VruShan OS : DDLJ (BOLLYWOOD SERIES part 4)RELIVE THE MAGIC !!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vrushan os : dilwale dulhaniya le jayenge

Heyloo peeps , after a long time m back wid the fourth movie of the Bollywood series m relly sorry for being so late wid this one hope this Bollywood series is not brain washed from your memories fir bhi it's a request for those who haven't read vrushan ki javaani hai deewani

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3695556/vrushan-os-vrushan-ki-jawaani-hai-deewani

to read it to connect wid situation n get the flow , aage its totally upto you , thanks for tolerating the talk !

So now get ready to fall in love all over again wid lovestory which screened hearts of people for many years , the magic of mustard fields ...in the era of 1995s DDLJ ... the remarkable scenes ... wid Raj n simran starring shaantanu and vrushika ...

Lest start from where it ended last tym

Vru : tum samajhte kyu nahi ki agar mai tumhare saath do minute aur rahi toh!!!

Sha : toh kya vrushika ??

Vru : mujhe tumse pyar ho jayega ...phirse

Mujhe tumse yar hogaya hai ...

I love u shaantanu

His heart skipped a beat hearing that ! he stood stunned at the place , but suddenly ...

Vru : phhh hahaha hahahahahahaha ...hahahahahahahaa!!!

Zara aapna chera toh dekho , tum samjhe ki mai sach keh rahi hun , samjhe naa ...aare kamaal hai shantanu kamaal hai , tum mujhe itne dino se jaante ho lekin aabhi tak mujhe pehchaan nahi paye , yaad hai maine kaha tha ki mai aaj tak kabhi serious nahi hui hun ...Hahahaha

Sha : u r just too much , itna peeneko kisne kaha tha !!! look at urself drunk drooly doll .

Vru : mai drunk , mai drunk haan se I can stand stttrrraight !(trying to balance )

Sha : sambhalke !!

Vru : shhh chup , ek dum chup , mujhe bol raha hai ... u stand still n show me .

Sha : aree pa..

Vru : statue !

He freezes for a while , she walks up to him extends her arms on his shoulders n ties a knot wid hands around him , she steps closer n closer , brings her lips near his ears and

Vru : hmmm...hmmm...hmmm lalalalala ...lalalalalaaa

Zara sa jhoom loon main

Sha : Arey na re na re na

(swinging from this shoulder to that)

Vru: Zaraa sa ghoom lu main

Sha: Arey na re na re na

(catching his face tight close to her face )

Vru :Aa tujhe choom lu main

Sha :Arey na re baba na

(she freede herself n ran )

Vru : Main chali.. banke hawa... catch me shantanu

Sha : Rabba mere.. menu bacha...abbey ruk kaha bhaag rahi hai

She ran n climbed the queens necklace elevation , was about to slip from top when he catched her hand n pulled her back in his arms.

Vru : Thandi thandi pawan

Jalta hai yeh badan

Ji chaahta hai bana loon

Tujhko apna sajan

Hua nahin yeh pehle kabhi

Meri chaal

Badal gayi abhi, abhi

Main chali.. banke hawa..

Sha : Rabba mere.. menu bacha.. , firse bhaag gayi ...kitna bhaagegi ...ruk tu aab mai tujhe dekhta hoon .

He runs as fast as he can to cover up the distance n clutches her wrist from back !

Sha : jaati hai tu kaha

Turns her around n grabs her from back (smell the coffee scene)

Sha : jaaneman jaan-e- jaa

Slides his fingers down her face

Sha : ladki hai tu khoobsurat ..ladka mai naujavan

pulls her tight !! her eyes pop up

sha : Tujhe, gale laga loon aa

Palkon mein tujhe basaa loon aa

Leaves her at once n walks back some steps taking his hands in air

Sha : hogayaaa mujhe nashaaa

Vru : rabba mere menu bacha

He again walks towards her

Sha : aab bol zara sa jhoom lu mai

Vru : Na re na re na

Taking a round around her

Sha : zara sa jhum lu mai

Vru : Na re na re na

Suddenly sticks his fore head on hers getting near her nose

Sha : aa tujhe chum lu mai

She squeezes her eye brows in fear

Vru : Na re baba na

He turns his head other way round still sticking to her forehead

Sha : hogaya mujhe nasha

Vru : rabba mere menu bachaaa ...

