The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

small part written

do you guys want it?

full part will take till Next monday😕

Back is still not 100%

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: dqno1
small part written

do you guys want it?

full part will take till Next monday😕

Back is still not 100%

take rest re..

update can wait..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

take rest re..
update can wait..

I am posting it Mannu...

Will write the rest soon 😃

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HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#934

First of all

Thank you so much Avi

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Second this is one of my fav song from this movie again😳

Coming to the update it was superb

very well woven bringing out the complications of their respective love lives

Dev worried for NT and Geet too untracable😒

but glad that Dev acted fast and roped in the Commissioner of police atleast now they can trace there whereabouts soon

Plus if Brij and Suraj are influential so is Dev

Aakhir saari Delhi ka attraction hain😉

NT emotions taking a toll over her and she did commit a blunder😲

Hope she is able to escape in time😕

Maan's pov cleared the picture

so this was how the misunderstanding happened

Geet did'nt turn up at the party which I'm sure there will be valid and strong reason to it😊 Please love triangle mat create karna Avi🥺

But loved the whole update yaara

very well written down the way u described not only their emotional turmoil but the surroundings was truly commendable

Simply superb!!!!!

And a special thanks as u didn't stretch the saddy part and quickly ended it😃

How are we to wait ab

Monday kab aayega😔

Thanks for updating

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#935

Dono taraf saddie saddie situation...

Maan is feeling betrayed but it is misunderstanding no????

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Posted: 11 years ago

#936

awesome dear😊

naina is in danger .dev is feeling restless

geet is waiting for maan and maan is thinking she betrayed him😔

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#938

THIS WAS A SAD UPDATE

ALL FOUR LOVE EACH OTHER BUT CIRCUMSATNCES ARE AGAINST THEM

DEV THINKS THAT NAINA DOESNT CARE FOR HIM WHILE NAINA WANTS TO SAVE HIM FROM HARMBY KEEPING HERSELF AWAY FROM HIM

MAAN THINKS GEET BETRAYED HIM AND DID NOT VALUE HIS GIFT WHILE GEET IS STILL WAITING ON HIS ONE PROMISE

DID SHE GET THE LOCKET

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Posted: 11 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: gurti30
awesome dear😊
naina is in danger .dev is feeling restless
geet is waiting for maan and maan is thinking she betrayed him😔

Thanks 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: punam2712
THIS WAS A SAD UPDATE
ALL FOUR LOVE EACH OTHER BUT CIRCUMSATNCES ARE AGAINST THEM

DEV THINKS THAT NAINA DOESNT CARE FOR HIM WHILE NAINA WANTS TO SAVE HIM FROM HARM BY KEEPING HERSELF AWAY FROM HIM

MAAN THINKS GEET BETRAYED HIM AND DID NOT VALUE HIS GIFT WHILE GEET IS STILL WAITING ON HIS ONE PROMISE

DID SHE GET THE LOCKET?