskurte huwe uske sapne se chala jata hai

Geet subha uthti hai aur ready hoke Mrs Kapoor k pass jati hai mom mujhe aapse aur dad se ek zaruri baat karni hai

Mrs kapoor : haan geet bete boliye

Geet: maa maine faisala kar liya hai mai shaadi ke liye ready hoon

Mr kapoor : yeh to bohat khush ki baat hai bete hum bata nahi sagte ki hum kitne khush hai

Mrs kapoor: haan geet tune shaadi se haan kar ke hum dono ko bht badi khushi di hai

Geet : lekin meri bhi ek shart hai

Mr & Mrs kapoor: shart kaisi shart geet

Geet : joh bhi mujhe dekhne aayega usko mere past k bare mai sab pata hona chahiye

Mrs kapoor : yeh kaisi shart hai geet

Geet : maa mai kisi ko bhi dhoke mai nahi rakhna chahti hoon agar aapko meri yeh shart mazoor hai toh phir mujhe shaadi se koi aitraaz nahi hai

Mrs kapoor : thik hai geet hume tere iss shart se koi aitraaz nahi hai

KC

Maan : MAAN control urself subah sab se utha hai bas pata nahi tujhe kya ho gaya hai

**FLASHBACK**

Maan ready hoke aapne detective ko call karta hai aur geet ke bare mai sab

information 6 hrs mai jana chahta hai

After attending the call . he joins everyone in dining table for breakfast with wishing them a good morning

sab maan ko bas dekhte rahte hai

Priya: ram dekho na maan ko kya ho gaya hai woh nashte ko dekh k smile kar raha hai

Ram : priya mai bhi wohi dekh k pareshan hoon kal bhi jab maan woh school function se wapis aaya tha jab bhi who muskura raha tha yahan tak ki mere awaaz dene pe bhi woh mujhe se mila bhi nahi

Priya : hmmm dal mai zarur kuch kala hai

Ram : puri ki puri dal kali hai

Mr n mrs. Khurana coughs to get attention from their son who is lost in dreamland

Maan: hmmm

Priya : maan mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

Maan : hmm

Priya : MAAANNN

Maan : haa haan maa

Priya : maan aapko kya ho gaya hai hum aapko jab se bula rahe hai aap hai ki humari koi baat hi nahi sun rahe hai

Maan : maa papa mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai pls

Priya : haan maan bolo

Maan: maa kal mai jo function mai gaya tha na

Priya : haan toh maan

Maan : maa mujhe bolne toh doo

Priya: haan haan thik hai bolo

Maan: maa mujhe wahan ek ladki pasand aa gayi hai I mean usse dekhne k baad mujhe bas who hi har jagah nazar aati hai

Priya: kyaa maan ...aap kya bol rahe hai...kya aap sach bol rahe hai with a shocked happy expression

Maan: haan maa mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai

Priya : ohhh maan aap nahi jante aapne aaj kitni badi baat boldi

Ram : priya humare maan ko pyaar ho gaya ufff Finally THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA is in LOVE

It's the most BREAKING NEWS

Priya : kya aap bhi ji waise maan kya name hai uss ladki ka

Maan : maa uss ladki ka name ...utne mai adi ka call aa jata hai maa mai aabhi chalta hoon raat mai aake aap sab se iss bare mai baat karunga bye maa bye papa

Priya & Ram : bye bete

**Flash back end **

Maan gets a call n is really happy 2 c the caller id he receive the call

Detective: sir aapne joh kam humko diya tha who ho gaya hai uss ladki ka name hai

GEET KAPOOR who ek school mai teacher hai aur yeh uska ghar xyz road pe hai

Maan : very gud tumko tumhare paise mil jayenge

Before maan cuts the call

Detective : sir ek aur zaruri baat she is a widow

Maan : kya

Detective : yes sir uske husband Rahul ki death aaj se 6 months phale ek car accident mai ho gayi hai

Maan : oh ok thanks

Detective : sir lekin aaj hi hume pata chala hai ki uske in-laws unki dubara shaadi karne k bare mai soch rahe hai

