Asya OS:Galti Ka Ehsaas.

As much I dislike the current track I am very much impressed by the acting skills of the cast specially SJ(I have always loved Zoya more than Asad.😛)I really want Asad to realize that Zoya is not a commodity to be given to anyone according to his will and no one other than dilshad can explain this to him.So here goes my thought on how I want the scene to play out.The scene starts when Zoya ran out of SM with Asad following her.

Asad:Yeh kya harkat hai Zoya?Maine aapse kaha tha na ki aap is ghar mein rahengi fir aap vahan sabke samne se aise kaise bhaag ke aa gayi?

Zoya:Mr,Khan please...(sob) mujhe vahan (sob) mujhe vahan nahi rehna..aap please mujhe apne sath (sob) vapis le jaiye...(sob)...mai aapke bina nahi reh sakti Mr. Khan (sob) please..(sob)

Asad:Zoya, bat ko samajhne ki koshish karo.Nikhat ki haalat bhot naazuk hai.Apko uske liye yahan rehna hi hoga.Aur fir bas thode hi din ki baat hai ek baar nikhat ka nikah ho jaye fir hum vapis sath mein ho jaenge.Mujhe bhi bohat takleef ho rahi hai yeh sab karte hue par yeh sab karna bohat zaruri hai.

Zoya:MR.Khan par yeh nikaah ek galti hai.Mujhe to kuch pata bhi nahi chala.Mai to aapse phone pe baat kar rahi thi aur fir quazi sahib ne kaha k nikah ho gaya.Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

She starts crying uncontrollably.

Asad:Par aap vahan phonchi kaise?

Zoya thought that she could not tell Asad about Imran ans Tanveer right now as it will create more problems.

Zoya:Vo Mr.Khan tanveer ke gunde mere piche pade they aur mai vahan apni jaan bachane ke liye gayi thi.Fir maine vahan ek dulhan ko kehte suna k uska hone vala shauhar abhi tak nhi aya hai to maine socha mai uski jagah pe baith jau tanki un gundo ko mujhpe shak na ho pr mujhe nahi pata tha k dusri side ayaan baitha hai.Aur fir nikaah kab hua yeh to mjhe samajh hi nahi aya.

Asad(angry):Tanveer?par tanveer fir se apke piche kyun padhi hai?aap use mili kaise?

Zoya:Yeh important nahi hai Mr.Khan ki Tanveer mujhe kaise mili Important yeh hai k mujhe yahan nahi rehna.Mujhe aapke sath rehna hai.Mai nahi rahungi yahan.

Asad:Dekho Zoya rehna to aapko yahin padega.

Zoya:Lekin Mr.Khan...

Asad:Agar aap mujhse mohabbat karti hain to aap yahan rehne se inkaar nahi karengi.Nikhat ke nikaah hone tak aapko yahi rehna hai ayaan ki biwi banke.Suna aapne?

On getting no reply from Zoya he takes her inside SM once again and leaves her there.He moves out of the house without even glancing back at Zoya while zoya keeps looking longingly towards the door.

He enters Khan Villa to see Dilshad and Najma crying in the living room while Imran was consoling them.As soon as they see Asad entering Dilshad rushed towards him and bombarded him with questions.

Dilshad:Kahan they tum Asad?Is tarah mehmano ke bich mein se Zoya ko le ke jaane ka kya matlab hai?Aur Zoya?Zoya kahan hai?

Asad:Ammi Zoya vahan hai jahan use hona chahiye tha.Us ghar mein.

Dilshaad:Us ghar mein?Zoya us ghar mein kya kar rahi hai?

Asad:Ammi mai use vahan chod k ayah u qki agar mai aisa nahi karta to haseena bi farhan se nikhat ka rishta todh deti aur fir nikhat apni jaan dene ki koshish karti.Nikhat ki jaan bachane k lie mujhe yeh sab karna pada.

Dilshad:Asad tum yeh sab kya keh rahe ho meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Asad explains everything to Dilshad about Zoya and Ayaan's accidental wedding and Haseena bi's condition.

Dilshad:Ya allah,Yeh ladki baahar gayi hi kyun?Ab kitni badi museebat mol le li isne.Aur tum Zoya ko vahan kyun chod ke aye?Agar yeh nikah galti se hua hai to annulment kara sakte hain.Haseena bi se baat karenge hum sab milke.

Asad:Ab kuch nahi ho sakta ammi.Mai Nikhat se bhi utna hi pyaar karta hu jitna Najma se aur mai uski khushion k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu.Zoya ko us ghar mein rehna hi padega ayaan ki biwi ban ke jab tak nikhat ka nikaah nahi ho jaata.

Dilshad:Zoya maan gayi is baat ke liye maan gayi?

Asad:Mani to nahi hai par manna padega unhe.Unhe vahin rehna hoga.

Dilshad:Bilkul sahi kaha Asad tumne aise kaise nahi manegi vo.Manna padega use.After all vo tumhri jageer(commodity) hai aur tum use kiraye pe dena chahte ho to kyun nahi manegi vo?Bilkul manna chahie.

Asad:Ammi aap yeh kya keh rahi hain?Aap aise kyun bol rahi hain.

Dilshad:Kyun Asad?Kya galat bola maine?Tum khud hi to apni mangetar ko apne chote bhai ko kiraye pe deke aye ho apni behen ke liye kyunki tum apne sab bhai behno se bohat mohabbat karte ho aur zoya ka kya hai vo to bechari tumhari baat manegi hi.

