TR~EK AASMAN PE DO CHAAND AADHE HAIN~ - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shamanbk

amazing update very emotional 😭

you showed a raped victim's feeling so beautifully
loved both the songs you chose for the scenes
I just hope Taani's family and friends support her and she gets justice
please update soon and pm me


dil se thank u so much dear
n sorry 2 make u cry but pls smile now 😊 n keep smiling always 😊😊
thanks a lot again 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

heart touching update 😭

buy she fainted ?? 😕


thanks a lot dear but sorry 2 make u cry ,pls smile now 😊😊 n keep smiling always 😊
she fainted because ??????????????????????????? thats suspense my dear , so wait n read 😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pulkit..

Superb Story ... PM me too


thank u so much dear and ya i will pm u 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishapie

Hey i'm really sry for late comment.
the update waz superb...plz nxt prt soon.


its ok dear. pls dont say sorry
thank u so much , 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u dear 😊😊
chinudolly thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE ~ i have got a really very important video 4 all the girls 4 self defence
after 4 min onwards in d video
pls pls do see it till d end , i hope it will be helpful 4 all girls , dont miss it (both r links of d same video )😊

http://hd-rulez.info/dm.php?id=x16jz2x
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now coming 2 d story well first of all dil se thank u 4 all ur special comments pls keep commenting if u want update 😆 and sorry as i could reply only till page 10 ,after that will try 2 reply soon but u all keep commenting 😛 , and i m dividing this chapter in 2 parts as its being long and my back has already started paining , health is unwell , so not able 2 write n update more , sorry friends i may not be able 2 give u fast updates due 2 health n studies , i hope u all will understand ..so here is part a of chapter- 4 , pls give ur precious comments after reading 😊thank u 😊😊
~~~EK AASMAN PE
DO CHAAND AADHE HAIN~~~
chapter- 4
part (a)

taani was sensing danger and some people behind her , she was sweating terribly ... and so she immediately tries 2 open d door of d car and run away but couldnt , they 4 surround that jeep laughing disgustingly .😡
boy 1 (touching her cheeks ) - kal jo huaa vo bhool gayi , aur uske baad bhi teri itnii himmat ki vahan se bhaag aayi ,
boy 2- aarree kal to sirf ek ne iss haseen jawani se aish kiya tha , abhi hum teeno ko bhi to puraa maza to le lene deti ...
taani was screaming - REEYYY , REEYYY , REYYY
taani try 2 escape , but one boy caught her hand ,
boy 1- ee zyada shaantptti nahi haan , varna (hold her hair with other hand )
kal ki yaad dilaun kya tujhe , hmm
boy 2 - itne aachhe maal ko aise kaise chod sakte hain hum ,
taani (was crying and feeling so disgusting , she was searching rey n screaming out his name ) - REYYY REYYY REYY REYYY (taani was trying hard 2 free her hand from their grip but couldnt , she was crying feeling like d most cursed girl on this earth )
boy 3 (laughing evilly )- chilla le , chilla le , koi nahi aane wala , aur agar koi aaya bhi to bachke nahi jaa payega (touching her disgustingly , )arrree thik se aish to kar lene de tere saath, acchha hoga chup karke hamein karne de jo hum karna chahte hain aur lene de maze iss haseen jism ke - laughs evilly -😡
(taani was feeling like hell , she was feeling damn cursed , she was feeling so disgusting 2 listen their mean words , their every touch was like some boiling heated rod was touching taani's skin, their touch was really killing her 😭😭, taani chahti thi ki aise ghatiya soch vaale darindo ko vo apne haathon se maar dale 😡😡, vo chahti thi ki bhagwaan un sabko ussi tarah nochein jis tarah se vo usse , uski aatma ko , uske dil ko , uske jism ko noch rahein hain kooi pathar ka khilona samjhke uske saath khelna chahte hain ,taani ka agar bas chalta na to shayad vo shaitan zinda nahi hote abhi par abhi taani ko khud ko bachana tha kisi tarah but was not being able 2 free herself 😭😭😭)

boy 2( who was holding her hand n pulling her hair ) - pehle main , pehle main aaj to iss khoobsurat haseena se aish aur maje main lunga pehle
(taani was feeling like hell , wanna kill that bloody basT*** 😡😡😡 , wanna slap , punch , n just murder him , who want 2 play with her , her body , her soul , her respect , her heart ,. she want 2 kill him , So disgusting , chee 😡😡)
and one boy was coming nearer nearer and more nearer 2 her whose eyes reflecting just lust n evilness , (taani was breathing heavily due 2 fear , tears flowing down her cheeks , eyes filled with disgust , anger .. she gritted her teeth . n forcefully open d door of that jeep in which she was standing with her legs , as a result that door of d jeep directly hit that boy's legs , and he left her hand n hair
then immediately she came out fastly n raise her one hand n slapped d other boy as tightly as she can who was trying 2 stop her n caught her hand, she slap him again , shocking him n making him even more angry , but before he could react , taani bite his hand so badly with which he was holding her and as a result he left her hand , and she try 2 escape but then boy 3 came 2 her full of anger n rage ,
