TR~EK AASMAN PE DO CHAAND AADHE HAIN~

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~ EK AASMAN PE DO CHAAND AADHE HAIN ~
( 4 OR 5 SHOTS TAAREY STORY )

in shimla it was d sunset time , d chilling breeze was flowing all around in the hills as well as in d hearts of 2 pure souls , at that time d 2 souls were crying and dying from inside , ya they were rey n taani , both had gone 2 shimla 4 some college trip with their own friends (they both r in different colleges n dont know each other ) ,
rey's situation - yesterday kria has just rejected him and told him that he dont love him and love someone else ... , he thought that he love kria from all his heart and kria also love him , but no , she was just using him and being with him 2 become popular in college and also 2 win a popular couple dance competition but as her motive done so she rejected him as rey proposed her in d bonfire party held in shimla where they have come 4 vacation n their celebration... now after kria's rejection , rey is all broken from inside ... and deeply hurt ... now he has gone out walking n crying , on a different way 2 find some peace ...
on d other hand ...
taani -n a fun loving girl , laughing n smiling all time ... living her life fully and enjoying it ... she is a kathak dancer , and some days before she has won a classical dance competition by her most beautiful and graceful mesmerizing dance ... and she has come in a college trip 2 shimla 2 have fun and enjoyment , but something cruel , brutal , worst has just happened 2 her yesterday ..unaware of anyone ...
and now she standing on d top of a hill 2 end her life which has played d worst game with her ...

taani (while crying ) - i m sorry ma - papa , i m sorry pls mujhe maaf kar dena , par ab main aapke paas laut ke nahi aasakti , hamesha se aapka pride ban na , ab aapki insult ka reason nahi ban paungi..
nahi mujhe main aapko face karne ke himmat hai , after what had happened 2 me ... ( she shouts looking up ) WHYYY ???????? , WHY GOD ????????? WHY ???????? WHY ????? WHY DID U DO THIS 2 ME , WHY GOD WHYYY ????? WHY DID THIS HAPPENED WITH ME , WHYYY?????? WHY ME , ???? WHY GOD ??? WHYYY????? WHAT WAS MY MISTAKE ????? WHY COULDNT U SEE ME HAPPY , ????????? WHYYY DID U DO THIS 2 ME , THAT NOW I M HATING MYSELF , MY BODY , ME AND MYSELF , I HATE ME GOD , I HATE MYSELF , ...
BUT IF THAT WAS UR DECISION THEN LISTEN MY DECISION ALSO ...THAT I CANT LIVE THIS LIFE AFTER WHAT HAS HAPPENED 2 ME ... I KNOW I HAVE NO RIGHT 2 END THIS LIFE , BUT I ALSO CANT LIVE AFTER ...( sobbing ) . AFTER ... AFTER BEING RAPED ... ( cry more n more )

( unaware 2 her , rey has reached there , and has just shocked 2 listen all these ... rape , godd these brutal world , and insensitive disgusting ,cheap , n mean human beings , criminals who take away someones' life , someone's heart n someone's right on her body , disgusting ... tears were flowing from his eyes too ... shocked 2 hear all these ... totally shocked .., he found his blood raging , as if a strong desire 2 kill that bas***d has just run through his veins .. he wanna kill him , he wanna kill that jerk.. he wanna kill every rapist )
but wait taani just wipes her tears - i m sorry i m sorry ma - papa ... i love u , i love u d most ... but i hate this bad life ...i will miss u so much ma- papa ... but pls forgive me 4 being a coward ..but i cant i cant live this life being ditched n raped ...and i love u so much ma papa .. aapki choti se beti ko maaf kar dena ,... but trust me that i love u so much that AFTER BEING GONE I WILL ASK GOD THAT IN NEXT BIRTH , GIVE ME BIRTH AS UR BABY ONLY BUT NOT AS UR DAUGHTER BUT AS UR SON ... THIS BRUTAL WORLD HAS MADE A CRIME 2 BE A GIRL ...
(rey was shocked n now tears were not s topping from his eyes )
taani - i m going ma - papa , now ...

rey ( immediately speaks up , no shouts at top of his voice that it was echoing in d hills ) - NOOO

taani turns while crying ...
(4 a moment rey was mesmerized seeing taani , such an innocent , beautiful n a pure girl .. but dont know why her teary eyes were hurting him and piercing him n his heart )

