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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

awsome chappy mona.
felt bad for akash.
oh no wat happened to jagat.
enjoyed it so much.
continue soon mona.

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Nice Chapter !

Loved it ... 😳

Feeling bad for Akash ...

The twist you put of donating eyes was really good ... 👍🏼

Where is Jaggat ?

Waiting to read more !

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Hey... Mona...

First of all...

I am really sorry for the late comment...

Anyways...

The chappy was awesome...

I am really really happy after this update...

Shukar hai Akash is going to die...

And usse bhi zyada khushi is baat ki hai ki...

He is donating his eyes to Manyata...

Chalo kuch toh acha karega...

Main yahi sochti thi ki Manyata kya hamesha aise hi rahegi... ( I know I am being dramatic)...

Ek aur khushi ki baat...

That everything is now cleared to J...

But yeh kya...

What happened to Jaggat...

I hope he is not dead...

And its just an accident...

Update soon...

And thanx for the PM...

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Hey Mona di
How u? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
The update was amazing 👏
Loved it ⭐️
Plz don't make Jaggat die
I feel extremely sorry for him
In a way, I'm happy Akash is going to die
Glad he thought of donating his eyes to Manyata
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Hi Mona, Sorry about replying so late ... ... circumstances are not allowing me to be on the forum; as much as I used to be😔! Coming to the update ... it was FANTASTIC👏. Awesome Mona , very well written! I hope Jaggat is not dead; that would be a real tragedy😭. But I'm glad that Uday clarified the misunderstanding with Jai😊. Akash's part was rather sad ; he is terminally ill; yet he has so much nobility in him - in that he wishes to donate his eyes😳. I think that's a applaud-worthy gesture. U know what ... U ARE THE ONLY PERSON ON THIS FORUM THAT HAS WRITTEN AKASH'S CHARACTER SO POSTIVELY😉. Well done👍🏼. Please do continue soon, very eager about the next chapter😳. Thanks 4 the PM😊.

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Hi nice update
feel bad fr akash
jagat ko kya hua use mat maro
do pm me nxt time n update soon

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: nishaya...
Wuhuu! Am the first to comment!

OMG! Mona, is Jagat dead???(hope NO)

I really feel bad for Jagat and for Jai too but it is her fault, just waiting to read what happens next!

Congratulation for being the first to comment
Well I would maintain silence rather than spoiling the twist
Will be updating tomorrow evening

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: roopali15
hey mona the update was quit shocking
first that akash got tumor now he is out?(feel pity on him)
scared for jaggat
no manveer
over all it was very emotional
wow r free for 5 month hats good
update soon