Maan : ok fine tumahre paise tumhare account mai transfer ho gaye hai BYE

Precap: maan tells the family abt geet n family decision abt geet
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Part 5

KC

GEET ko ek unknown number se call aata hai n she receives it

Geet : Hello

Person : Hello can I speak to Mrs Geet kapoor

Geet : yes speaking

Person : mam mai aapse ek bar milna chahta hoon

Geet : but aap hai kaun aur mai aapse kyun miloun mai aapko janti tak nahi

Person : jab aap mujhe se milengi tab aap ko mai milke sab kuch samaj dounga agar mai

Geet cuts the call in anger

Geet : zarur koi pagal hoga huh chado mujhe kya

Raat ko jab maan ghar jata hai who dekhta hai ki uske dad uska wait kar rahe hai

Ram : arre maan aap aa gaye aaiye hum aapka hi intezaar kar rahe the

Maan : papa , mom ,dadimaa , anni aur Vicky kahan hai mujhe aap sab se ek zaruri baat karni hai

Ram : kya huwa maan aap kabhi itne serious nahi the sab thik hai na

Maan: phale aap sabko bulaiye please papa

Thodi hi dair mai sab hall mai hote hai

Dadimaa : kya baat hai maan bete aapne hum sab ko aise kyun bulaya hai

Maan : dadimaa , papa, maa, anni aur Vicky mai aap sab ko uss ladki k bare mai kuch batana chata hoon

Anni: kis ladki k bare mai bhai

Priya: anni aur Vicky mai aapko batana bhul gayi ki aapke maan bhai ko pyaar ho gaya hai

Anni & Vicky : KYAAA

Dadimaa : haan

Maan: ek minute phale aap log meri baat sunnege

Ram : boliye maan

Maan : papa maine uss ladki k bare mai sab pata kiya hai aur mujhe ek baat pata chali hai

Ram : kaisi baat maan

Maan : papa woh widow hai

Ram : kya

Maan : haan papa uske husband RAHUL KAPOOR ki death ek car accident mai 6 months phale huvi hai

Dadimaa: maan kya hum aapse ek sawaal puche

Maan : puchiye dadimaa

Dadimaa: maan kya woh ek widow hai yeh jane k baad uske liye joh aapka pyaar hai woh kam ho jaiyega

Maan : nahi dadimaa

Dadimaa : phir mujhe iss rishtey se koi problem nahi hai

Ram & Priya : maa agar aapko koi problem nahi ai toh hume kya problem ho sagti hai

Maan : anni aur Vicky tum dono ko agar koi problem hai boldo mai nahi chahata ki humare ghar mai kabhi koi prob ho

Vicky anni k taraf dekhta hai aur who ek smile deti hai

Vicky : nahi bhai hum dono koi bhi koi problem nahi hai

Anni : haan bhai agar aap uss ladki k saath khush ho aapko uske past se koi problem nahi hai toh hume kya problem ho sagti hai humari khushi ussi mai hai jiss mai humare parivaar ki khushi hai

Maan : thank you soo much mujhe bas issi baat ki tension thi ki aap log kaise react karoge

Dadimaa : maan uss mai iss bichari ka kya kasoor hai joh kismet mai likha hota hai usse koi nahi badla sagta

Priya : haan maan waise mere rajkumar ne aab tak aapni rajkumari k name toh bataya hi nahi

Maan : maa uska name Geet hai

Anni : geet wow GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA maa sune mai kitna aacha lagta hai na

Priya : haan woh toh hai aacha chalo aab sab dinner karte hai bakhi ki baaten baad mai

AT NIGHT

Geet again gets a call

Geet : hello

Person : geet

Geet : yes kaun

Person : mai wohi insaan hoon jisne aapko subha call kiya tha

Geet : boliye aapko kya kam hai

Person : geet kya aap ek bar mujhe se milke mujhe se baat karenge

Geet : lekin kyun miloun mai aapse

Person : who sab mai aapko milke batane wala hoon

Geet : thik hai kahan milna hai lekin isske baad aap mujhe dubara kabhi bhi pareshan nahi karenge