Sha : hmm so , kaisa laga !

Vru : aacha laga

Sha : AACHA LAGA !

Vru : oh...wait... wat... no I mean gana aachaa laga ..

Sha : oh ok ! ghar jana hai , vaise its not too late just 3 am in morning .

Vru : late hogaya hai naa... Ghar jaate hai

Sha : oye tumhara ghar iss taraf hai ..

Vru : oh yaa , tum jao mai chali jaungi ..

Sha : hmm dikh raha hai plus ghar pe bhi koi nahi hai tumhare plus tumne bohot zyada chada bhi li hai plus ...

Vru : bass ...

Sha : kya bass ,chalo I will have to drop u.

Vru : MUMMY !(squecking dat she bumped on his chest )

Sha : kya hua ?

Vru : cha ..cha...chuha !!!

Sha : aise bade bade shero mein ayesi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai senorita , iv mein toh bade dolle dikha rahi thi , chuhe se darr gayi !

Vru : dollo ka chuho se kya connection , chuhe aur kutte dono bhi dangerous hote hai !

Sha : but peechle kuch ghanto se toh yeh lag raha hai ki tum unse zyada dangerous ho , now plzz lets move .

He manages to catch a rickshaw (I noe many r laughing , Mumbai mei raat ke teen baje rickshaw dhundna bhagwaan dhundne ke barabar hota hai , but dhundne se toh bhagwaan bhi mil jate hai rickshaw kya cheez hai .)

Finally they reach her house , n by the time she had reached her dreams !

Sha : vrushika uutho !

No resonse !!! as expected

Sha : vrushika ke doolo ka toh pata nahi but mere toh dolle zarur ban gaye hai issko uthate uthate !

Yes he picked her up n soon they were out of her house .

Sha : vrushika station aagaya uutho !

Vru : she opened her eyes n found herself in his arms , n if u r thinking that she was thinking of getting down then u r thinking wrong !!she pulled out some keys form her pocket n handed it to him not giving a darn to get down n open her own house , bechara tannu he managed to open the house some how , find her room n lay her on bed , he called his sister n told he had to stay back for shooting n over stayed at vrushi's house . he slept on sofa nearby her bed .(I noe its getting swaronish , yet tolerate me ).next morning she woke up , n she woke up wid earth on her head , she was that heavy headed .

Vru : gosh , why m I soo dizzy n heavy .

In no tym she saw shantanu sleeping on sofa , but not being in condition to walk , she called him out .

Vru : shantanuuu , wake up , wats happening , why m I so heavy , wat r u doing here, wats going on .

He was forced to wake wid those questions banging his head like GHANTA !

Sha : wohoho hang on wait for a sec ?

Vru : shantanu , mai yaha kaise aayi ?

Sha : mere saath kal raat ko hehe , mujhe lagta hai tumne pehle kabhi nahi pe

Thodi si zyada ho gayi...

Vru : kal raat kya hua shantanu ?!!

Sha: kal raat ...kal raat vohi hua vrushika jo hona chahiye tha ..magar iss tarha hoga mujhe maalum nahi tha ..

Vru : plzz thik thik batao shantanu kal raat kya hua !!

Sha : iss sawaal ka javab mai kaise dun simran .. dekho meri aankho mein dekho ...kya meri aankhe sab sach sach nahi keh rahi ??

Vru : nahi , nahi

Sha : aab honi ko kaun taal sakta vrushika ...

Vru : plzzz nahi tum..

Sha : hey hey hey relax , I meant tum mere saath hi thi , just dat u were drunk I dropped u home .

Vru : hun hunnn mummy ...

Sha : hey hey , plzz vrushika rona mat vrushika , mere pass koi aur chara nahi tha issliye mai tumhe aise leke aaya , I swear mai tum yaha bistar pe soi thi aur mai vaha akela soya tha ... vrushika ...vrushika listen to me vrushika .