rey ( in an angry yet concerned tone )- U CANT END THIS LIFE , WHY WOULD U SUFFER WITHOUT ANY MISTAKE ... IT SHOULD BE THAT JERK , THAT BLOODY RAPIST WHO SHOULD SUICIDE AND DIE , WHY R U PUNISHING URSELF ... IT SHOULD BE HE THAT bas***d RAPIST WHO SHOULD GET D WORST PUNISHMENT , NOT U ... AND IT IS NOT U WHO HAVE DONE ANY CRIME .. BUT IT IS HE WHO HAVE DONE D DISGUSTING N CHEAP CRIME ... AND GOD HAS NOT DONE ANY MISTAKE BY MAKING U AS A GIRL ... IT IS SOME MEAN PEOPLE , AND THIS BAD WORLD WHO IS MAKING A CRIME 2 BE A GIRL BY DISRESPECTING THEM ... BY TREATING THEM AS A TOY .. BY TREATING THEM BADLY N BRUTALLY .. BY KILLING THEM BEFORE THEIR BIRTH ... BUT TRUST ME U GIRLS R D ONLY ONE WHO MAKE US , WHO GIVES BIRTH , WHO GIVE LIFE ,.. WHO GIVE BIRTH 2 A BOY .. BUT SOME FORGETS THAT IT WAS D GIRL ONLY WHO GIVE HIM BIRTH AND GIVE HIS LIFE AS HIS MOTHER ... THEY DISRESPECTS GIRLS FORGETTING THAT HIS MOTHER N SISTERS R ALSO GIRLS ... but there is some mistake urs also as u leave rapists ... u should make them get d worst punishments .. U END UR LIFE BUT WHY , U HAVE NOT DONE ANY CRIME , NOR ANY MISTAKE .. BUT IT IS THOSE BLOODY RAPISTS WHO SHOULD DIE ... U GIRLS WOULD HAVE 2 STAND 4 URSELF .. ENDING LIFE OR BEING QUITE IS NOT ANY SOLUTION ,... WHAT WOULD IF U LEAVE THEM AND THEY DO D SAME 2 ANY OTHER GIRL ... THEN SHE WOULD ALSO HAVE 2 SUFFER NOT ONLY BECAUSE OF RAPIST BUT ALSO BECAUSE U LEAVE THAT RAPIST WITHOUT ANY PUNISHMENT ,

taani - u r right ... but u cant even imagine how it feels like being ditched ... how it feels when everyone make u stand wrong after rape , u dont know how our society see a girl after being raped and how it feels when ur parents feels ashamed because of u or by giving birth 2 u .. u dont know how it feels , every single second becomes a big punishment but no one understand this and keeps finding fault in girls only ... life became like hell ... but no one will understand , no one will change .. this society is making us , girls a big crime ... our life is a crime ... no main mere ma papa ki sharam se jhuki hui nazarein nahi dekh sakti , i have 2 die , u dont come in my way ..
( she starts taking steps backward crying n sobbing )
rey (after coming closer and forward ) - no no no pls try 2 understand , u cant do this pls stop ... listen 2 me , listen 2 me ...
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kya hoga ,?????? kya taani bach payegi ya vo bhi un sabhi girls ki tarah mar jayegi ???????
4 that u would have 2 read d next part ...
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friends i just wanna say ki please ...
* STAND 4 GIRLS AGAINST RAPISTS .
*RESPECT GIRLS AS UR MOTHER N SISTER R ALSO GIRLS .
*GIVE GIRLS ALSO PROPER RIGHT 2 LIVE LIFE ..
*PLS DONT MAKE IT A CRIME 2 BE A GIRL ...
*GIRLS TRY 2 STAND 4 URSELF ...
*PUNISH RAPISTS N ABUSERS INSTEAD OF PUNISHING URSELF ...
*FIGHT 4 UR RIGHTS ,..
*LIFE IS A PRECIOUS GIFT OF GOD , RESPECT IT N LIVE IT ...
NOT EVEN THOUGHT OF ENDING IT NEVER EVER OK , BE A FIGHTER N NOT A COWARD ...
*RESPECT N LOVE LIFE AND LIFE WILL ALSO RESPECT N LOVE U IN RETURN ...
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LOTS OF LOVE
TAKE CARE N KEEP SMILING ALWAYS ...
AAO HASTE MUSKURATE MUSHKILON KO BHI HASNA SIKHA DE , MISHRI JAISE BAATON AUR KHOOB SAARE PYAAR SE ZINDAGI KO BHI MEETHA BANA DE ..
pls do like n comment from heart ..

index(clickable links)
chapter-1 (above)

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NOTE ~ i have got a really very important video 4 all the girls 4 self defence
after 4 min onwards in d video
pls pls do see it till d end , i hope it will be helpful 4 all girls , dont miss it (both r links of d same video )😊

https://hd-rulez.info/dm.php?id=x16jz2x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
res
unres
moni dear...
u truely deserve a standing ovation for this attempt!!!
and i am feeling so proud that ii have such a wise and matured sister!
lots of hugs and kisses! šŸ¤—
and coming to the story...
it was an ossom start and loved the way u described the situation šŸ‘
and taani's attempt is obvious after such an incident...
but loved rey's words to stop her,
and taani ko kuch nahi hoga
aur agar hoga bhi toh rey bacha lega!
seriously, the world is so so so cunning and rudistic
for the girls who are born...
seriously rey's words are an eye opener and
loved the way he said those words...
tears brimmed in my eyes reading those lines.
kyu koi aise nahi samajhta is society me...
and me jitna kahu utna kam hai ki i love u lots and lots...
and u made me more and more proud of u my dear...
may god bless!!!

Edited by hima_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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diii...šŸ¤—
wonderful topic that you wrote upon
the story is really true..
after this incident usually most of the girls commit suicide
which isnt right
they need to fight for their right
and punish the guilty
giving up their life would provoke those people more
so its necessary to act against it

superb topic dii
and totally loved ur writing
continue soon dii
will be looking forward to an update to this

Edited by Ridzi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a big applause for dis concept
bt i m really angry on u
wl tel resn later
coming back to stry
wow... ths diff... n intrstng
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept
really loved the topic
plz updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm one of best
stry tht i will read
my respect for u hav grown now
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
This the frst time m reading ur work frm d recent strting...
I dont kno ur name
V ll introduce each other soon
Bt right now a big round of applause to u.. Fr taking up this concept
It ws needed n a big thank u fr writing this..
M eager 2 read the second part
Plss update soon
Edited by ..Akshita.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsum concept...
u r giving a nice msg...
want to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing n touching plz cont soon

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