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qwerty012

@qwerty012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

I have read many stories not only abt TR but also abt others... I liked and respected many writers for their writing n creative thinking... But for the first time i am respecting for ur subject n ur boldness... U deserve a standing ovation

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Mind blowing update!!!

I'm totally speechless yr!!!

I totally agree with ur thought!!!

Hats off to u dear!!!👏👏👏

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Monika Saxena

@monikasaxena05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Omg...wht a brilliant concept

Amazing

Plz update it soon

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Sharina

@shamanbk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

superb startingawesome concept, and nicely saidplease update soon and pm me😛

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rimpa

@allseasonrain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

hats off to you for the story line...
WE SHOULD BE PROUD TO AS WE ARE GIRLS... really for some mean minded cheap people a girl suffers so much... be it domestic violence or social nuisance ...
continue soon and pm me...

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Beyond amazing, hats off to u for this superb story
It's so true that girls always have to pay for such disgusting crimes committed against them when it's totally not their fault
I love the way u expresses Taani emotions and feelings
It's very heartbreaking
I hope she finds the courage and strength to fight against her attacker

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chinudolly

@chinudolly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: hima_taarey
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moni dear...
u truely deserve a standing ovation for this attempt!!!
and i am feeling so proud that ii have such a wise and matured sister!
lots of hugs and kisses! 🤗
and coming to the story...
it was an ossom start and loved the way u described the situation 👏
and taani's attempt is obvious after such an incident...
but loved rey's words to stop her,
and taani ko kuch nahi hoga
aur agar hoga bhi toh rey bacha lega!
seriously, the world is so so so cunning and rudistic
for the girls who are born...
seriously rey's words are an eye opener and
loved the way he said those words...
tears brimmed in my eyes reading those lines.
kyu koi aise nahi samajhta is society me...
and me jitna kahu utna kam hai ki i love u lots and lots...
and u made me more and more proud of u my dear...
may god bless!!!

😲

awww sweety pie , 🤗

🤗

i really cant believe that u r giving me d standing ovation , oh god , its was really unexpected 😲😲😲 but i m not that praiseworthy dear ... but still dil se biggest thank u so much 4 making my day by ur awesome heart touching ,n most special n precious comment ... love u loads my sweety pie sis

after seeing n reading this heart touching wonderful lovely comment of urs , i wanna come out of pc and hug u tightly yet softly 🤗🤗 feel like dancing i m feeling so blessed that i cant tell u sweety pie ... u really made me feel on cloud nine dil se biggest biggest thank u so so so so so so so so so so so so so so sooo ... much muaahhh muaahhh muaahhh muaahhh muahh

and very very big thank u 4 sending pms 2 ur friends also especially .. it really really means a lot sweety pie ( aur mujhe to pata he nahi chalta agar ek reader apni comment main mujhe na batati to ... thank u so so so so much )

love u a lot my sweety pie sister .. u r d best .. i m blessed n lucky 2 have you as my lovable adorable sister ... u r really very special n precious 2 me ...😳😳😳 thanks a lot again

Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago

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Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Oh di i loved it😃 cont soon!!

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chinudolly

@chinudolly

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Ridzi123
diii...🤗
wonderful topic that you wrote upon
the story is really true..
after this incident usually most of the girls commit suicide
which isnt right
they need to fight for their right
and punish the guilty
giving up their life would provoke those people more
so its necessary to act against it

superb topic dii
and totally loved ur writing
continue soon dii
will be looking forward to an update to this

🤗🤗 awww gudiya , 🤗 ,

thank u so so so so sooo much ...

love u a lot gudiya , my sweetu sis

and ya u r right , victim should be a fighter , not a coward and she should fight against them so that they wont do this again 2 any other girl .. , and any other girl would not have 2 suffer because of her silence ...

thank u so much sweetu , i m glad u love my writing ...

i will try 2 continue asap ...

love u loads my little sis , 🤗

take care n keep smiling always 😊🤗