OS : ASYA and Ayaan..

OS : ASYA and Ayaan..

Am not sure how the PH has planned to unfold ASYA story ahead... Could not stop myself from writing this...

Please do key in your comments...

After Zoya and Ayaan sign the papers, Asad leaves SM... Zoya turns around to find that Asad has left...Zoya's worst nightmare.. Her dad ditching her mother and going away because of which she promised herself that she will not be like her dad.. She will stick to her promise once married...

Zoya's thoughts.. : Aap ne bhi muje chod di Mr. Khan.. mere abbu ki tarah... and she sits down...as though her whole world has come to an end.

Asad's House :

A worried Dilshad, Najma and Imran were waiting for Asad and Zoya.. As Asad walks in,

Dilshad : Asad. .Zoya kahan hai ??

ASad : Apne shohar ke saath.

Dilshad : Kya bakwas kar raheo Asad.. Hosh mein to ho ??

Asad : Ammi.. Zoya aur Ayaan ka nikaah hogaya...

Najma : Bhaijaan yeh sab kaise...

Asad : Please.. mujse koi aur sawal nahi karega..

Haseena Bi and her family also come now to take away Imran and Najma.

Haseena : Dilshad Bi.. Zoya.. phir se bhaag gayi.. Afsos hain muje.. apkeliye...

Asad : Haseena Bi.. Aap jis kaam keliye ayi hain.. woh kaam karke.. jayiye...

Dilshad : Haseena Bi.. Apse darkwaas hain.. aap In dono ko aaj yahi rehne dijiye.. Kal subah inhe bida karenge...

Haseena Bi agrees and returns..

Asad walks to his room and locks himself.. He had been in control not show his feelings in front of others but all alone in his room, he broke down.. He takes out Zoya's earrings and recollects all the sweet moments which they shared earlier...

Asad' thoughts : Shayad mere muqqaddar mein hum dono ko milna likha hi nahin...

SM Mansion :

Everybody had gone to their respective rooms.. Zoya was all alone in the drawing room crying her heart out ...

Shireen and Rashid walks in and look at Zoya's state.. Rashid's heart moved out to Zoya.. In fact who better can understand than him on a forced marriage and also to stay away from beloved...

Shireen : Sab kismat ka luck hain.. is mein kya shak hain.. Mana ki hum nahin chathein the ki tum jaise ladki is ghar ki bahu bane.. lekin kya kar saktein hain...Ab rone se kya fayda.. Galti sirf mere Ayaan ne nahin tumne bhi kiya hain...

Rashid : Shireen.. please chup hojao...

Zoya could not take it any longer and she runs outside to the garden...Rashid follows her...

Rashid : Zoya.. tum muje apne dost manti ho na.. Batao beta.. yeh sab kaise hua.. please batao.. Aise roti rahogi to Zindagi bhar dukh jhelna hoga.. Tum shayad ab samaj sakti ho ki bina pyar ke nikaah kaise hoti hain.. Main tumhari halath samaj sakta hoon.. lekin tumhe himmat se sab samna karna padega.. batao yeh sab kaise hua...

Ayaan also comes over to the garden and joins Rashid and Zoya...

Ayaan narrates his part of the story on how he landed up over there and how he had to hide himself as a dulha behind the sehara...

Rashid : Zoya.. tum batao.. tum wahan kaise pounchi ??

Zoya narrates how she got suspicious of Tanveer and Imran and about how Tanveer tried to kill her and how she landed up in the community hall..

Rashid : Lekin maulvi saab ko tum dono ka naam kaise malum hua ??

This question strikes as a lightning to both Ayaan and Zoya..

Zoya : Shayad aap teek keh rahein hain...Rabert.. subah hote hi.. humein wahan jana chahiye...

Rashid : Nahin... Aaj itna kuch hogaya hain.. us committee walon nahin manenge.. humein hoshiyari se kaam lena hoga...