taani ( 2 protect herself ) - dig all d nails of her hand on his dirty face , she nailed out his skin
and she push that boy who was holding her so harder that he fell on d road backwards , and she tries 2 run ,
boy 4 - iskii to , chalo , chodenge nahi isko to aaj , chalo , and first that boy 4 ran behind her , then d left 3 boys also ran behind her
she ran as fastly as she could , she was running at d highest speed possible
taani ( crying , sweating ) - REYY , REYY , HELP ME , REY

while rey just found papaya 2 make taani eat something as she was quite hungry but wait he heard a sound , someone calling him again n again , rey ( 2 himself ) ye aawaz to taani ki hai na , kahin taani kisi musibat main to nahi , and he also runs following from where that voice came ,
taani - REYYY REYYY , taani was running n running , d distance between those goons n her was decreasing n decreasing , she was loosing her strength , .. still gathering strength n power
taani ran , ran 2 save herself , 2 save her life ,2 save herself from being ... raped again , again , no god cant be so cruel , no never ,
while running she crashes with a hard muscular body ,ya she crashed with rey , rey was shocked 2 see her in this condition , all sweating n crying n crying 😭, but before seeing rey , taani thought that she has again caught by those bloody goons , she was breathing heavily due 2 fear🤢 ,
taani looks up saying - chod do please mujhe chod do , but as she look and find rey ,
she took a breathe of relief , a breath of hope , a breath of life , and she hug him , as tightly as she could , as if she was hugging her ray of hope , her life , all crying n crying , while her tears were absorbing by rey's shirt , 😭😭
rey ( with care n concern 4 her ) - taani , taani , kya hua , what happened , calm down , calm down n tell me kya hua
taani (cries but not leaving rey at all ) - rreeyy , vooo ,voo , phir aagaya , meeree saath , (sobbing ) merree saathh n sobs
and that bloody boys came again searching taani ,
boy - vo rahi , vo rahi vo ladki ,chalo ,
rey saw them and understood that these r that bloody rapists only n in no time his eyes filled with anger , revenge , rage , hatred ..

boy 1 - ohoo,laila ka majnu aagaya , (laughs evilly )
boy 2 - aa bhi gaya to hamara kya bigad lega , kyun ,
boy 3 - inn dono ko aaj ek saath issi jungle main dafan kar denge ,
boy 4 - par iss ladki ka to aaj jee bhar ke maza lenge , aur badla bhi jo abhi isne hamare saath kiya ,
boy 2 -thapad mara na hamein , ab tu dekh teri aur tere iss aashiq ki zindagi ko kaise thappad maarte hai hum ,
boy 3 - ab tu dekh hum tere jism , teri rooh ko kaise kuchalte hain hum
rey clutches his fist , first keeps his one hand on taani's shoulder , n make her come 2 his back side , assuring her that now she is safe n he will handle them ,
he was damn angry on them😡😡 , he wanted 2 take revenge of what they did 2 taani 😡, he wanted 2 kill them , he wanted 2 kill their hands with which they touched her pure soul n body , he move forward but first taani hold him fearing that those jerks may harm rey , but then rey look back at her n assure her that nothing will happen 2 him , remove her hand and go forward ,
boy 1 - aaja , aaja , bahut maare hain humne tere jaise , aaj lagta hai ki ek aur ka no. hai hamare haathon marne ka
~~~~~~~~~~ end of this ch-3 part (a) ~~~~~~~~
precap - fight between rey n goons Angry,
... may be taareylicious ... may be 😆
or may be shocking 😉
pls do like n comment from heart if u like my update
NOTE - pls do see d video and spread it 2 as many as girls u can
the actual video 4 self defence in it will start after 4 min so pls do see d full video , i m sure it will help all d girls 😊
pls pls do see it till d end , i hope it will be helpful 4 all girls , dont miss it

http://hd-rulez.info/dm.php?id=x16jz2x
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take care ,
be safe
keep smiling always 😊
dont forget 2 hit like n do give ur precious comment as well..
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Edited by chinudolly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Those goons again, I can't wait for Rey to beat them blk and blue
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing part dii..
those guyss naa😡😡

Taani fought with her full strength... she is courageous ... thats great dii...

dii..me waiting for the dhishum dhishum now...

punch punch...dhishum dhishum...

update when time permits dii...

love u soo much..
muah muah..
take care dii...
cyaa soon 😊


P.S - dii...will see the video in 1 - 2 dayss... my net is damn slow... soo its not loading properly😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...awesome update...loved it so much moni...

taani fight back...it was great...and thank god rey found taani...ab maza aayega...
Edited by .CuteKittyCat. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really wanted to kill those goons
i m sooo glad taani showed strength n fought wid dem
n ab rey toh unhe chodega hi nahi
plz updt soon
n ya thnks a ton for d video link u shared

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