FF:Zindagi Ban Gae Ho Tum 3rd update : pg 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi all 😛
thought of writing ff missing kriya alot tough i,m not good 😆 will write wht cmes, in mind silly things and also short ff 😳 also other reason inspired by 2 multi talented writers 😆 kroopa and snigs dii 😳 so if ff not up to mark advance sorry for that just bear wid me 😆
ZINDAGI BAN GAE HO TUM
Birds r singing Sun rays coming through curtains of room 😛 new day new beautiful morning arise 😛
And a voice cmes ( uth jao beta it,s 7.30 am )
By hearing these words an earthquake cmes in a room full room mess up for finding things as one beautiful gorgeous charming girl awakes and shout ooo shit 😲 it,s 7.30 I,m late I,m late nothing new in this beta u r always late 😳 mom u r making my fun Wht can I do not my fault my sleeping fault sleep loves me alot 😉
Yeah yeah I know pagli 😛 cme have ur breakfast 😊
No mom I can,t I,m already late where is my love ohh god plz help me 😕 mom mom mom where is my love u know na I,m half widout my love
Mom : I know my princess there,s ur love (it,s glasses of girls ) 😆
Ok mom have to go my bus cme do pray today my final I,ve to win muahZ mom 😛 bye 😛
While going someone calls her name PRATIGYA and she stops turns to c and it,s her best friend papa u forgot to take my blessings dost
Pratigya :ohh 😲 sorry Pa 😳 pray for me 😛
Pa:best luck my blessing wid u always go ahead 👍🏼
She is pratigya Saxena daughter of Shaym and naina Saxena 😊 fun loving caring emotional gorgeous and lost in her dreams 😛 had one brother adarsh Saxena and sister in law komal Saxena and grand mother 😊 pratigya is in her college 😊

Room full of darkness pin drop silence windows closed room wid full of peace 😳
Someone lying on a bed close eyes bt wid open mind thinking deeply and goes to sleep 😳
And then tink tink tink an alarm starts ringing and someone wid strong body off alarms wakes up take bath and suddenly doors knocks and a lady says u woke up took bath so soon
😲

And someone turns strong manly hot voice cmes no maa it,s perfect time for me 😳
KRISHNAA 😛 beta bt u slept late at nit u shld have taken some more sleep 😕
Krishna :maa u know me whtever time I sleep I wake up at my time and even I can,t sleep after 6.30 am 😛 my coffee 😳
Maa: yeah yeah ur coffee I,ll send u !! Change then cme for breakfast ur dad and me waiting for u 😛
Krishna:ok maa bt make sure ur laadli shld b there too 😆
He is Krishna singh thakur son of sajjan and sumitra singh thakur decent attractive hot sexy yet single 😳 has one sister GANGA 😊Krishna had completed his study and is on a way to find😛
Hope u guys like it will continue 😳😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start!!!!!
Waiting to find out how they'll meet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hope2

Good start!!!!!
Waiting to find out how they'll meet.

thankx dii will update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww awesome start...love it❤️ missing arja a lot😔 plz continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelyarja

aww awesome start...love it❤️ missing arja a lot😔 plz continue.

me too missing them will update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely ff you write very well.👏

Love how P likes to sleep in and K always gets up early.😆

Waiting for the next update and their first interaction. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Lovely ff you write very well.👏

Love how P likes to sleep in and K always gets up early.😆

Waiting for the next update and their first interaction. 😛

glad u like it 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thankoo for posting it 😳you're very decent girl😆Great start😛Loved the intro😃waiting to read the 1st update😛do update soon😉Insipred by me😲🤣?/how sweet😳!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snigdha_Khanam

thankoo for posting it😳you're very decent girl😆Great start😛Loved the intro😃waiting to read the 1st update😛do update soon😉Insipred by me😲🤣?/how sweet😳!!


Welcme and Thankx for sweet comment 😳 😆
Yup will update soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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glad that u r writing new ff mind-blowing introduction muskii 😛 it looks very interesting story eagerly waiting for updates

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