Ayaan : Abbu.. shayad.. ek joda wahan nahin aye the. Jinke jagah par hum dono bait gaye the...

Zoya : Lekin dukh ki baat yeh hain.. ki main jaan bachakar jabtak ghar ponchi.. tab tak Imran aur Najma ka nikaah ho chuka tha...aur mein nahin chathi thi.. ki Najma ke kushi ye sab kehkar barbad karoon...

Rashid and Ayaan were moved looking at Zoya's love for Asad and family...

Rashid : Kam se kam Asad ki zindagi barbad hone nahin denge.. Hum sab taikikat karenge aur sabhit kardenge ki jo bhi hua sab anjane mein tha.. aur yeh nikaah asli nahin hain...Chalo beta.. ab tum kuch khana khalo aur araam karo...

Zoya : Mere kapde.. kuch bhi to nahin layi hoon...

Ayaan : Mein Nikhat ke kapde lekar aoonga.. chalo Zoya.. haan lekin is ghar mein jeans nahin milega...

Zoya : Aaj ke liye to teek hain... lekin tum jakar mere kapde lao Mr. Khan ke ghar se...

Ayaan : Nahin. Mein Bhaijaan ko mooh nahin dikha sakta hoon...

Rashid : Zoya.. mein chala jata hoon.. ya hum Zoya keliye naye kapde lekar ayenge...

Sleep was away for Zoya.. .. Even though she was missing Asad a lot.. She was not happy with him because he had not given her time to explain why this happened nor did he stand by her side ... but had she not done the same thing when she had seen Asad and Tanveer together.. Asad is a man of principles... : Mr. Khan... Muje yakeen hain allah is bar bhi humari madath karega...

Khan Mansion :

Dilshad : Asad..please darwaza kholo beta.. muje tumse baat karni hain...

After repeated requests from Dilshad, Asad opened the door...His eyes had become blood red .. He was looking very shaken...He hugged his ammi and started crying... : Ammi.. yeh sab mere saath hi kyun ho raha hain ammi.. kyun ??

Dilshad : Asad.. pehle batao.. hua kya hain ??

Asad explained whatever he heard from Ayaan and Asad, about Nikhat's attempted suicide ...

Dilshad : Asad.. kya tumne ye janneki koshish ki.. Ayaan aur Zoya wahan kaise pounche ??

Asad : Jaise bhi ho ammi.. Nikaah to hogaya hain...

Dilshad : Asad.. nahin beta.. shanthi se socho.. Zoya bina koi kaaran ghar chodke nahin ja sakti hain.. yaad karo.. Zoya ne aneke baad kuch to kaha hoga...

Asad remembers what Zoya told... : Ammi.. Zoya kehrahi ti.. ki unhe.. Imran aur Tanveer ke bharein mein kuch malum hogaya tha aur woh nahin chathi thi.. ki Najma ka Zindagi barbad ho.. isliye.. who kahin gayi thi.. bus... agge kuch sunne ka mauka hi nahin hua..

Dilshad : Tanveer.. Asad.. muje bahut tension ho rahi hain..hum sab jante hain.. Tanveer kitni buri ladki hain.. usne tumhare saath kitna kuch kiya tha.. aur Zoya ki jaan lene ki koshish bhi kahin baar kit hi... Lagta hai.. Tanveer is baar bhi kuch ganda khel khela hain...

Asad : Lekin ammi.. ab Ayaan aur Zoya ka nikaah hogaya hain...

Dilshad : Please Asad... Tum aise kaise kar sakthe ho.. tumhare abbu ne muje chod kar chalegaye.. is mushkil gadi mein tumne bhi Zoya ka saath chod diya .. aur use wahan chodkar agaye...

Asad : Ammi.. mein zaroor sach janke rahoonga.. mein Zoya ke saath kuch aur galat hone nahin doonga...

Next Day :

Rashid visits the community hall and he intelligently gets a copy of the previous day's video coverage..from the administration office..

