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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys...dis is my second os...n all d chappals n tamatoes r welcum...so eneough of my bak bak...so here u go...
MY 4EVER...
so aaj ndc k finals hai n taani nai aai hai so rey taani k ghar pe use lene jata hai n he meets her tauji(tj) down...
tj: aarey rey beta...tum yaha...itne jaldi me kaha jaa rahe ho...????
rey(r): kuch nai sir vo mai taani ko ndc k lia lene jaa raha hu...vo aai nai na ab tak so...
tj: accha toh beta chalo mai bhi tumhare sath ghar chalta hu...breakfast sath me karte hai...badme mai office jaumga n tum n taani ndc k lia jana...thek hai...
r:nai nai sir...actually m thoda jaldi me hu...so mai taani ko le k jata hu...vo vah pe performance hai na hum log ka...
tj: aarey tum toh ags ho na tumhe kaha perform karna hai...team karegi na perform...tum chalo...
rey thinks...ab shayad muje tauji ko sab kuch boldena chahea...hah
r: vo actually sir maine aap se juth bola tha...vo mai bhi ek dancer huh...n mai taani se pyar karta hu...( rey closes his eyes n narrates d whole thing dat how taani told him 2 lie 2 tauji...n how he did fake brkup wid taani n now she came 2 know bout d fake brkup...n she is upset...)n yaa guys mai bolna bhul gai k tauji ne swayam ko apna lia hai n he is ok wid dance so now he dont feel k dance is not a carrier option...
rey closes his eyes aspecting a slap from tauji but d opposite happened...tauji hugged rey...
tj: u know wat rey aaj tum mere nazar me or bhi acche ho gai...agarctumhari jagah koi or hota na toh taani k lia kabhi apne aap ko hurt nai karta...cause i know k taani se brk up kar k tum taani se bhi zyada hurt hue ho...
r: matlab aap ne muje maaf kar dia...
tj: ha kardia...n waise bhi tumne konse galti ki thi k tum mujse maafi maang rahe ho...
rey out of xitetment hugs tauji...
r: ty ty ty sooo much...muje toh paga tha k aap muje slap karenge...
tj: ur welcum n maine tume maaf kia hai taani ne nai kia...so ab taani ko tumhe manana padega...
r: ha...par kaise
tj: vo tum socho par mai tumhe help zaroor karunga...n mind u taani ek baar gussa hote hai na to use manana bahot mushkil hot hai...
r: yaa i know...akhir behen kiski hai...mr swayam shikhawat ki...waise swayam bahar se shant lagta hai par jab uske andar ka volcano jaagt hai na toh koi rok nai pata use...
after 10 mins of thinking...
r: idea...
n he tells d idea 2 tauji...n tj tels him k he wil help him...den tauji goes home 2 talk 2 taani n rey stands out 2 hear deir talk...
tj: taani vo rey apne aap ko samajta kya hai...use kya laga k use jo theek lagega vo karega n badme hum log use maaf kar denge...huh...vaise acchakia jo use maaf nai kia tumne...
Taani(T): aap kya bol rai hai tauji...
Tj: aarey usne muje sab bat dia abhi niche k kaise usne tumse fake brk up kia...n ab tum use maaf nai kar rai ho...
T: kya rey ne aap ko sab bata dia...????
Tj: ha or maine bhi keh dia use k vo tumse duur rahe...or maine use thappad bhi maar dia...
T: kyaaa aap ne unhe thapad kyu maara tauji...kya zaroorat thi...
Tj: aarey aise kaise...zarurat thi beta...rey jaise cheat ko toh or bhi thappad padne chahea...huh...flirt kahi ka...n tume pata hai taani vo toh ro bhi raha tha n keh raha tha k vo tumse bahot pyar karta hai n tumhare bina jee nai paiega but maine uski ek baat nai sune or bhej dia maine use vapas...
T: kya...tauji rey cheat nai hai...
Tj: taani mai jaanta hu k tum dar rai ho na...but tumhe dar ne ki koi zaroorat nai hai...mai hoo na...
Taani gets upset k tauji ko rey pasand nai hai...cause she knows k rey really luvs her a loads...but her anger cums in between...
Next day in college canteen all r present n dey have won ndc...
Simmi(s): guys aaj mai bohot khush hu...
Rinni(rin): infact aaj hum sab khush hai...
(guys rey ab jo bhi bol ra hai n vo us k plan ka part hai...)
Rey(r): par mai nai...vo mere dadi mere shadi k piche padi hui hai...n unhone muje girls k photographs bhi dia hai...
Taani(t): wat aap shadi kar rai hai...hah...
