a big hearty thanks 4 all ur heart touching precious special comments and very sorry as i couldnt reply 2 all , i have just replied till page 2 , but i promise friends that once my exams will finish then i will reply 2 all ur comments first and will give u a little fast updates ... but pls keep commenting as ur comments only force me 2 update any story so pls if u want story updates then pls comment .. thank u so much ... 🤗
well friends , this update is dedicated 2 hima , my sweety pie sis ( as if hima didnt tel that she has posted it on fb also and many more r waiting 4 its update then it would definitely take 15 days and updated after my exams , but hima i m apologizing in advance if it wont be upto ur expectations but i m trying my level best , love u a lot my sweety pie sis , i hope i dont disappoint u dear ) and ya this update is also 4 all d wonderful dear readers of my story out there n 2 my sweet cute buddies .. n also 2 every girl .. but pls do like n comment from heart ,plss
EK AASMAN PE DO CHAAND AADHE HAIN
chapter - 2
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taani was taking back steps while she was still looking at rey but going behind towards d hill where as rey was coming forward and asking 2 stop and dont do this , both had tears in their eyes ...
taani ( still crying while taking back steps looking down ) - i m sorry krishna ji , i m sorry ma - papa , i know ki aap mujhe sun sakte ho apne dil se., aaj tak aisa kabhi nahi hua ki aap dono mere dil ki baat na samjh paye ho , par ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena , aur pls ho sake to mujhe zyada yaad mat karna ma - papa (while saying ma-papa , she felt as if someone has just stabbed her heart ) ,aur kabhi mujhe yaad karke rona mat , aap dono to jaante ho na ki main aapko kabhi rote hue nahi dekh sakto , par plz mujhe apne dil main hamesha zinda rakhna ... main chali jaungi par aap dono ko apna khayal rakhna ... main nahi houngi par aap dono ko haste muskurate pyaar karte jeete rehna hai ..
(her every single word was falling like a big thunderstorm on rey's heart ... and rain of tears was shedding from his eyes too )
taani (sobbing real badly , like screaming ) - ek aakhiri baar meri aawaz se aapko maa- papa bula rahi hun ... MAAA - PAPA , i will miss u real badly , good bye forever MAA - PAPA ... LOVE U A LOT MA - PAPA ... krishna ji mere ma- papa ka khayal rakhna plss ... aapne mere saath jo kiya so kiya par unhe kuch nahi hona chahiye okk ...
rey ( crying ,stammering in between ) ruuukooo ,plss merrii baar suno , ruko , tum aisa nahi kar sakti plss suno tum aisa nahi kar sakti ...(before rey could speak further .. TAANI SLIPPED ... SHE WAS FALLING BACKWARDS DOWN A HILL ... HER HAND WAS FORWARD IN D AIR ... BUT REY IMMEDIATEY RUN AND CAUGHT HER HAND VERY TIGHTLY AND PROTECTIVELY THOUGH TAANI WAS TRYING 2 TAKE HER HAND BACK .. BUT REY HELD IT EVEN MORE TIGHTLY 2 SAVE HER ... AS IF HE WAS SAVING HIS OWN LIFE ... AND BEFORE SHE COULD FALL COMPLETELY , HE PULL HER WITH A GREAT FORCE TOWARDS HIM ...
AS A RESULT SHE CAME CRASHING TOWARDS REY'S HARD MUSCULAR BODY ... SHE STARTED SOBBING .. REY WAS ALSO CRYING ,... TAANI RESTS HER HEAD ON HIS CHEST ... AND STARTS CRYING A LOT ...REY ALSO ENCIRCLED HIS ARMS AROUND HER IN AN ORDER 2 SAVE A PRECIOUS LIFE , DONT KNOW WHY WAS IT SO PRECIOUS 2 HIM ... DONT KNOW WHY TAANI FELT SAFE N RELIEVED IN HIS ARMS , DONT KNOW WHY SHE WANNA LET OUT ALL HER PAIN IN HIS ARMS , AND JUST CRY AND GET AWAY FROM THIS BRUTAL WORLD IN HIS ARMS , DONT KNOW WHY , ... both cried closing their eyes and shedding d tears n pain in each others arms 4 sometime but soon a chilling breeze blew as if d god want 2 keep a lovely shelter around 2 pure souls ... but soon a dirty view of d rape that happened with her yesterday just flashed in taani's mind ... she started taking heavy breathes remembering it due 2 fear , she got so scared , she immediately pushed away rey and at first rey was so shocked and then realized that he was hugging her but he felt his shirts wet by her tears , and he also saw sweat on taani's face although it was not recognizable between her wet eyes n tears which were flowing down her cheeks ... rey caught her hands ..- kya hua , tumhe , tumhe ,saans lene main koi problem ho rahi hai , why r u sweating so much , what happened ...
