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Posted: 11 years ago
read it one go and loved it
is par geet?

the Parveen Shakir poem in first part is my favorite :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update

loved it
waiting for next part
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aaj update ka chance hai kya??
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waiting muski
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Posted: 11 years ago
No update of Masoom also... Me sad...

Di waiting eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
who is pari& rahul
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me waiting muski
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow new story ...
I just came to know about it today n read all three parts in one go...
must say totally new concept n very different shade of geet...
but liked it very much...hope maan ki pari geet ho...
Plz update soon...
and best wishes for cutties...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for starting new story ...
mujh laga tha after ending ur ongoing stories u will stop writing but thank god aisa nhi howa...
Keep writing plz jab tak possible ho...
this is my 100 post..my first post was on kashmakash thread 😊 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 4

Daadi tried to ease him " hum sooch rahen the we could search ur pari too
he dipped his hands in the cold ice water that was kept next to the broken ice pieces, burning that sparked through his nerves failed to match the flames that has his heart in anguish.
Daadi hissed in pain seeing him like this " lekin Maan aap kab taak sachiyen se baag the rahen ge.
He knew he had been running away.. running away that made him what he regretted. He had everything easy for him since childhood. He was smart plus gifted with intelligence & looks to meet it. He had a loving family. Parents, Yogi Singh Khurana & Radha Singh Khurana who where madly in love with each other.
Successful business in suburb of NYC that his dad Yogi Singh Khurana had established by his hard work alone. Maan was pampered beyond limit. He had everything & anything he wanted. His Daadi was adorable friend & successful business women herself in India.

NYC
Geet was not very keen on meeting Andrew with her schedule today. She got ready lazily after tucking Rahul in his bed. She kissed him & her dad good night & took a cab to the restaurant where Andrew had invited her.
She was dressed in a stylish light pink dress matching sandals & jewelry. She checked her lips stick in the small mirror she carried & walked in. The waiter helped to the special seating that was booked where Andrew was already waiting. He looked bit nervous. She looked at him little cautiously unsure.
He got up & welcomed her with a kiss & smiled bit awkwardly
geet " r u ok?
He gulped down some water " yah I sure
During the whole dinner Andrew was silent. Geet tried to talking, trying to lighten the feel.

She wondered why bother for dinner if he had to be so aloof. he could always do that alone at home right, why drag her into it. not that she can be of any help.. clearly she is not!!!


Waiter came up with the menu to take order for dessert
Andrew instead asked for another drink
geet looked at him in concern " haven't u had enough
she never likes to interfere in some ones life. Not that she really cared that much but yah technically he had already had lot many drinks & its not good. Knowing Andrew he can't handle so much of alcohol & she doesn't want to drop him home now.
Andrew slowly slipped a cute blue velvet box " I love you
he managed to whisper
geet closed her eyes disappointed.
Andrew immediately slipped the box back in & pleaded " I goofed up right
geet sighed wiping her mouth with the napkin
andrew " just listen to me once
geet " we have gone over this Andrew. U know I don't like all this
andrew - don't u like me
geet took a deep breath - frankly I do. I really do. U r a very nice person
she smiled naughtily hot in bed too
he held her hand - then why can't we just give it a chance
geet - come on Andrew u know I don't believe in all this stuffs
dammit she was not even comfortable saying it
he got really disappointed & sunk in his chair further
geet - don't do this. We were so great together
Andrew - exactly
geet - then why r u complicating things with all this ring & all
Andrew - I am not saying we would get married immediately. We could just get engaged for now. Then spend some time together & see how it goes.
Geet - no she said in frustration
Andrew - is it because of Rahul?
Geet already had enough, she just discarded her napkin & rose to leave
andrew threw some dollars & ran behind her.
Andrew - common geet, give us a chance.
I really love u
he spoke defeated
geet sighed & looked at him seriously - I don't believe in all this. I don't know why r u bent upon ruining our relationship. It was all so perfect
she really hated losing this cute relation they had. It was awesome & beautiful. right now she hated him so much to have ruined it all for the sake of.. whatever he calls it.. dammit
Andrew - but I wanted more
geet - well I don't have anything more to offer
she just got into the cab tired. She hated when people got hurt. He was sweet friend, she never wanted him to get hurt.
she took shower & cutely snuggled next to her dad. he smiled warmly wrapping her closer.
Next day Sahsa walked into the cabin throwing questions at Geet
common geet u didn't just walk out on him
geet rolled her eyes & looked back into her files
& u r fine with it sasha stood planking her hands on her hip
geet raised her brows "what exactly do u expect me to do"
sasha threw herself in the chair "frankly"
geet looked at her
sasha " sulk"
geet gave a strange wired glare " u were the one wanting me to stay away from him"
sasha " thats because I didn't want him to get hurt"
geet - & I thought u r my friend
sasha laughed " actually I wanted u to take relations seriously for once. & I knew he is not ur type."
u & arjun I really thought u guys will get married but then u broke up with him too after college
geet " u know it was just a fling"
sasha " seriously .. 3yrs long"
geet " what ever"
sasha " he was good"
geet " so was Andrew"
sahsa " then why u keep pushing all this lovely people away from ur life"
geet " I don't understand why can't people accept me for the way I am. Why does every one want to change me"
sasha " no one wants to change u sweet heart. Its just that they want a lot more of u. whole of u"
geet gave up - see this what I don't understand. I need my space. & all this ring & commitment.. whole me.. is just bullshit"
sasha could feel geet was getting worked up, she immediately changed the topic " how was the ring"
geet bit inner of her cheek " gorgeous"
sasha " seriously"
geet " huge one diamond in the middle.. really huge"
sasha shook her head & walked to her desk - & u said no
geet cutely sadly nodded as if it never mattered
please leave me comments & likes it really means a lot
love
muskan
- PART 3 PREV NEXT PART 5 -
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago

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