R: ha koi prob hai...
T: nai nai muje ky prob ho sakti hai...m fine kuch nai hua muje...
S: aarey toh photos dekhao na...
R: yaa...here dey r...
(all d boys snatch d pics n see dem...) nil: wow yaar rey ye sab girls kitne hot hai...lucky u...
R: aarey guys muje sab me se na vo payal bohot acche lagi...n vo mere bachpan ki frnd bhi hai...aarey swayam dekh na payal ki pic...
Sw: ha...
( guys swaron 2 knows d plan of rey...)
Sw: aarey ha yaar ye toh bahot acche hai yaar...n swayam shows d pic 2 taani...
All dis while taani is supa jelous + angry...
T: ha ha bahot acche hai...(angryly) karia na is se shadi...
R: aarey mai shadi toh 2-3 saal k vaad karunga...abhi toh bas ladki dekh raha hu...
Taani gets up n leaves...
So guys done wid part 1 next part kal tak post kardungi...pakka n agar its not gud na so u can tell me...no hard feelings frm ma side...pakka...n i know mai bore ho rai thi n i was writing...so its not good...sry...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
awesome os
loved 1st chapter
continue it
and updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
awesome story.
please update next chapter soon.
if possible pm me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Love the first chapter
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
OMG... THIS OS IS REALLY INTERESTING... PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
1st chapter was amazing

Luved rey plan

Plz jldi jdli updt kro...

P.S.-sent u frnd req..plz accept it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update loved it jealous Taani please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So heres d 2nd part of my os...
MY 4EVER...
Taani leaves in anger...
N she talks 2 herself...
T: samajte kya hai rey apne aap ko...shadi karni hai...toh kare na 2 saal bad kyu aaj hi kar de...muje kya...muje koi farak nai padta...muje kya...
(all dis rey was listning as he was following him...n was laughing at her inosence...
R:kitne cute hai...mere cutely wierd taani...
(swaron bhi waha pe the...)
sw: ohh hello...mai bhi yaha pe hu...n mai uska bhai hu...so plz control kar...
r: aarey yaar tu na...hamesha mere romance ki dhajya (nai samja ye word to ignore karo ) uda deta hai...
sh: shut up u both...
r: sry...
sw: me 2 sry...
taani jaa rai hote hai n piche se rey 2 swaron...
r: aarey yaar ye kal kab aaiega...
sw: kyu kal kya hai...
r: aarey kal mai apne payal se milunga...( rey purposly jor se bolta haa so dat taani sune...)
sw: ohh...so tu kal us se milne wala hai...hmm...
Sum 1s blushing hah...
( rey tells 2 swayam softly now...)
r: aarey swayam...i guess kuch zyada hi ho gaya hai yaar mai use or pareshan nai karna chahta yaar bas...
sw: aarey kya bas teko taani ko manana hai na so chup chap natak kar...
r: aarey yaar...
den at nite at taayam house...
tj: aarey beta taani tum kal bol rai thi na k rey cheat nai hai...i guess ur rite...theek keh rai thi tum...
t: kya theek keh rai thi...kuch nai...aap theek keh rai the...rey is a cheet...aap ko pata hai...vo na ab shadi kar rai hai...ladki bhi dekh rai hai...vo hamare brkup se zara bhi affect nai hue...aisa kaise kar sakte hai vo...unki itne himmat...samajte kya hai apne aap ko...
(jus den swayam cums...)
sw: hey taani...ssup...aaj kispe itna gussa aa ra hai mere behen ko...
t: bhai aap toh rehne he dijea...aa na jao us...payal se shadi karvao apne bff rey ki...jao na yahape mere paas kyu khade ho...
sw: aarey ab maine lya kia...ab rey ne muje us ki pic dikhai so maine dekhi n vo sach me acche lag rai thi toh mai juth kaise bolta...she was really gud...
t: or mai...
sw: hah...kuch kaha tumne...(teasing her..)
t:(angrily) ji nahi kuch nai kaha...jao aap apne bff k paas...n rey shadi payal se kare k kise or se muje koi farak nai padta...suna aapne...muje koi farak nai padta...(n she goes in her room banging d door angrily...n all dis rey was listning...ab ye mat puchna k kaha se sun raha tha...bas sun raha tha...)
den rey says...bohot gussa diaa na tumhe maine my luv...but ab or nai...so ur pc is cuming...aage ka mausam romance ka hai...
sw: oh hello tu abhi taani k room me window se jaa raha hai n mai tuje allow kar raha hu bas tani ko manane k lie...or romance vomance kuch karne ni milega...mind u...kuch bhi nai...
r: ha ha mai kaise bhul sakta hu...tu hai na kabab me haddi ban ne k lia...
sw: chup kar...
r: aarey mai toh avai bol raha tha...chal koi nai...chod...ab mai jata hu taani ko manane...
