The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 93

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi


Hamedsha ki tarah gala kharab
*cough cough*😭


Awww... sending Dr. to care 4 u😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leksh

first of all... sorry for the late commanding...


now come to updates...
part 38...

hmm... kya baat hai ajj kal geet ki nenden udi hai😈... hayee lagta hai self control ki tips sirf maan ke liye nahi... hamari boli bali geet ko bhi chahiyea😳😊...
maan babu ye kya kar diya hamari geet ko...
vaise itna acha dinner mila hai, wo bhi hot and handsome MSK ke saat... aisi sapna tho banta hi hai, right...😆



ho these gossiping girls...

i hate gossiping... 😡😳( actually me and my friends always gossiping about anything around as... 😳films, stories,serials, people around as, other friends grps,etc etc... come on girls and gossiping is go alone hand in hand right...cant help it... but not hurting types k🥱)

then the problem must be eavesdropping... actually no she doesn't mean to do that...right😕

hayye jo bhi ho... agar vo ek part nahi hota tho geet ek pyari smile aur meeti goodnight ke saat shayad vo shyam katam karta...

but still vo part undono ki kuch differences ko dikaya... may be the differences actually the societies pointed out when such jodies are made, other than their selfless love, trust and understanding between them...

i like the part where maan asked geet about her change in mood, and the way he handled that and change her mood.


vaise kehana padega, hamari geet jitni naive and innocent hai , maan uthna hi mature and understanding hai...👏


then our maan nakul ki jodi...😆
vaise maan nakul ki kiddnapping vali idea kahi use tho nahi karega...
vaise idea kafi ache hai...bachake rekna kabi kaam ayenge 😃...


aur kabir and megha... kya baat hai... first phool lekar theater ke samne wait kiya... phir pipe se chadkar gaya aur khana kilaya... this boy is head over heels in love with megha...😃
phir kehata hai... iam not good...


yaar tumari jodiyaan bhi kamal hai...
ek vo tara, jo dev ki safty ke liye usse apne pass ane hi nahi dete...
phir ye kabir, hamesha megha ke pass athe hai, phir apne apse kehata hai ki mein uskeliye tik nahi hai...
phir hamari mannet, itne pass aye phir bhi kuch bhiii nahii bolta...

apart from all these things, they all are connected with one link... love,

Awesome update...
very nice...

vaise ek baat poochu, vo kyan tha jo megha ke balcony ki niche tha???????????
maan tha kya jo shayad megha ko check karne aye the ??????? right????

jaldi surprise kholo tik hai...




haiyee itna pyaara comment.

you made my day 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CrabbyEntity

geet is such a sweetie pie she z such a sweet simple girl wd simple dreams...and her dreaming abt maan and more so her reaction to her dream was so cute...so now maan's actions and words hv started meaning much more to her but i guess a girl like her wd never stop thinking on the lines on which her mind keeps drifting to often... a few words frm others and every word n action of maan's seems to take a back step and there stands all the so called norms of the society only if she knew how much she means to maan there z not a single thing that goes unnoticed abt her frm him...i just luv the fact how geet's character z a medium connecting all other characters in the story the bond she shares with each one of them... each character cares for her though diff reasons..she had nobody except her daarji but now seeing hat she means so much to so many people is so overwhelming ...i luvd dev evn more the way he got so protective abt geet listening to her and the fact that geet was talking abt his own brother brought a certain excitement in me to see all of them together in a single frame and seeing the bond geet shares wd dev i can't help but to think how tara and maan wd bond together n tara's reaction seeing her bambi with dev's brother...
really luks r deceptive and first impressions r not to b considered last for there z much more thn meets the eye & that every chest houses a aching heart be not deceived with its outr appearence...hvng kabir's first intro in mind i could hv never anticipated him to b a guy he has appeared to b lately the intensity wid which his and megha's story z described z superb...the helplessness,the turmoil,to keep rejecting the luv of his luv of life and the consequences,pushing her away yet she heals his wounds... really beautiful paradoxes woven together...and then there is dev and tara's luv they drive strength frm their luv not to fall week bfore the other and give in she wants him to leave her alone and dat z exactly wht he is not gng to do... it was really sad to see a dejected dev and to register the resignation in his voice was just not the dev we r used to see a total contrast to wht we hv seen earlier...all the six characters r equally strong with their specific personalities and charms and its really enticing to see the gradual unfolding of their personalities👍🏼
and then their is nakul...he z one of a kind his and maan's conversations are the stress busters btween all the chaos its enough to crack all the serious stuff gng on otherwise!!!
luvddd the updates 👏👍🏼😊
thank u soo soo much for the updates and pm's!!!😳🤗


I am glad that you saw Geet the way I was trying to portray her. Glad you are liking it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unres my comment on Pg 124
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leksh

part 39...

hmm...it seems that dev had made a big hole in the wall that his i-star made between them...

tara bhi na... apne hero ko bachane ke chakar mein usse ka dil thodthe hi rehta hai...


ye pari na bohut confusing hai... innoent hai ya immature hai ya nagetive hai ya positive character hai kuch samjh mein nahi a reha...


khurana brotheres ka relation bhi ajeeb... maan ka yeha na hote huwe bhi usiki kahi huyi baaten shayad dev ki help karega...
vaise ye part mujeh incomplet lega, dev ki reaction bhi chahiye tha... shayad... vo kya sochta hai... kya usse uski swal ka jawab milla ya nahi... aisa kuch tho chahiye tha, shayad... its just my opinion...

vaise surprie element ke liye acha hai...

area... maan ne geet se jane se pehale kuch khaha nahi... 😲😔
ye dono bhi na...


vaise tara ke saat kuch hone vala hai kya... ????


nice update... a emotional one...
😭😊😃
waiting for your next update...


Thanks Leksh. I am loving the comment and the pics..😃
You are right this part had to be cut off cause I could not type more..😕
The continuation will be next...
Thanks for the support😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Superb update Avi

😃

Tara-Chandan Papa relation insight yet again but this time Tara's POV
NT feeling guilty about pushing Dev away from her
Dev totally broken as NT is not letting her guards down🥺
But NT is right if Dev had been confused about NT's behavior earlier but now witnessing the present series of events he is sure to go for the kill
Now its to be seen how long NT can resist his charm😳

Dev-Tara moment was so sweet and natural
and Dadi witnessed it😎
Chalo Dev has a new support😊

Pari😡

NT masking her feelings and Dev too lost

Dev- Geet convo so affectionate and stirring
some revelations, some confusions but still a clarity of thought and resolve!

Missed Maan😳
But this update to me was like a setting up of a base before the drama unfolds and
Time for bygones to be bygones
A new begining!

Hiding face and running away
😕

Thanks Avi for the lovely update
🤗

Thanks Heytal😃 Mooh kyun chupa rahi ho?😆😆 Maine toh kuch nahi kaha...😆😆
I am glad for the support and encouragement always😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi


Hamesha ki tarah gala kharab
*cough cough*😭

Oh no! Nauri haldi wala doodh degi..😃
Take care Sheen! Tu jab bhi kaam bhi jaati hai, teri tabiyat kharab hoti hai...😲
I think kaam ki allergy hai...😆😆
🤗 Get well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
y res??😳 updating???
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Posted: 11 years ago


u updating??? y didnt u open a new thread???

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