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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Mona
How u? 😊
Extremely sorry for the late reply
Update was amazing, superb 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Can truly understand how Manyata is feeling
N how much she misses her family 😭
Aww, poor Jagat, he really loves Jai
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃


Thank you so much
I am glad that you appreciated it
Indeed she lost her family her eyes
Thing will sort out but maybe it will be too late
Tomorrow I will update
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey all my exams are over and now I will update both my ss during weekends as I am free for the next five month lots of good news for this ss is there but will be revealed slowly so enjoy the sixth chapter of "REALITY CHECK"

Chapter 6

The morning birds woke him as his body ached due to the uncomfortable sleeping position. He was so habituated to the palace bed that now it seemed next to impossible to sleep on the cold station floor. But he did not paid much attention to that as he sat there looking at the moving trains , he was certain about what he would do next, no matter what but he had to do this, he had to stay away from jai so that she can be happy as he watched the first train making his way in the platform. His heart beat fast, as he knew it would be the end of everything. He took a foot ahead and closed his eyes tightly

. the servants had searched each corner of the palace as being asked on by udayveer but jaggat was to be found nowhere. Uday was aware that at times Jaggat tends to miss his breakfast but he would never sneak out at night. He was also informed that jaggat did not even return home. Uday called the driver and the driver informed that jaggat got down mid way. He then went to Jai room and entered with taking permission. There he saw the most beautiful senerio of nature jai was in manyata embrace as his princess was feeding her but putting all thoughts at the back of his head he asked

UDAY: jai do you know where is jaggat?

They both looked alarm, as manyata already felt his presence and clenched tighter to jai in a feeling to never separate her as jai replied

JAI: YOU SHOULD BE KNOWING BETTER ABOUT YOUR SPY YUVRAAJSA

UDAY: spy what are you talking about jai

JAI: don't you lie I do know you had send him to spy on us isn't it so

He was shocked but things needed to be cleared as he declared

UDAY: no jai he was not my spy he did not know anything I came to know from the wedding card


He sat there for hours examining the atmosphere, his life was now colorless, his love his manyata was gone with someone else, he did not want to fight her destiny and make her his as he knew a princess deserve none the less but the prince that is what he is always taught and his father had asked him to devote his life to their happiness and that is why he scarified his love for her leisure. But since a past few days he was not keeping well symptoms were quite alarming and he was pulled to the clinic by his colleagues. Finally the doctor called him for his report, as he went inside he felt a shrill pain running down his spine, his x ray was laying there as he sat down the doctor was bold enough to blurt out with very less sentiments in more of a curt tone

DOCTOR: I am sorry Mr Verma but your reports show inheritance of tumour. Did anyone in your family had tumour?

He did not howl or cry, he was calm if life wanted to end this way then he was ready to sleep eternally as he said

AKASH: my dad had

DOCTOR: so it is very clear you have inheritance it from him and ...

Akash did not want to hear more, as his disease came to him like a boon as he asked the doctor

AKASH; how long will I survive

DOCTOR: I cannot say you have some test to do to cure but maybe that will prove little help

Akash had his attention driven to another side, he finally could known why god gave him this life, finally he could do something for his love as he said

AKASH: doctor I want to donate my eyes


All his high forces were used to search for jaggat but there was no trace of him. Jaggat was like uday own brother. Uday felt so lonely and someone had wounded his heart deeply. They may not have a blood relation but to uday he was more than his own as jaggat was the only person who saved his life for the sake of helping another human not for saving a Yuvraaj and excepting some reward. He paced back and front, his mind was restless, a part of him was missing and after so long he could actually feel his heart beating. They were in a state of panic , as jai sat there crying and manyata trying her best to console her , uday was busy in the phone , he contacted all his high sources it had been more than 24 hours his brother was missing and jai could never forgive herself for this , the reason jaggat went missing was because of her , she wanted him back in her life , she needed him back in her life ,. She loved him but now she felt helpless just when uday driver made his entry inside the room. His white dress covered with stain of blood and his head was bowed down as uday sensed something and screamed at him

UDAY: what happened?

DRIVER: Yuvraajsa we found jaggat ...but



done with this chappy
i did my part and now its your turn
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so that i can improve more
i hope you all like my work

Edited by chocohollic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wuhuu! Am the first to comment!

OMG! Mona, is Jagat dead???(hope NO)

I really feel bad for Jagat and for Jai too but it is her fault, just waiting to read what happens next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey mona the update was quit shocking
first that akash got tumor now he is out?(feel pity on him)
scared for jaggat
no manveer
over all it was very emotional
wow r free for 5 month hats good
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai, its very nice part. I felt bad for Akash. Pls dont make Jaggat die. Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update monaa hope jaggat is fine
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Posted: 11 years ago
WO awesome update
I really hope jag at will be alive!!
oh my this all went so wrong!
so akash wanna donate his eyes.
I guess to manyata!
awesomely written yar
update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

👏👏👏awesome 👏👏
it was amazing
ummm i like akash in this ss
no plzzz dont do this with jagat plz
but over all chap was great
thx for pm plz update soon
bye
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome part, so nw aakash will donate his eyes to manyata. Hopefully jaggat is f9 pls...
Hey pm me the nxt update pls... N cont ASAP

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