but taani immediately keeps his hands away from her ...
taani (showing him her index finger while stammering in between ) - dekho , dont touch me okk .. mere paas mat aao tum ... duur , duur , duurr raho mujhse ,, okk ...aur tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki hunhh ...
while rey understood that she is still feared n scared after that rape ... he came forward 2 console her .. while taani's eyes were flashing that bloody rapists in front of her eyes again n again ...and her legs were becoming weak and the vision was becoming blurred , her head was heavy due 2 fear n crying so much and ... SHE FAINTED ALL OF A SUDDEN ... while rey saw her and hold her by waist before she completed faint . he was really very worried ...
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( DONT KNOW WHY BUT WHEN TAANI SLIPPED AND TRYING 2 FINISH HER LIFE OR WHEN SHE FAINTED HE FELT AS IF SOMEONE VERY PRECIOUS , IS GOING AWAY N TAKEN AWAY FROM HIM IN FRONT OF HIS EYES , HE FELT AS IF HE JUST LOST HIS OWN LIFE , OR AN ANGEL OF GOD ... WHO IS SO PURE , SWEET N INNOCENT ,... BUT TAANI'S WORDS WERE LIKE A BIG HURTING PIERCING SHOCK 4 HIM... HE FELT OR WISHED THAT IF HE HAD MAGIC AND HE COULD REMOVE THAT CRUEL WORST DAYS FROM HER LIFE THEN HE WOULD IMMEDIATELY DO THAT WITHOUT THINKING 4 A SECOND ... )
rey was holding d fainted taani ,but 2 him she was looking like an angel .. who is in deep pain n sorrows ...
he carried her in his arms while saying - suno , uthooo , kya hua , tumhe , utho na .. plss utho ..dekho tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai , main hoon na , u can trust me , utho plss utho na , hey krishna ji , ye kya ho gaya isse , ye jaag kyun nahi rahi hai ..yahan aas paas koi doc bhi nahi hai , aur koi dikh bhi nahi raha ,...he take him 2 his car ... and make her sit , but she was still fainted .. and it was being night ... d sun was setting down .. making way 4 d moon n stars ... .
he take out a water bottle from his car and sprinkle some water on her face ... but still she was not awaking at all ...
so he decided 2 drove d jeep and find a doc or hospital or nay clinic n take her 2 a doc so first of all he tie d seat belt of taani , he saw her so closely d first time ... she was really an angel .. so beautiful and innocent , so pure at d same time he could take him away from her , but seeing her fainted and fear of her face in unconsciousness he get 2 his seat and starts driving ... while driving taani was fainted ... and he was keep looking at her ...
but taani's words were ringing in his heart n mind ... making him feel disgusting , hurt n angry at d same time ... he wanna kill that bloody rapist , he wanna beat him .. badly like d way he beated a girl's self - respect , he wanna punch him real badly 4 hurting a pure soul ... he want 2 punch him 4 touching her , 4 playing with her , his blood was boiling with rage n anger 4 that bloody rapist .. but now he was more worried 4 her ..he was hurt . 2 see her in this condition , he was hurt 2 see her pain , fear n suffering ... he was worried ki kya ab vo kabhi apni zindagi pehle ki tarah jee payegi , kya vo kabhi move on kar payegi , kahin vo phir apni zindagi finish karne ki koshish to nahi karegi , kya hoga jab uske parents ko is bare main pata chalega ,... no answers 2 a huge no. of questions , but rey's heart n soul both were crying , seeing her in so much , dont know why ,but he wanna remove each n every pain n sorrow of her ... he wanna make her live , that too happily ... he wanna make her smile again , he wanna make forget every pain .. but along with this , in his heart he had taken 1 more decision that was he would make that bloody rapists get d worst punishment .. so that d innocent girl , and that beautiful pure angel , get justice who has suffered a lot because of that disgusting jerk ..