Person : I promise

Geet : thik hai boliye kahan milna hai

Person : xyz Resturtant at 5 pm

Geet : ok Bye

Next MORNING

KM

Before maan was going to come down for breakfast someone knock at the door

Maan : come in

Priya : maan

Maan : arre maa aapne knock kyun kiya door pe

Priya : maan aapse hum eek zaruri baat karni hai

Maan : haan maa

Priya : maan aapko pata hai na aapne geet ko leke kya faisla kiya hai I mean usske past ko jane k baad bhi you are ready to marry her

Maan : maa aap bolna kya chahti hai saaf saaf boliye na

Priya : maan kabhi bhagwan na kare aapke aur geet ke bich mai uske past ko leke ladai huvi ya aapne usse kuch aise kha diya toh aap samaj rahe hai na hum kya kehna chahte hai

Maan : haan maa mai samaj gaya aap kya khane chahti hai
maa aap uski chinta mat kare mai geet ko aapne dil se aapna raha hoon mujhe uske past se koi problem nahi hai

Priya : thik hai maan hume bas yehi janana tha ki aap iss bare mai kya sochte hai agar aap khush hai toh humare liye humare bacho ki khush se zyaada kuch nahi hai

Maan keep his head on priya's lap

Priya : yaad hai maan jab bhi aap khush hote the aap aise hi humare godh mai sar rakh k humse raat bhar baat karte the

Maan : haan maa I LOVE YOU MAA

Priya : I love you 2 bete chalo breakfast karne warna anni aur Vicky yahi aa jayenge aur yaad hai na aaj Sunday hai toh breakfast garden mai hoga

Maan : haan maa yaad hai

Precap : GEET meets the unknown person

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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan is such a lovely guy
he thinks 4 everyone
who is this person????/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updates... i loved it jab ke mein ne second time parhi hai...
oh congrats u r groupie now...
mestill waiting for actual wala update... jaldi do na thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab updates! Well written! update soon n do pm! thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updates
but i have already read them before😃😃😃
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awesome updates
maan came to know about geets past and told his family too
geet getting call from unknown no and going to meet that unknown person
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Part 6


At evening geet reach the resturtant

Manager : yes may i help you mam

Geet : actually i am waiting for someone

Manager: if i am not wrong are you miss Geet

Geet : yes

Manager : please come this way mam Sir is waiting for u only

Geet : sir may i ask you a question

Manager : sure mam

Geet : why their is no one today

Manager smiles

Manager : because sir has booked the whole resturtant today

Geet : ohh ok

Manager : their is sir waiting for you

Geet : thank you

As geet reaches the place where the unknown person is standing facing his back to geet

Geet : dekho tum joh koi bhi ho mujhe pareshan karna ban karo akhir chahte kya ho tum mujhe

Person : joh mai chahta hoon woh sirf tum mujhe de sagti ho aur duniya ka koi insaan nahi and he turns

Geet : sir aap

Geet is shocked to see the person n it none other then MSK

Geet : aapne mujhe yahan kyun bulaiya hai

Maan : geet mai koi ghuma phira ke baat karne mai yakeen nahi rakhta mai sidha sidha bolna chahta hoon

Geet : kya sir

Maan : geet maine jab se tumhe uss function mai dekha hai mai tumse pyaar karne laga hoon aur mai tumse shaadi bhi karna chahta hoon

Geet : sir i respect you a lot lekin mai aapse shaadi nahi kar sagti kyun ko aapko mere bare mai kuch nahi pata hai mai

Maan cuts her in the middle and says

Maan : yehi ki tum ek widow ho 1 year phale tumhari shaadi RAHUL KAPOOR se huvi thi aur uski death ko 6 months ho gaye hai

Geet : lekin aap mujhe se shaadi kyun karna chahte hai aapko toh mujhe se bohat zyaada aachi ladkiyan milengi

