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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey friends!
Just thought to write a one shot based on the last pre-cap. I was in a rush and it didn't turn that good, and I'm sorry for the mistakes. Please leave your comments!

Wicked Game

Shivani knew it was now or never. She has to run away from the life she would enter in a couple of hour's time. She wanted everything that had happened to her to fade into oblivion, besides her Daju's happiness. She did know the hardships that not only she, but her family has to face at the hands of Abhimanyu. She knew that she had to keep up the honour of her family but she had to keep them away from the deep well they would fall if she gets married to him. She tried her level best to inform her Daju about Abhimanyu but he never believed her.

Raghu halted for a while to take in the scene around and then walked up to Shivani who was walking up and down near the gate of the mansion. Dressed in a red sari, she looked more like a blooming red rose with her hair flowing around her shoulders. She looked breath taking. His heart drummed harder when he saw her dressed as a ready-to-be bride. He shook his head thinking about his foolishness for he has no right even to look at her like that. But his hungry eyes and untamed heart never obeyed the orders of his mind.

'Baby ji, aapne hume bhulaya?' He asked walking behind her.

'Oh! Thank you Raghu!' Shivani said, holding his hands while trying to hide her nervousness. Little did she know that a single touch of her send shock waves throughout his body and soul.

Shivani has no time right now for recriminations. How could she explain everything to Raghu now? Oh! She would become crazy soon. She touched her forehead, still wishing that her Daju would understand the evilness of the double faced man who was keeping him in the dark.

'Raghu! Take me to the Mandir' her voice sounded more like an order to him.

'Ji, babby ji' he followed her order as usual and opened the door of the car for her.

They drove to the Mandir in total silence. Raghu kept on stealing glances at the nervous princess sitting next to him. He even opened his mouth several times trying to ask her what was happening, but he was held tongue-tied by her restlessness.

'Baby ji' Raghu said as Shivani remained unmoved when he opened the door for her.

He outstretched his hands to touch her shoulders, but put his hands down remembering his master's words at him.

'Baby ji' he called her again.

'Baby ji' He called louder this time and with much hesitation he touched her shoulders, bringing her back to senses.

Shocked, Shivani almost jumped out of the car and went into the Mandir, while Raghu followed her.

'Pandit ji' Shivani called out, loud enough even for the people nearby to stare at her. The old Pandit came running to and ask if he could do anything for her. Knowing how close he was to her Daju, she warned him not to inform anything to him unless she finishes her business there. Raghu stood there, amazed at this woman who was so brave to stand up and face the adversity.

'We are getting married' Shivani exclaimed taking Raghu's hands in hers and asked Pandit to arrange everything as soon as possible.

'Lekin...Baby ji?' Raghu tried to speak.

'Lekin wekin kuch nahi...You are doing what I say' Shivani cut off Raghu's words.

'Ji baby ji' Said Raghu, nodding his head obediently. He felt an unknown terror and a feeling of joy running through his nerves at the same time.

'Aaja beti' Pandit called them, and just as a servant obeys his master, Raghu followed Shivani's order and sat on the Mandap. Pandit completed all the rituals and finally declared them as a husband and a wife. Shivani thanked him and stepped out of Mandir, while still holding the tears gathered into her eyes.

'Why? Raghu why is this happening with me?' Shivani let her tears out as she sat in the car and poured out everything she had been keeping with her. Raghu sat there stock-stilled looking at his newly wedded wife who was weeping uncontrollably. He wanted to hold her in his arms and comfort her, but hands never reached her. He was just a helpless man who could do nothing to help his wife when needed.

It was two hours later that they stepped into the Mansion and a servant come running calling out' Baby ji aagaye'.

'What?' Balwant asked, as happiness took over his already worried face.

'Shivani has come' he said to Abhimanyu who was with him.

Just then Shivani appeared to the hall, with a mangal sutra and warmala around her neck and a sindoor on her forehead. Raghu followed her slowly fixing his gaze on the floor.

'See, Dada ji! I told you that Raghu has kidnapped Shivani and now he even married her' Abhimanyu added fuel to the already burning flame of anger within Balwant, who slowly walked to Raghu and slapped across his faced and said get out!'.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well writtenloved reading itšŸ˜›will love to see such scenes in the show😳raghu is so loyal.he didn't even think twice to fulfill baby ji's order.how sweet but one thing-pls spare him in the os atleast 😳.why the hell daaju slapped raghu here too😔?!he should slap his granddaughter this time .do continue the os šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great OS. I can actually see tomorrow's epi proceeding very much like that (except for Raghu's feelingsšŸ˜† - shock yes, the rest...not yet for our shy prince😳😃).

Looking forward to the chance of reading some more of your writings.šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS well written.šŸ‘

The way that you have described the precap it could imagine that it might very well happen this way. šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow . Gr8 OS . Loved Shivani and her way of thinking. Hope that Raghu dicides that marriage coz I want to see him as a mard not as an obeying servant, atleast in OS . But what you wrote goes with the theme of the serial. šŸ˜‰
loved your describtion of Raghu's feelings . Hope Shivani feels something too. After all he is a handsome man. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snigdha_Khanam

Well writtenloved reading itšŸ˜›will love to see such scenes in the show😳raghu is so loyal.he didn't even think twice to fulfill baby ji's order.how sweetbut one thing-pls spare him in the os atleast 😳.why the hell daaju slapped raghu here too😔?!heshould slap his granddaughter this time .do continue the os šŸ˜›



Thank you so much! Your comment means a lot to me :)))
I wrote this in a hurry and wanted to post before today's episode so it didnt turn out well :(

I too want Raghu to act more tough like a guy, but I have a feeling that Raghu will obey Shivani likewise in considering marrying her!

I hope Daju slaps Shivani too, coz she's also responsible.

As this is a one shot based on the precap I tried to go with the storyline :)

PS. Love your emoticons šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS...šŸ‘ Very Well Written... šŸ‘
Continue If You Can...šŸ˜›
I Loved Read More From You... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum OS.. loved the way u described Raghu's feelings..
Please continue.. šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one, waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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just brilliant
you should continue it .
i must say you write really well .

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