After reaching home, he calls Zoya and Ayaan and takes to Ayaan's room... They watch the video closely.. They could see how Zoya and Ayaan and hid from the goons and sat in the altar.. but still proof was missing on how the maulvi had got to know about the names... After watching the video again, something caught Zoya's eyes...

Zoya : Ya allah... !! rewind karo Rabert...

When they watched closely, they could see in the background that Tanveer had called the maulvi and had pointed to Ayaan and she had also looked towards Zoya and that evil smile was on her face...

Rashid : Tanveer.. aise kyun Asad aur Zoya ke peeche padi hui hain...?? Mein maulvi sahab ko yaha lekar atha hoon.. unhe bhi yeh dhikayenge...

Ayaan : Nahin abbu... aap mamu ko jante hain na.. woh yeh sab hone nahin denge.. unhe samaj mein apne naam aur izzat ki badi hemiyat hain...

Rashid : To ab kya karein ??

Zoya : Apko Mr. Khan ko ye sab batana chahiye ... Tanveer.. kisi bhi tarah unse nikaaah karna chathi hain.. mein nahin chathi ki Mr. Khan phir se us Tanveer ke changul mein fase...

Ayaan : Chaliye abbu.. hum abhi Bhaijaan ke ghar chaltein hain...

Asad's House :

Asad had managed to freshen up and come out.. since Haseena Bi's family would be coming to take Najma and Imran...Dilshad was feeling for Asad for what he was going through.. but she did not know how to help... Tanveer entered Asad's house when mother-son were trying to console each other...

Dilshad : Tanveer .. tum yahan ? Tumhari himmat kaise hui.. is ghar mein aneka...

Tanveer : Khala.. itna gussa teek nahin apne honewali bahu par...

Asad :Kya bakwas kar rahi ho ?? Chali jao yahan se...

Tanveer : Tum ab muje bahar nikal nahin sakte ho Asad.. jante ho kyun ?? and she hands over her pregnancy DNA report...

Asad looked shocked looking at it.. Dilshad snatched the letter and read it.. She immediately slapped Tanveer ...

Dilshad : Tum mere bacchon ke peeche kyun ho ?? chathi kya ho ??

Tanveer : Asad.. Mein chathi hoon.. ki Asad mujse nikaah karle... Nahin to yeh mein Najma ko batadoongi.. aur aap jante hain.. ek hi din mein apki beti ka zindagi barbad hojayega.. aur haan.. zoya ne bahut koshish ki thi.. Najma ka nikaah rokne ki.. lekin apne jaan bach ke yahan anetak.. nikaah to hogaya...

Asad : Tumne phir se Zoya ko marne ki koshish ki.. aur tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho.. ki main tumse nikaah karloonga ??

Tanveer : Karna padega Asad.. Zoya ko is duniya se bhej nahin payi.. lekin hamesha keliye tumhare zindagi se to nikal diya ...aur agar mein Najma ki zindagi kharab na karoon to tumhe mujse nikaah karna hi padega...

Lot of thoughts were going on in Asad's mind.. : Yeh sab Tanveer ki chal thi.. Is bar Zoya ko mohara banaya.. aur meine.. Zoya ko.. He could not take all this any more.. He fell down holding his head with his hands...

Najma who had heard everything.. could not hold herself and ran to her brother... : Bhaijaan aap teek hain ??

Dilshad : Najma.. tum teek ho beta...

Imran also came down hearing all the voices and Haseena bi's family also enter Khan Mansion...

Najma : Imran.. yeh sab kya hain.. aur tumne yeh sach hum sab se chupake rahi...

Imran puts his down.. while Haseena Bi's family was confused and could not understand what was going on...

Dilshad : Imran.. please sach kya hain batao...

Imran narrated the whole story.. Haseena Bi was shocked and she did not have any words.. She was scared to even look at Asad for all the drama which she had created the previous day and now her son's past had come as a rock and hit her...

