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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting turn of events...Maan is missing Geet though he refuses to acknowledge it...Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6
awesome...
poor Geet...
Maan will and should regret so much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all 6 updates together . Lovely concept 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
cool update well amy dont know about maan fully
waiting for maan entry the destruction begins uff
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
when r u going to update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys u broke my heart 107 se 79 likes. Wil try to update becz my net is dead n i cnt update from cell. Its so disapointing. I need more likes to boost my courage to write mre. Wil update 2morrow or sunday if my net got fixed.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for your comments. It means really a lot for me.

There was a question why is Maan behaving like that?

Maan hates the fact that she was not up to his status. There was physical attraction as well its now also but the reason Maan is so rude to her that he is egoistic and thinks that this girl is not worth of her. And rudeness with kids is because of his egoistic and workaholic nature he never gets the time to spend with them and understand the needs of a father's love to children he only thinks that giving enough money to them is enough. He is only repeating the history as he was treated in his childhood to his children. And coming to hating geet so much he is not hating geet he hated the fact she cheated on him and he only thinks he hates her but its not true.

I hope every thing is clear now. If not you guys can ask.

PART 7

** geets place*************

Morning

I woke up early in the morning and offer my prayers and wake kids up for school. They woke up with their usual drama that they are not going to school I just bribe them by saying I will take them for ice-cream after school. Sometimes I feel so blessed to have kids who are so easy to be bribed.

Oh geet u can't say this about your own kids... sorry god...

Then I dressed up kids and drop them to school. After kissing them goodbye and receiving two wet kisses on my cheeks by them. Then I rushed to my office. As usual my strict boss was giving me angry glances but I ignore.

Because I reached late again here today.

I went and gave hi fi to Amy my only friend in office and then boss scolded us and we just laughed. Then I got absorb in work lunch time I took leave and went to canteen for a lunch with Amy we had a massive fun there.

I never though I will enjoy my life again like I used to in my college days.

I thanked Amy mentally and went back to my desk, and again started working. Then the clock stuck 5 and I rushed back to school to pick my darlings kids with my best friend Amy off course. But our car stuck in traffic jam and I got 15 minutes late to pick them. But I told them to wait for me incase I get late in any case so I was not worried.

I reached school and rushed out to pick them I know Jeh would start crying if I am little late more.

So I mentally made a note to give them chocolates so that they will be angry on me. I reached on gate and waited for them it was strange Kajal always wait for me on gate. I asked the guard about kids.

Listen brother have you seen my kids?

Sorry sister they are not here.

What nonsense? How they are not here? I drop them my self here in the morning.

I called Amy near the gate and told him the matter.

Where are the kids?

Sir I really don't know.

Amy and me went inside and searched each and every place in the school and finally told principal about it.

Principal herself tried to find the kids in the school but they were not even a sign of them.

I felt numb I felt I have lost everything. I had only one thing in this world that's my kids. And I don't even know where they are now. What kind of mother am I? I can't even take care of my own kids. Maan was right I m good for nothing.

Tears were continuously flowing from my eyes.

Amy somehow dragged me to the car. I just broke down

Amy I lost them

Sh... we will find them dear.

No Amy I know I m the worst mother ever.

He hugged me and soothes me to make me feel better.

I just need my kids back Amy. Please I can't live with out them.

I promise I will help you to find them back I promise.

He took me to police station after searching the routes of my apartment in case they tried to go by themselves.

The officer denied writing my report. Saying that it was not possible for him to write the report if the time period of being missing in so short.

I literally begged him to write him and fall on his feet.

Sorry madam I m myself feel sorry but this is a law the missing period should be more then 4 hours.

Please sir I beg you please help me find the kids. I can't live without them please.

Amy just took me out of station and made me sit in the car.

Amy, Maan always said I m good for nothing. He was right. I failed as a mother. (Sobbing)

No dear, they must be at home. Let's go and find out.

How can they go to home Amy? It's so far away.

Let's go and find out then Na.

Geet and Amy reached home but there was not even a sign of kids.

Now every cell in get's body becomes numb and she felt as someone just dug her heart out of her body. Amy tried to calm her down but it was not possible for him as mother's heart is can never beat in absence of her kids. And in geet case it was worse because she has already have lost her Parents then Brother hate hers then her husband didn't even think her as his wife and have an affair with someone she only had her kids with her. SHE WANTED THEM BACK AT ANY COST.

Precap- where are kids?

Is it a cliff hanger? LOL I want comments and likes. 100+ likes then I will update. I am being evil now. Hahahaha.

Please comment. I love to read your comments. Please!

I will update on this weekend most probably.

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Suggestions are always welcome and feel free to ask anything.

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Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago

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