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Part 1 was very cute, I loved how they both met and how he took her to KM straight away... Ram is already mesmerised by her... He must be falling for her already.

Part 2 was very nice... I liked how nuts and Neha were interrogating Priya... And loved nuts teasing Ram. Ram kitna sweet hai... When he speaks to Priya, there's so much care for her, even though he doesn't know her much.

Part 3: I love Ram's caring nature... You have written about it very nicely and it is clear that Ram is worried about her... And you have described Priya's fear very well... And that she is worried about losing her only friend. It was so emotional when she told him about her past :-( I felt so sorry for Priya and also for Ram. I love Neha and nuts... The matchmakers! you put in poetry in this part... Even though it was Neha and Vikram- still very romantic. Priya singing and looking at Ram was cute! I don't like Samar... Very sad that he's found his number :-( hopefully once she meets him she will realise her love for Ram.

Part 4: I felt so bad for Priya when Samar's mother was speaking to her... Very emotional. Very cute that she ran to Ram straight away :-)... I loved nuts and neha's planning... The bit when they meet Samar and his parents abuse her and he just listened was very sad, thank God Ram spoke up for her- that was very sweet of him. Their love confession was very cute :-))


This was a very unique love story... I didn't want it to end :-( I just wanted to carry on reading... All 4 parts were beautifully written and the story progressed very nicely and quickly. Your writing style always impresses me :-) that is why I love reading your work... This was just simply beautiful... I can't praise you enough, because no matter what I say, it will not be enough to appreciate your work... I just love it! 👏 👏 ⭐️ superb OS!! 😊