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SharmiRayaBasu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Jst awsome...really speechless...a cute beautiful perfect story...jst love it... I will miss ur os..so ple start a new ff with ur magical writting asap..i m waiting..infact all we are waiting :-) god bless u..thank u :)

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sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

love the update

end is dramatic. Priya find her love.

Raya are together. cute beautiful ending

waiting for the new one😊

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

I will wait for another such beautiful write up from you 😊

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.sangs123.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

good story dear
keep up the good work
want more of such sweet stories from u
cute and lovely updt

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

too dramatic..

i was confused with the last part very much...

I think You should have shown it still in a better way.. don;t feel bad pls..

whatever i felt i m commenting..my intention is not to hurt u..sorry if so

anyways its good.

thanks

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

part 1

awww something diffrent concept... Ram is so jolly & kindful but Priya is full of mistry anyway why isha is here too... might be bring RaYa close but its awesome to see all of them together & teasing Ram awww loved the dancing part too so megicle with RaYa... might be Priya is here to find her family or among someone from family... let's move on next & find out...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

part 2

awww awesome update yaar Priya is in some sirious problam but happy that Nuts is so jolly here... she loves her bro unconditinally even lots of masti is in her she is too gud yaar awesome update moving on next to read lt's see what happens next...

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

part 3

ohh goes i thought she came here to find her family but Priya was here to find Samar... but Priya feels for Ram she loves Ram not samar when she will understand this... Neha's trick was awesome but kahin toh chuk gaye no worry loveing this update too now moving on next...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

part 4

awww awsome update hai yaar maza aa gaya its too gud & amezing yaar finally RaYa is now together & even happy... loved to see Ram to standing up for Priya... & Priya rejected samar b'coz she loves Ram... but i think u forgot some part to post in the end before Ram confesses his love i felt like this so i told plz take look over it... do write more will be waiting for more in coming days...

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Sumira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

very beautiful story ...

totally loved it ..

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