ArHi OS: One More Day *Sequel posted on IF P. 15*

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-Hope-

@-Hope-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Awesome OS, sad ending though..

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

u knw when this track started i cudnt see any other soln apart from separation ..
khushi dead could hv also been one :(

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Shweta

@Sunset90

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Such a heart-wrenching OS... Loved it so much that I wanted to know Arnav's feelings after Khushi's accident... I need to know... Are you gonna include another chapter?

Loved it.. But could bear with it only becoz the actual serial turned out to be happy ... Or else I'd be crying like hell now...

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

beautiful...and thank god this does not happen in the serial

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

There were two extremes here, one full of pain and the other just, plain simple beautiful. Terrific writing :)

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Beautiful and very very sad. Loved it.

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

aww... this is so heart breaking...
beautifully written but painful to know the ending..

arnav ...kushi..their love story should not end this way... 😭

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Oh no, poor Khushi!! feel awful for her! this was so emotional xx

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Hey Guys,

I wrote a sequel of sorts to this OS in Arnav's POV :)

I can't post the blog link here, but if any of you are interested, and are not on my pm list, send me a pm for the link.

Love,
Ridz