Vru : tum tum itne acche kyu ho , n kal raat jis tarha mai behave kar rahi thi , I I m relly sorry , tum bohot seedhe ho agar tumhari jagha koi aur hota toh ...

Sha : mai ek Hindustani hun , aur mai jaanta hun ki ek hindustaani ladki ki izzat kya hoti hai .. now stop crying .

Vru : I don't noe how to thank you for yesterday , though I remember a bit of wat happened yesterday n m relly sorry for that , but usske aage it was all coz of u m here safe n sound . agar tum chate toh beech raaste mujhe chod sakte the but u ..

He takes her hand

Sha : zindagi ke har mod par tumhe do raaste milenge

Ek sahi ek galat

Galat raasta bohot aasan hoga tumhe apni taraf khichega , aur sahi raasta bohot mushkil hoga ussmein bohot si musibate bohot si pareshaniya hongi, agara tum galat raste par chaloge toh ho sakta hai ki tumhe shurvaat mein boht khushiya mile par anth mein haar meri hoti , I would have felt ashamed of myself ! lekin agar sahi raasto pe chaloge toh bhale kadam kadam pe mujhe thokre mile musibato ka saamna karna pade , tumhara saamna karna pade par aanth mein hamesha meri jeet hogi !

Vru : hah ..thanks .

Sha : any thing any time for u , now stop crying .

Vru : hmm , now wat next , we still have a day to go .

Sha : kal DDLJ chut gaya tha naa , toh chalo aaj jate hai .

Vru : yeah finally , Maratha mandir here we come ...

They get ready n finally reach the theater ON TIME !!!

Sha : tumhe kuch chahiye

Vru : popcorn samosa soft drinks wafers n haan chocolates off course .

Sha : dukaan reh gaya ussko bhi uthake laata hun .

Vru : dena nahi thou cha kyu !

Sha : shaanti theater hai , ruk lata hun !!

Vru : aree jaldi karo

Sha : maine bola na puri dukaan uthne mein time lagega !!

Vru : very funny !

They catched their seats n he was kinda busy managing her food ! .

Vru : movie chalu hone wali hai .

Sha : dikh raha hai vrushika .

Vru : national antem khade ho

Sha : apna khana apne pass rakh fir khade hone bolna !

Vru : baith jaa anthem khatam ho gaya

Shantanu was pissed of by now n she was enjoying seeing him irritated .

Sha : kripaya karke mujhe pe kam aur picture pe dyan dijiye .

The movie started n eventually was taking pace , taking pace in her heart , taking pace in her feelings , taking pace in her emotions , wat happened suddenly she could see herself in the movie .

Vru : wait yeh kaise ho gaya , shantanu tumhe bhi vahi dikh raha hai jo mujhe dikh raha hai ???

Sha : nahi nahi , ek screen pe do alag alag movies dikha rahe hai , off course mai bhi DDLJ hi dekh raha hun !

Vru : nahi I mean ..

Sha : I noe wat u mean stop pulling me n watch the movie .

She slowly could relate herself to simran , all those memories spent wid him revived as watched her own life witin the movie .

mere khwabo mein jo aaye ... aake mujhe ched jaaye

use kaho kabhi saamne toh aaye

n suddenly her head turned towards him .

sirf vrushika iss illusion ki victim thi , nope he was in the same land too.

Ruk jaa ohh dil deewani puchu toh mai zara

Ladki hai yaa hai jaadu khusboo hai yaa nasha

Pass voh aye toh chuke mai dekhu zara ...

Yesterday nite screened his eyes during the song n he slightly adored her wid a smile !

N now came the mustard fields , the love breeze , the epic scene .

Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana swayam oops sanamm

Pyar hota hai deewana sanam

Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanamm...

Shivers ran down her spine , he was moved , they had it mutually widin themselves . both shifted a bit towards each other . the song had its magical effect on them , the blissfull scenes flew them to other land .