but his chain of thoughts was broken when taani kept her head on his shoulders in unconsciousness .. he turns 2 his left side n saw her , 4 a moment he was mesmerized by her natural beauty and saw d strands of hair coming on her face , he slowly forwards his hand and kept those strands of hair behind her ears ,...and make her rest properly ... .and again starts driving ... but
all of a sudden d jeep stops ,
(rey's jeep was somewhat like this )
rey - oh god ab is jeep ko kya ho gaya , ye kyun ruk gayi , oh shit meri jeep main to to diesal ikhatam ho gaya hoga , shittt , ab kya karun , yahan to aas paas koi petrol pump bhi nahi hai aur upar se raat bhi ho gayi hai , but ya ladki to faint hai , ab kya karun main , oh god plss help me ..
mujhe lagta hai ki raat bhar yahin rehna hoga , and he keeps his head at d back , close his eyes ...
but soon rey opens his eyes as he just heard a voice
taani ( her face was reflecting fear and sweating again badly ) - chodd do , mujhe chood do plss .. dont do this 2 me , plss ..aahhh
(she woke up all of a sudden all crying , screaming n shouting )
rey was shocked 2 see her , but in no time he understood her condition and his eyes were wet seeing her in this worse condition
taani cries keeping her hands on her face .. without realizing where , why n how she is
rey - dekho ab tum safe ho , tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai , main hoon na tumhare saath , ab koi tumhe kuch nahi kar sakta , jo hua usse bhul jao ,
taani looks and say 2 him while crying n sobbing - bhool jaun , kaiseee , kaisee bhool jao , kya mera jism mujhe bhulne dega jo mere saath hua hai , kya meri soul jo tadap rahi hai , uski tadap bhool jaun , mere dil jo seham gaya hai , baar baar ro raha hai , uska rona bhool jaun , jisne mujhe aur mere jism ko khatam kar diya usse bhoool jaun , kaise , kaise ( and starts sobbing )
par tum ho kaun , aur tumne meri jaan kyun bachayi , kyun mujhe marne nahi diya , kyun , ... tumhe kya lagta hai , ki tumne meri jaan bachakar mujhe zindagi de hai , nahi , tumne mujhe vo jaan de hai JISMEIN SAANSE TO HONGI PAR ZINDAGI NAHI , JO HAR PAL DARD MAIN TADPEGI ...APNE AAPKO DHUNDEGI , HAR PAL DAR AUR HAL PAL DARD HOGA ... KYUN TUMNE MUJHE MARNE NAHI DIYA KYUN ... DE TUMNE MUJHE AISE LIFE KYUN ... JISMEIN NA DIL BACHA HAI NA PYAAR NA ROOH BACHI HAI, NA HI KHUSHI ,... to phir kya karun main jee kar hm(and again start crying )
rey (WHILE CRYING ) - TUMHE JEENA HOGA , USS GOD KE LIYE JISNE TUMHE YE LIFE DE HAI ,
TUMHE PATA HAI , YA TUMNE KABHI DEKHA HAI KISIKO ZINDAGI KE EK PAL KE LIYE , HAR SECOND FIGHT KARTE HUE , KYA TUMNE DEKHA HAI KISI DISABLE KO ..MUSKURATE HUE ZINDAGI KA SAAMNA KARTE HUE , TUM KEHTI HO KI TUM DARD MAIN HO .. KYA JINKO CANCER HOTA HAI , YA UNKE HEART MAIN HOLE HOTA HAI YA KOI BAHUT BADI BIMAARI HOTI
TO KYA VO DARD MAIN NAHI HOTE , KYA VO KHUSHIYA AUR PYAAR NAHI CHAHTE ... CHAHTE HAIN PAR SABKO SAB KUCH NAHI MILTA ... AGAR BHAGWAAN JI NE TUMHE KOI BIG PROBLEM DE HAI TO FIGHT IT OUT , WITH A SMILE ON UR FACE ... KHUSHIYON MAIN TO SAB MUSKURATE HAIN , PAR INSAAN VAHI HOTA HAI JO APNE GHAMON MAIN BHI MUSKURAYE ...AUR DOUBLE TRIPLE STRENGTH SE FIGHT KARE AUR APNI HAR PROBLEM KO BHAGA DE ...MANA TUMHARE SAATH BAHUT BURA HUA , BAHUT BURA , PAR KYA TUM USS BLOODY CREEPS KO OPEN CHODKE WITHOUT ANY PUNISHMENT , HAR LADKI KE SAATH BURA NAHI KAR RAHI .. KYA TUM APNI JAAN DEKAR APNI MAA KI KOK JIS SE USNE TUMHE JANAM DIYA HAI , USKI INSULT NAHI KAR RAHI , JAB TUMHE VO YAAD KARKE CHUP CHUP KE ROYEGI , AUR APNE AAP KO BLAME KAREGI THEN WONT U FEEL BAD , HMM AUR AGAR UN RAPISTS NE AISA HE KISI AUR KE SAATH KIYA TO KYA TUM KHUD KO MAAF KAR PAOGI YA VO EK AUR VICTIM LADKI TTUMHE MAAF KAR PAYEGI , NAHI , KABHI NAHI , U NEED 2 STAND 4 UR SELF AND 4 UR RIGHTS ,.U NEED 2 GET JUSTICE NOT ONLY 4 U BUT 4 UR PARENTS AND 4 EVERY OTHER GIRL ... U HAVE 2 PUNISH THEM ...