Tanveer : Chalo.. accha hua.. sab ko sach patha chalgaya...agar aap chathe hain ki mein Imran ke kilaaf police mein complaint na karoon.. to Asad ko mujse nikaah karna hi hoga...

Rashid , Ayaan and Maulvi sahab enter the house..

Rashid : Yeh hum hone nahin denge...

Tanveer got worried looking at the maulvi...

Rashid : Maulvi sahab.. sach kya hain.. in sab ko batayiyen...

Maulvi.. : Dekhiye.. humse bhi galti hogayi hain.. humein maaf kardijiye.. Kal community hall mein saath jode ka nikaah ho raha tha... Sathva joda ka naam Zoya Fareed aur Zafar tha... Zafar .. nikaah mein paunch nahi paya kyunki uska accident hogaya hain.. aur Zoya Fareed shayad phone karnekeliye bahar chaligayi thi.. Rashid sahab se patha chala ki Zoya Farooqui aur Ayaan Ahmed Khan ghondon se bachke wahan agaye the aur chip gaye the.. Us waqt muje yeh mohataram mili... ( pointing towards Tanveer) .. aur inhone kahan.. ki Ayaan Ahmed Khan jaise unche ghar ka ladka is community hall mein nikaah kar raha hain.. to hum sab maulvi ko bahut kushi hogayi.. aur nikaah nama pada.. lekin.. ladki ka naam Zoya Fareed tha.. aur in dono se baat karke yeh patha chala ki dono phone pe baat kar rahein the.. isliye woh nikaah jayaz nahin hain.. Humari wajah se aap sab ko takleef hui.. humein maaf kardijiye...aur kal jo bhi nikaah nama pe dastakath kiya.. wahan bhi ladki ka naam galat tha..

Asad : Ayaan.. shukriya.. mere bhai.. tum nahin jante ki tumne kya kiya hain mereliye.. Zoya kahan hain...??

Rashid : Asad beta.. tumhari Zoya ko hum sahi salamat leke ayenge...

Tanveer : Nahin.. mein yeh sab nahin hone doongi...

Rashid : Tanveer tum pagal hogayi ho.. Tum kya samaj thi ho.. ki tum mere bacchon par itna zulam karti rahogi aur mein yeh sab chup chap dekhta rahoonga.. nahin.. Maulvi sahab ki bayan se.. aur video recording se hum tumhe jail bhejenge.. aur haan tumne Zoya ko jaan se marne ki bhi koshish ki.. tumhe kadi si kadi saza milegi...

Ayaan had called up police as well when he saw Tanveer in Asad's house.. She was trapped in her own trap.. Police arrested Tanveer and took her away...

Najma : Bhaijaan.. Nikaah to hochuka hain..Imran ke saath.. uski yeh galti maaf karke.. apnaoongi... Zoya mereliye itna kuch sehgayi.. lekin apne uske barein mein bina sochke ghar se door kar diya.. Please jaake Zoya ko wapis le ayiye...

Haseena Bi : Najma.. shukriya beta.. mere bte ki galti ko maaf karke.. meri ankhein bhi khol diya...

Najma : Ammi.. aap please Nikhat aur Farhaan bhai ke nikaah jald se jald karvadena...

Asad thanked his abbu for giving him the most precious gift in his life.. Zoya though was angry with Asad.. melted as soon as she saw him back in SM to take her back...

She ran towards him and hugged him .. She knew this was the only place she belongs to ... and both of them thanked allah for blessing them yet again with each other ...

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Very nice story but afsos ki show me aisa nahi hoga

This is how it shud happen 👍🏼

even though, i didn't understand the parts written in hindi, since i speak spanish and english but i must say BRILLIANT, this writers should learn from you, it has drama and romance without being so exaggerated with twists hahha...Once again bravo, bravissimo 👏 👏

Wow 👏 Perfect. Everything has happened in a logical way without anything being exaggerated! I loved it!

It was absolutely what this forum needed😃
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