(rey enters taanis room by window...n he sees taani crying...n ya taani ko pata nai hai k rey is there in her room...i know guys ye thod zyad ho gaya...but sry)
t: kyu rey kyu...kyu kia aap ne mere sath aisa...itna aasan tha aap k lie move on karna...
r: no taani bilkul bhi nai...n move on karna bhi kon chat hai...mai toh tumhare sath apne pure life bitana chahta hu...
t: hah...aap yaha kya kar rai h...jaiea na apne payal k sath...karie shadi...
r: so mere taani ko itna sara gussa bhi aata hai...
t: rey leave i dont wanna talk 2 u...get dat...muje aap se koi baat nai karni...n ya aap kise se bhi shadi kare muje koi farak padta...samje aap...
r: maine kab pucha k tume padt hai ya nahi...taani tum ye baat apne dil ko samja rai ho muje nai...n tumhara dil maan nai raha...
t: aisa kuch nai hai...n mai aapse aat bhi kyu kar rai hu...i hate u mr reyansh singhania...i hate u...jus get lost...
she starts crying badly...
r: taani mai chala jaunga toh tum je paogi mere bina...
t: ha
r: no taani...i can assure u nai jee paogi tum...
t: aap ye sab mujse kyu keh rahe hai...aap ko kya farak padta hai mai jiyu ya maru...
now dis was a limit for rey...
r: farak padt hai muje u get dat...i cant live without u...n ye sab drama kia tha maine...tume manane k lie...cause i luv u damn it...i luv u...pyar karta hu tumse...nai reh sakta tumhare bina...
taani ka gussa khatam...
t: to ye sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi rey...u know muje kitna bura laga jab aap us payal se shadi karne ki baat kar rai the...( payal jain...m sachme v sry...i dint mean 2 hurt ur feelings...sry...)
r: i know but agar mai ye nahi karta toh muje tum kaise itne jaldi mil jati...taani i luv u...i really do...
t: luv u 2...
after 10 mins...
t: rey voh aap ko tauji ne thapad mara na...
r: aarey n yaar...ulta jab maine tauji ko sab bola tab unhone muje hug kia...actually ye sab tauji mera n swaron ka plan tha...sry...
t: wat...means tauji ne aap ko apna lia hai...u know wat rey...aaj na mai bohot khush hu...nshe gives a peck on reys cheek...
after cuming out out of shock...
r: taani agar aise rooz muje peck milega na toh mai roz ye sab jar ne k lie tayar hu...
t: stop it rey...
rey hugs taani...
den dey go out...
tj: so maan gai taani...ab bhi rey ki shadi toh hogihe...aur vo bhi 2 saal baad...
r: wat...
tj: ha but taani se...
r: vohooo...dis is d best day of my life...
n he hugs taani...
sw: ohh...hello rey abhi bhi mai yahe pe khada hu or tu shuru ho gaya...
r: aarey yaar tu kab sudhrega...
sw: dats never gonna happen...jijaji...
r: hah phir se bol...
sw: jijaji...
r: aha...luv u saale sahab...
sw: oye rehne de tu...tu bas taani se pyar kar...mere lie mere siron hai...
taani bcums red like tamato...
all d three: so sum 1s blushing hah...
t: aarey plz yaar...aap log ab na...
sw: kk tume concious nai karenge hum loog...n ab raat bbahou ho gai hai...soo jao...
rey leaves n taani accompanies him till d gate...
r: vaise taani mai jab shadi kise or se karne ki baat kar r tha tab tum jelius feel kar rai thi na...
t: nai toh...mai kyu jelous feel karungi...
r: ohh plz...
t: rey plz...ab aap na...
r: kk sry my luv...
rey hugs taani...
t: ab aap jaiea...
r: itne jaldi kya hai...
t: rey...
r: kk ja raha hu...
n taani gives a peck again on reys cheek...
r: hayeee...mai mar java...
taani rushes in d house...
rey messages taani...
r: luv u sweet hrt...gn sd tc...
t: luv u 2 rey...gn...
phew...finally done...thankz for baring me for xis long tym...n aal d chappals r welcum...
thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dears...
d 2nd part of my os is posted...n those who wants me 2 pm dem...plz send me buddy request...plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Superb dear 😛
Amazing update 😃
Update soon and do pm me 😛

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