Maan : geet ladkiyan toh mil jayegi lekin pyaar woh shahyad nahi kar paounga

Geet : sir lekin

Maan : its only MAAN for you

Geet : maan mai sirf rahul se pyaar karti hoon agar mai aapse shaadi kar bhi loun aap mere saath khush nahi rahe sagte kya aap mujhe mere past ke saath accept karoge kya aapki family accept karengi nahi maan mai janti hoon aap ya aapki family yeh kabhi accept nahi karegi

Maan : tum mujhe shahyad nahi janti geet mai ek bada businessman toh hoon lekin mujhe mai koi ego nahi hai haan mai duniya walo k liye aggront hoon lekin aapne ghar walo ke liye unka ladla beta hoon maine tumse kuch bhi baat karne se phale aapni family se baat ki hai geet aur mere family members ko tumse ya tumhare past se koi problem nahi hai yahan tak ki mere bhai bahen joh mujhe se chote hai unhe bhi nahi Aur rahi baat meri toh mai yeh vada karta hoon ki mujhe tumhara past se kabhi koi problem nahi hogi aur main kabhi bhi RAHUL ki jaga nahi lounga balke tumhara dil mai aapne liye ek nayi jaga banaounga

Geet : maan mujhe sochne k liye kuch time milega

Maan : haan geet tumhe jitna time chahiye tum lelo mai wait karunga

Geet : aab mai chalti hoon kafi late ho gaya hai bye

Maan : bye geet

Geet reaches her house and goes to Mrs & Mr kapoor room

Geet : mom dad mujhe aapse ek zaruri baat karni hai

Mr kapoor : haan geet bolo

Geet : dad aaj mujhe MSK ne bulaya tha

Mr kapoor : kyun bete kya huwa aur woh bhi MAAN SHINGH KHURANA ne

Mrs kapoor : geet sab thik toh hai na itna bade business man ne tujhe kyun bulaya hai

Geet : mom woh mujhe se shaadi karna chahte hai

Mrs kapoor & Mr kapoor : kyaaa

And geet narrates the whole conversatoon to them

Mrs kapoor : geet tune kya socha hai

Geet : mom mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai

Mrs kapoor : geet mujhe toh woh log bohat bhale lagte hai itna jab jane ke baad bhi woh tujhe se shaadi karna chahta hai aur unke family ko bhi koi problem nahi hai Kyun ji aap kya bolte ho

Mr kapoor : haan bete tu shaadi ke liye haan kardo

Geet : thik hai mom mai ek bar maan se baat karti hoon

Here in KM

Maan comes home and says the whole conversation to his family

Dadimaa : maan geet ne kya kaha

Maan : dadimaa ussko kuch time chahiye

Priya : maan uska joh bhi faisla hoga tumhe manzoor toh hai na

Ram : haan maan tumhe har cheez ke liye ready ho na

Maan : don't worry mai uski haan ke liye bhi ready hoon aur na k liye bhi jaise dadimaa ne kaha hai ki wohi hota hai koh kismat mai likha hota hai Aacha mom mai thodi dair araam karna chahta hoon kal ek important deal ki presentation bhi hai

Priya : ok maan tum jake araam karo

Here geet things about the whole incident about the day

Geet : kya karun mai kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai Rahul please meri help karoo

Utne mai hi Rahul uske samne aa jata hai

Geet : Rahul aacha huwa tum aa gaye please meri help karo mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai

Rahul tells geet his decision And rahul disappears

Here after sometimes maan gets a call

Maan : hello

Geet : maan

Maan : haan geet bolo itni raat ko tumne call kiya sab thik hai na

Geet : maan sab thik hai mujhe aapko aapna decision suna na tha

And geet tells her decision to maan and she cuts the call

Maan come down in hall

Maan : dadimaa , papa , maa , vicky , anni jaldi niche aao

Vicky and Anni comes running to the hell

Anni : kya baat hai bhai

Maan : ruko phale sab ko aane do

Everyone comes and starts asking question to maan together and why he called them down

Precap : geet's decision

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nice part
I know geet told yes
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awesome part..!!!
geet ka ans mereko pta h ..
update soon

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