Asad:Ammi aisa nahi hai aap galat samajh rahi hain.

Dilshad:Toh kaisa hai Asad?samjhao mujhe.Tum Zoya ko uski marzi ke khilaf us ghar mein chod k aye qki tum nikhat ki zindagi bachana chahte they.Ayaan ne zoya ko apni biwi maan liya qki vo nikhat ka rishta karvana chahta tha.Isme Zoya ki marzi kahan hai?Uski marzi puchna to choro tum dono ne milke use ek chiz bana ke rakh diya.Mai manti hu Zoya ko aaj k din baahar nahi jana chahie tha uski galti hai lekin uski galti itni badi nahin hai k tumlog use itni badi saza de rahe ho.VO ro rahi thi tadap rhi thi ke use vahan nahin jana tab bhi tum use vahan chod k aye ya fir mai kahun kiraye pe deke aaye.Waah Asad waah kya mohabbat hai tumhari.Socha hai tumneki Zoya k dil pe kya beet rahi hogi jab tum dono mil k yeh tay kar rahe they k Zoya kahan rahegi.Aj tumne mujhe bhot nirash kiya hai asad bohat.

Saying this she leaves for her room.Asad now realizes the gravity of his decision and how much it must have hurt Zoya.He desperately wanted to speak to Zoya.Its true that he left her there but he was missing her so much.It took him a lot of courage to leave that house without even glancing back at Zoya.He decided top call Zoya immediately.

At SM:

Zoya went to the guest room after a long argument that she wont stay with ayan in the same room.Obviously Rashid supported her and even Razia because she had her own reasons and ayaan also didn't want to share the saem room as Zoya.So gaffur decided to handle this matter afterwards and till then send zoya to the guest room.Zoya was completely broken after what Asad did today.She felt like a commodity.She did not expect Asad to deal with the situation like this and give into ayaan's demands.she knew that his siblings were important to him but the fact that hurt her the most was that he didn't even ask for her consent.She was lost in the thoughts of Asad when her cell phone rang and she saw the caller Id and was surprised to see Asad calling.She picked up the call but didn't say anything.Both of them remain silent for a while until Asad spoke.

Asad:Zoya...aap thik to hain?

Zoya:Hmmm

Asad:Naraaz hain mujhse?

Zoya:Nahin.

Asad:Zoya I am Sorry.

It was becoming hard for zoya to conyrol her tears now so she decided to make an excuse.

Zoya:Aap sorry kyun bol rahe hain mai naraz nahi hu aapse.Mere sir mein dard hai mai aapse baad mein baat karungi.

Asad:Sir mein dard?Aap thik to hain na?Bukhar to nahin hai kahin?Aapne koi dawai li?Kisi ko bataya aapne ki aapki tabiyat kharab hai?Kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai aap thik hai na?

Zoya:Aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain Mr.Khan?Ek taraf aap meri itni fikr kar rhe hain aur dusri taraf meri zindagi ka itna bada faisla lene se pehle aapne ek bar bhi nahi pucha mujhse?

Asad:Zoya mai jaanta hu k aap mujhse naraz hai.Ghar aake ammi ne mujhe ehsas dilaya k maine kitni badi galti ki hai.Par mai sach keh raha hu zoya mujhe aisa khyal bhi nahi ths k yeh baat apko itni chot phonchaegi.

Zoya:Mai naraaz nahi hu Mr.Khan par mujhe is baat se bohat chot phonchi hai k apne meri marzi ko is tarah nazarandaaz kiya.Aaj ayaan ne aapse mujhe manga nikhat ke liye aapne de diya kal koi aur kisi aur vajah se mangega aap tab bhi de denge.Is sab mein meri zindagi ki kya importance hai Mr.Khan.

After saying she starts crying uncontrollably.

Asad:Nahi Zoya aisa nahi hai.Mai aisa kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta aisa karna to door ki baat hai.

Zoya:Par aapne na hi sirf aisa socha par aisa kiya bhi hai.Aj ayaan hai to kal koi aur kyun nahi ho sakta.Aapne mujhe bohat chot phonchayi hai Mr.Khan.

Asad:I am sorry Zoya.Please mujhe maaf kar do.Please aise mat bolo.

Zoya:MR.Khan mujhe is bare mein aur koi bat nahi karni hai.

Asad:Apna dhyan rakhna please.Time pe khana kha lena aur sir dard k liye dawai bhi le lena.Mai subah phone karunga abhi tum aaram karo.Aur please rona amt hum jald hi sath honge n I am sorry once again.

Zoya :Jee.

Asad:I love you Zoya.

Zoya:Hmm...Aap bhi apna khyal rakhiega aur phupi ka bhi.Rakhti hu bye.

Asad:Bye.

So this is it guys.Please ignore the typos.Please give your views.All the criticism is accepted 😊😊

Please please please tell me that you are continuing it😳😳😳 its beatutiful👏

i want it to happen in the show!

Awesome!! I wish this happens in the show.. :)

awesome👏

Aaahaan!! i thought ki zoya phn no pick up ni karengi!!

It should happen lyk this and zoya shouldnt forgive him easily.

Good one.. Liked it.. I am waiting to see how it turns out to be in the serial.. Asad acted according to what he felt was correct.. since everybody believes the nikaah has taken place... but yes agreed he should have not forced her or dragged her out of his house without her permission...