!!~:HEARTBROKEN:~!! PART 2 PAGE 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends I realized that it had been a long time since I wrote an OS so here I present My OS "HEARTBROKEN" it is divided into two parts and I will update the second part by the end of this week.


PART 1

Angels and Demons have been enemies ever since Lucifer turned from heaven. Now with the doomed love of an angel and a demon will do the gravest mistake of falling for each other? They are asked to fight each other in this battle of love and power who will be the ultimate winner?

It was the most waited time of the year; the kingdom of Lybessia rang with wedding bells and colors filled every corner of the town. The streets sparkled with light and each bird sang its own unique song. It was the marriage of the Princess Jainandini the elder daughter of King Bridgraaj. It was the most powerful kingdom as none dared to attack it because there was always an angle protecting it and none could defect her. She was born to win, though being an orphan she was self schooled and self educated and she even self named herself as Manyata. The most beautiful maiden in the entire town. Her hair was long enough to touch the ground and her complexion had a superior shade of fair, her eyes were blue and it was in the color of ocean, her lips were soft and pink. Even in her regular armor suit her curve tempted the entire soldier accompanying her. But she was never distracted by any men presence the main motive in her life was to protect her kingdom.

Today on the request of the princess she had to wear something different. Like the other entire citizen she too wore a beautiful grown till her knees, her white washed wings looked even more brighter but it was perfectly hidden in the dress, she walked around the hall making sure that the enemy kingdom Slyudin they had been making plans to attack the kingdom from a long time. They too were equally powerful as they had now a demon fighting on their side. She did not hear much about the demon but all she knew that he was meant to die if he attacks her kingdom. She was finally stopped by her best friend and also the princess Jainandini as she said him with a warm smile

Manyata everyone enjoying themselves in the party except for you... now stop over thinking they will not attack after all almighty is not so cruel to ruin my marriage day so I advise you to go and enjoy yourself

But Princess I need to be here

Not a word more dearly you are going and that is final or shall I ask the court fool, Akash to take you along with him

By the name of akash color flew away from her face, in this kingdom she was only scared of him. He was so blinded by her beauty that he did not even leave a chance to flirt with her and always tried to accompany her everywhere. But his nerdy appearance and cowardly attitude was disliked by her hence she maintained distance as the princess swayed her hands to bring her out of the thought. Manyata shook her head and said

No princess I am going there is no need to call for him

The princess watched her best friend vanishing into the crowd as she went back and seated herself in the throne with her gonna be husband Prince Jaggat.

Here manyata found herself completely lost, there was a huge crowd people from many kingdom had assembled there the dance floor was filled with happy couples dancing around in joy and glee. She maintained safe distance and stayed back at the corner of the room. She twisted and tossed her drink looking around the room when finally her eyes meet a perfect brown eye. The winds had changed its direction; the cupid seemed to spread its magic already as both of them could not get their eyes off each other. Manyata had never seen such a gorgeous man in her entire life, words were too less to match his beauty. She heard her heart beating a lot faster and sweat covered her forehead. She was shaking with an unknown fear as she watched him taking slow steps towards her. Manyata felt an urge to run away she felt her cheek turning beetroot. She turned her legs in the opposite direction but before she could make a move. He was there in front of her, his eyes captured into hers as he spoke with a heavy voice

If you do not mind can I have a dance with you?

Her mind had been stopped working as it was only her heart and it just said

Yes

She did not even realize when she was taken to the dance floor and she was matching her steps perfectly with this unknown man. As he whispered into her ears

My name is Uday veer and what is your name

My name is Manyata I am the protector of this kingdom

So you are the angle that I have heard of my entire life

A cute smile played on her face, it was not the first time she was getting such response but hearing such words from his mouth made her feel so special she could feel herself falling for this man by each passing seconds. As the rest of the dance there eyes spoke to each other after the dance as he led her back he asked

If you do not mind can you accompany me to the garden I need to spend some time with you?

She nodded her head in a yes and followed him to the garden even the starlight adored the couple as he bowed his head down a tear flew down his eyes as he said

I want to say you that I love you

She could not answer instead just stared at him, but before she could speak he said

But I want to tell you something and I know after knowing this you will hate me forever. I am the demon Of Slyuddin I was send here with a purpose to kill you and destroy this kingdom nothing but only you stopped me after so many years I felt a heart inside me beating, I was enthralled with this new feeling of love but I cannot betray my people if I betray my king then my family will be hanged to dead. They are normal people and I am not enough powerful to fight with the king and the king men are all around soon enough a war will be started neither can I lose nor do I want you to lose

Her heart was broken into million pieces but she managed to say in middle of her sobs

You do your duty and I will do mine. Love has no place for us we are born to fight each other

With these words she left him alone in the deserted garden she went to her room and changed into her armor soon enough the messenger informed that they have started to attack the palace. It had begun the two lovers squared off.

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ANNI



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Posted: 11 years ago
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that's an amazing concept annesha, that was really heart touching. how will they come across in future, I am waiting to see it.
update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww anabh di
what to say ??
this os is just so amazing...
i mean uday the demon and manyata is a protector...
but hats off to the idea ...
amazingly ossum
loved it to the core
hope that manveer could be one ...
but anyways it was so damn good...
LOVE ANMOL
Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Zina-

that's an amazing concept annesha, that was really heart touching. how will they come across in future, I am waiting to see it.
update soon.


thank you so much dear
Lips sealed about the future

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu1299

aww anabh di

what to say ??
this os is just so amazing...
i mean uday the demon and manyata is a protector...
but hats off to the idea ...
amazingly ossum
loved it to the core
hope that manveer could be one ...
but anyways it was so damn good...
LOVE ANMOL


hey
say the truth 😃
thank you so much
manyata is actually an angle
i am glad that you
liked it so much

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept Anni , very interesting first part. I don't want either Manyata nor Uday to lose. Eagerly awaiting the battle ... ... hope it has a happy ending😉!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome concept Anni , very interesting first part. I don't want either Manyata nor Uday to lose. Eagerly awaiting the battle ... ... hope it has a happy ending😉!


thank you so much barfi jiji
i am glad you liked it
lips completely sealed about it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey!
awesome concept dear
i just loved it
i'm eagerly waiting to read more
please do continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_pooja

hey!
awesome concept dear
i just loved it
i'm eagerly waiting to read more
please do continue soon


thank you so much dear
lips sealed about the second part

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome anni!
I dont mind if u convert it in a ss! ;)
well awesome again
update soon

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