|| Doosri Baarish Ki Pehli Nazar ||

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey people ! m back with my tiny os!๐Ÿ˜† we all know that a hot cup of coffee is great on a rainy day..but lemme tell what's more exciting! its ICE CREAM ON A RAINY DAY!โค๏ธ here i am sitting as the sky is pouring its heart out, with a big bowl of my fav coffee ice cream(see the mix๐Ÿ˜‰?!?)

i hope u enjoy this OS and connect with it!

Doosri Barish Ki Pehli Nazar


She ran across the road holding a book on top of her head. She looked here and there,except for water and stranded people there wasn't anything interesting right now. Drenched,tired from top to bottom she struggled her way through people. She had to cross another road now. She looked sideways and looked up but something held her back.

She froze. Cars were honking,cycles were changing routes but she stood there unaffected. She saw a man trying to cross the road from the other end. His black shirt was sticking to his body like second skin.He pulled him hair up and looked up. His steps became increasingly smaller until they came to a stop.

The divider ran between them. They stood there trying to make sense. It was raining again. He was wearing black again,and she was transparent in white again. The sky roared again and i guess the feelings built up again.

Oblivious to their surroundings they slowly marched closer. Her hearts were humming a vintage tune. Their nerves stopped transmitting messages,their blood cooled as they came close,their bodies lost sweat out of anticipation.

The sky came crashing over them suddenly. It was scandalous noise,enough to scare an elephant. She ran and clutched his shirt. He held her tightly like she was his. Her head rested on his heart,his hands on her waist. She slowly looked up in embarrassment and let go of his shirt. He reluctantly moved his hands away from her waist.

They looked at each other. Faces covered with rainwater...or tears? As they drowned in each others' eyes,they felt the magic happening again. They felt their hearts beating together in a rhythm again,they felt their souls entwining ..again.

Suddenly she turned and walked away briskly. He hung his head low and later looked up at the pouring sky. It had done it. the rain brought them together for the second time but this time just for 10 mins.

She crossed the road huffily and climbed the footpath. She controlled not looking at him,because she knew she would fall for him if she sees him like this. He turned back and looked at her. Her hair was covering her face but he could still see a bit of her eyes,nose and her pink lips.

He gazed till his eyes grew old. He then walked across the road and reached the other end. He lousily climbed the footpath and walked parallel to her.

They both thought about each other while walking. They felt a strong urge to look at each other. Unable to control,they looked at the same moment. It was PERFECT.

The rain seeping into the soil,their emotions activating their dead heart cells,and the slow-motion eyelock-it was like the first time.

They couldn't suppress a growing smile. They smiled at each other.


In life,there are bonds formed which can never be broken. These two can go on to lead different lives,may fall in love again,get married to other people but let me tell you one thing! A seed is planted in their heart that might not have grown into a tree,but it still shivers when opposed by breeze.

We come across wonderful people, and we fall in love with some of them,sometimes we're lucky sometimes we're not,but that person who took your breath away every time you saw him/her will never leave your heart.


Memories formed when in love, are the best memories of life.

hw was it?? do LIKE and COMMENT!

so the idea for this OS is inspired from a real-life incident..one day i was gazing outside the window of my car while the rest of the people in the car were dozing,the signal was red,so our car was waiting eagerly to push itself through the already created havoc thanks to the rain.

i saw people smiling,laughing some dancing in the rain,some running ,some covering their heads with handkerchiefs, and suddenly my eyes caught this couple. they were standing the horizontal ends of the divider of the 2 lane road looking at each their with sparkling passion. i looked more. they didnt speak,it looked like they had some history. and then they looked down and crossed each others' paths. i knew they loved each other,but couldnt tell it. it really pricked my heart.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its beautiful ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
very nicely written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Likiii!! I loved it! Another brilliant piece by you
Hope that that girl n boy did get to come together irl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Liki liki lovely OS my dear...looved it ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
You just wrote on real life incidence and you've done an amazing job while penning it down..hats off to you โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ

Between nice combination huh..coffee ice cream +rain ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†

Thank you for the OS๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet

WOW Awesome...

Loved It...


thank u soo much!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a beautiful OS!!
I loved it! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Sometimes you don't need words
to speak!!
silence speaks it all
and especially on a rainy day!! hah ๐Ÿ˜†

great job!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya09

its beautiful ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
very nicely written
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Thank u soo much! on cloud nine because of ur comment!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya09

its beautiful ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
very nicely written
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thank u sooo much!
tht was a lovely cmnt!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakuu

Likiii!! I loved it! Another brilliant piece by you

Hope that that girl n boy did get to come together irl


trust me,i wanted to write this tory like u..but couldnt! ur too darn good!! i love ur emo stories man! the best on this forum!๐Ÿ˜ณ
i hope the same too๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
and yes A BIG THANK U !!!!!!!!!!!!
damn m growing incresingly fond of u sakuu!! thank u soo much!!]
mwahhh!!๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...liki...such a beautiful OS...loved it to core...

the feelings of both of them concieved soo beautifully...dat too without any dialogue...

u said it so true...

the best...and fav line of mine in this whole update was...

Memorie formed when in Love, are the best memories in life...


love
Aisha
(ur Aish)

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