TAANI (while wiping her tears ) - u r right , absolutely right , mujhe fight karna hoga , apne liye aur har ladki ke liye , main un rapists ko badi se badi saza dilva kar rahungi ... and main jeeungi apne krishna ji aur apne ma - papa ke liye jinhone mujhe ye life de hai , bahut ho gaya , ab main aur nahi roungi , jab maine koi mistake he nahi ki to phir main kyun ro un , jinhone crime kiya hai ab vo royenge , they will have 2 cry 4 d sin they have committed ...thank u so much 4 opening my eyes ...but tum ho kaun ????? aur hum yahan kaise aaye ?????? hum to uss hill pe the na ..
rey (2 cheer up her ) - vo actually tum faint ho gayi thi to maine socha tumhe doc ke paas le jaun but whil going meri jeep ka diesal finish ho gaya aur hum yahan pe fas gaye , and let me introduce myself
hello my name is reyansh singhania ... ur new handsome friend and u ??
taani - my name is taani , taani shikhawat , but hum dost kab bane ???
rey - abhi ( and put on a fake smile 4 her )
taani - but hum yahan se vapis kaise jayenge ... itni raat main to rasta bhi kho gaya hai .. bilkul meri life ki tarah
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precap -why was she fainted ??????? will that bloody rapist e punsished and if yes then how ?????? what will happen when taani go 2 police station ???????? what will police do ???????? what will her parents say ???? how will her friends react ??????
( 2 know d answers 2 these questions u wil have 2 read d next update .. which i can give u after 15 days , sorry exams r starting in this week, that's why giving u all a long update and sorry if i disappoint anyone , pls forgive me 4 that but i m really very busy these as exams r going 2 start soon and i m not at all prepared but ya many twists n turns r awaiting 4 u all in upcoming updates , and i will try not 2 disappoint anyone)
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** in this update i just tried 2 show d life of a raped girl , which become like hell after being raped ...
we cant even imagine , that what a girl feel , when someone abuse , rape her , give her disgusting cheap looks , see her badly , play with her like a play toy , no one can even imagine that disgusting feeling a raped girl feel ... even then if she wish 2 live na then our society dont let her live forgetting all that by blaming her 4 no reasons again n again ... kaise lagta hai jab koi hamein badly touch karta hai, hamein aur hamari body ko apne maze ke liye use karta hai NO ONE CAN UNDERSTAND .. agar ek raped girl ko blame karne ki jagah uska dard , uski takleef samjhne ki agar hum koshish kare na to shayad hamein uske dard ka thoda ehsaas ho , ek baar koi apne aap ko uss ladki ki jagah rakh ke sochega na tab usse us ladki ke dard ka thoda ehsaas hoga ... kisiko bevajah blame karna easy hai , ye kehna easy hai ki vo movie dekhne gayi isiliye uske saath ye hua ya usne chote clothes pehne isiliye ye hua ... par us ladki ka dard samjhna impossible hai , and society humse he banti hai , change ur thinking first and d society will automatically change ... pls respect girl and give her a safe environment ... and ya friends life is really very precious so dont even think of ending it okk .. just live it fully ... solve every problem ... but never give up okk
thank u ...
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