Tu saamne lalala baithi rahe lalala mai tujhe dekha karu

Tune aawaz di dekh mai aagayi pyar se hai badi kya kasam

Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam ...

Lastly the train sequence simran running to catch raj's hand n hugs him , exactly same she had experienced when they were saving there lives from the thieves n she ran behind the train n finally hugged him in excitement of victory . they movie ended n both had a broad smile at the end remembering their story .

They silently walked out of the theater , not knowing wat to talk.

All that ran through their mind was

Najane mere dilko kya hogaya aabhi toh yahi tha abhi kho gaya ...

Why were they so similar to raj n simran , wat connected their lives wid the movie soo much.

ittefak ya universe ji ke ishaare yeh batane ke liye ki

hogaya hai tujhko toh pyar sajnaa

laakh karle tu inkaar sajnaa

dildar sajna , hai yeh pyar sajnaaa...

she tried to hide it n broke the silence

vru : hmm so how was the movie ?

sha : yeh bhi koi sawal hai ! loved it

vru : ek baat puchu

sha : hmm

vru : tumhe kabhi pyar nahi hua

sha : bola tha naa aachi ladki mili nahi mujhe

vru : kaisi ladki chahiye tumhe

sha : batau

vru : hmm

sha : mujhe chahiye ek ayesi ladki jise dekhte hi dil ka har khwab har raang har aarzoo zinda ho jaye

vru : how sweet..

sha : aabhi ayesa hua nahi hai , lekin abb lagta hai jaise koi andekha anjaana chera baadlo ke peeche pukaar raha hai , pata nahi yeh baadal kab hatenge aur kab voh pukaarnewali saamne ayegi , kya tumhare saath ayesa kabhi nahi hua vrushika .

she was blank !!!!!!!!

vru : bus aagayi hai I guess v shud leave .

sha : hmm

shantanu in thoughts : tum mano ya na mano lekin maine maan liya hai ki tum hi ho voh andekha anjanasa chera , bass ek baar pukaar ke toh dekho vrushika , mai jaanta hun ki tumhe bhi kuch kuch zaroor hota hai , bass kuch saamne nahi nikaal paati , par kabhi na kabhi toh maana hi hoga ki mai hi hun tumhara raj !

she moved ahead n steped to climb the bus .

sha : agar yeh mujhse pyar karti hai toh paltegi

palat ...palat...palat...

TO BE CONTINUED IN NEXT MOVIE !

So hope u all enjoyed my version of DDLJ ,plzz do leave your comments n criticism n next movie ka suggestion bhi plzz .i noe some of u gonna again wanna kill me for the cliff hanger , but ayese bade bade forums mein ayese chote chote cliff hangers hote rehte hai emmm...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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deekshu di 🤗 n sadaf di 🤗
petrol for my OS ! love u didis
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wo wo my Patlu PP is back wid her all so famous bollywood series..
I missed it for so long yaar n tu bhi gayab ho gayi hai aaj kal..

I just love dis bollywood series of ur.s..
Its just amazing👏
Dis one was superb..
Loved it completely..
N tera os ho n funny na ho aisa toh ho heee nahi sakta..
D theatre bit was funny..
N also dat dolle wala dialogue..
It just cracked me up..
Mast os👏👏
Great going PP..
Bahot maza aaya yeh padke..

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow wow wow
This is soo good
No wonder u took long
Coz u were preparing a master piece
The wait was worth it

It was funny at times "iv main to bare dolle deika rahi thi" lol
All the ddlj momebts we so superbly written
And my God the songs were just outta this world
Its been longbhvnt watch ddlj
Nw i feel like watching it again

Thnx alotbfor an amazing update
Eagerlybwaiting for nxt part
If its gna be so awesome
Thn i m ready to wait

