ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15*

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

200th like!

This was one one fatal blow to the gut. I have always maintained one line through your OSs; saying that I wish things would have proceeded or showcased in the way you shopwed in your OSs. But I beg to differ with this one.

By last September, we were in on the remarriage track and as the CVs kept us hanging on the fate of Arshi, it was a sigh of relief that had been given out collectively when Arnav chose Khushi over Dadi. Of course his bearing towards Garima was questionable and by highlighting that you brought out something which I wish would have remained covered.

The melancholy that Khushi's distress induced throughout the OS only escalated with the parting shot...

P.S. You do have a way with giving us a sucker punch through a single line👏

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Luna

@luv_panipuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

loved the first part. Arnav is gonna repent a big time..

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Meera

@fabmegan25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

omg!!😲 that was so heartbreaking to read😭😭

poor khushi😔

and daadi...arrrgh i just hate her😡😡

i'm sure, arnav's really gonna repent a big time if anything happens to khushi😒

i just hope that nothing happens to her & she's just fine😳😊

that was a really good piece of writing👏, if possible please give us one more part where we get to know what happens after khushi's accident and whether arnav is aware of it or not!😳😃

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Sequel to this OS has been posted here: Another Day

Hope you like it :)

Love,
Ridz :)

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Whaa..? I thought they were a happy couple in this one but..

Can I kick Arnav? No, can I just kill him? What the hell man! He could have talked to her, found a way out of this mess. But no, he had to shout and yell and give out options. I understand that it's not easy for him to accept Garima but he could have dealt with the situation more maturely. Though I feel sad for him, too. Look what he lost because of that stupid woman. Sad!

I'm killing Dadi. Like killing her right now! She could go to hell for all I care. Spoiled everything. That woman..ughh!

I don't know why Khushi lands up as the sacrificial lamb in every situation. It's like nobody cares for her. Come and blame her and live happily. Like seriously? But why did you kill her :'( That was so heart wrenching.

Anyway, this OS was brilliant. With all the twists and turns, I was on the edge of my seat while reading this.