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kruth dol it ws jst superb yr i luvd it...
Eagerly waiting fr nxt part n yar btati tho sai ki vo palti ya nai...
B pls jaldi update kr n nxt movie DTPH i.e dil tho pagal h plss 😳
Edited by bhavz_vrushan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sans my GOD r u serious what was that i luved it alooot se bhi zyada
Just opened my pm box and latest was ur pm mein kaise nahi kholti
Its awsum amazing zabardast mein kya bolun i toh luved it sooo much
And what was that vrushi was joking 😲
Yesterday the way u were asking me i thought sumthing will happen but nothing happened she toh ulta started laughing
Watching them having fun is treat to my eyes luv them sooo much
And during movie both were feeling sumthing for each other hayye i am toh speechless for that scene
And in end when shan said palat ... I cant w8 more for next part
Sans u have to update next part very sooon becoz i know u r very lazy
So better be ready to update next part
Luv u alooot se bhi zyada 🤗
Thanku for the pm
Tc
Till then
Hum Hain Rahi Pyaar Ke
Phir Milenge Chalte Chalte

Luv,
Sadaf
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Posted: 11 years ago
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my bad I havent seen DDLJ too...
though i have heard its dialogues many a times..
and I wasnt waiting for this series to continue i was longing for it...
the way you let things was exceptionally beautiful...
but they didnt confess..!!!!! WTH??
though it was a treat to read...the flabbergasted shantanu..
I loved the part of the realisation and film relation...it was THE awsm part from the os...
hatss off!!!
continue soon...

Rohan:)

P.S: Update your os soon..!!!
Edited by rohan_smile - 11 years ago
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Hey dear...i really loved the way u portrayed VruShan as Raj and Simran...DDLJ is one classic movie ...its every single line..every scene in imprinted in our minds ...beautiful use of song...lines..scenes...dreaminess of those scenes ...cuteness of our SwaRon and over all ur Midas touch surely made this OS an entertaining piece...u have got a certain style of writing...u do complete justice to the movie you take and never loose the basic essence of VruShan innocence and humbleness ...well-written ...👏👏👏


Eagerly waiting for next movie😳
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Wonderfully written kruti...

How can u write so well yaar...

i can actually visualize the whole song sequence...

You related Vrushan to Raj and Simren so well...

and the past which i liked the most is vrushan watching DDLJ in Maratha Mandir... I think many non mumbaikars dont know that Maratha Mandir has the record of playing DDLJ for longest running... may be more than 15 years or so... I myself watched DDLJ in Maratha Mandir with my hubby...

And the National Anthem... myself being from south not so familiar with this...I still remember when we first went for a movie everyone suddenly stood up and looking at us surprisingly as we are still sitting ( tab anthem shuru nahi hua hai)... then we both were like why they all are standing ... then the National Anthem came and we understood and stood up... some unforgettable memories...😳

Thank u so much kruti for making me cherishing my memories thru ur DDLJ vrushan OS 🤗


Edited by swathi_swaron - 11 years ago
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ok finally unresing my comment😉😆sorry😳
vrushan in ddlj!!wow!!
havent seen ddlj til now..ab pakad ke maarna mat😆
by reading this os samjh mein aa gaya why its a hit😉
tune toh saare vrushan fans ki icha puri kar di hogi by making shan raj and vrushi simran
ok vrushi drunk and shan use sambal raha hai
and that song!!superb!!ab mein kya bolu!!
ek toh background mein tujhe dekha toh ye jaana chal raha hai...but mujhe toh tera signature yaad aata hai🤣
tujhe dekha toh ye jaana swayam pyaar hota hai deewana swayam ab yaha se kaha gaye hum tv se chipak gaye hum🤣
chuha🤣 omg vrushi ke dholle🤣(vrushi ne uss din payal ka sapna pura kar di thi🤣)
ek min raat ke 3 baje rickshaw😳😲🤣ye toh kabhi possible nahi yaha 9 baje hi rickshaw milna ek bada task ho jaata hai aur yaha vrushan ko 3 baje mil gaya
vrushan ka magic hi aisa hai rickshaw wala bhi nahi bacha😉
fir toh sweet scenes the😳
hayee dono ko realise ho raha hai pyaar kya hota hai☺️
waiting for the next dhamaka!!
good work partner!!👏

Edited by arsha_vrushan - 11 years ago

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