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Hello everyone...
this is my first EVER story..
i know you people write flawlessly...and i stand nowhere , i very very well know this...
but its just i wanted to put forward my writing or you may say needed openion of some pro writers like you people...so i landed up here...its just one story (in parts)...please give your feedback..and as i said its my 1st story so i dont know any rules (if there are any )
i know i am bad in this so i am prepared for all sorts of comments..but please ek do to achhe comments de deejiga...ill complete this only if you all like it else ill not torture you...and yess i am seriously UNDERCONFIDENT😊 so very sorry if this post itself turns out to be a torture for you all...
-sakshi
[ In this story all the charecters are same as in the show...its just the story is Bit different from the present format of the show...Arjun has taken revenge from sikandar..but he is still the same arjun( atleast that is what he shows)..the equation between arjun and sameer is sorted out..and they are best buddies now...Shree,Chotu and Liza are same as in the show...our miss Anand is also the same ...Ayesha is also the same , she is now sakshi's best friend and her equation with Arjun is gonna change...]
this is my first EVER story..
i know you people write flawlessly...and i stand nowhere , i very very well know this...
but its just i wanted to put forward my writing or you may say needed openion of some pro writers like you people...so i landed up here...its just one story (in parts)...please give your feedback..and as i said its my 1st story so i dont know any rules (if there are any )
i know i am bad in this so i am prepared for all sorts of comments..but please ek do to achhe comments de deejiga...ill complete this only if you all like it else ill not torture you...and yess i am seriously UNDERCONFIDENT😊 so very sorry if this post itself turns out to be a torture for you all...
-sakshi
[ In this story all the charecters are same as in the show...its just the story is Bit different from the present format of the show...Arjun has taken revenge from sikandar..but he is still the same arjun( atleast that is what he shows)..the equation between arjun and sameer is sorted out..and they are best buddies now...Shree,Chotu and Liza are same as in the show...our miss Anand is also the same ...Ayesha is also the same , she is now sakshi's best friend and her equation with Arjun is gonna change...]
...😊INDEX😊...
Chapte 1 page1
Chapte 1 page1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3719754
Chapter2 page5
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3719754/arakshi-ff-dil-ki-awaaz-chp19-updt-imp-pg-58?pn=33
Chapter9 page38
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91724915
Chapter10 page 43
Chapter9 page38
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91724915
Chapter10 page 43
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3719754&TPN=49&#p91833580
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3719754&TPN=53
LINK TO THREAD 2...
( Chapters 13-19 )
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3734329
LINK TO THREAD 3...
( Chapter 19-29 )
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3750778&PID=92848914&#p92848914
LINK TO THREAD 4...
( Chapter 30-36 )
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3782125
Thank you
[To be continued...]
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[IN ETF Office...]
'Yar kitna maza aega na ! ' said sakshi excitedly
'Haan yar kitne time bad humlog ko ek sath free time spend krne ko mil ra hai' Shee joined
'Haan yar na sameer sir ka DAMMIT sunne ko milega and na hi arjun sir ka SAMJHE YA SAMJHAUN ? ! said Chotu happily
'Seriously guys...and sakshi vaise tune decide kia ki tu kya pehenne wali hai shadi mein ? Liza asked sakshi joining the three
'Yar phir shuru ho gya in dono ka !! Tumlog bor nai ho jate pure time kapdo aur fashion ke bare mein baat kar kar k ?? I maen HAR time ???? Shree turned towards liza with a disgusted expression
'Oh please !! look who is talking ? jo pura din apne laptop and gadgets se chipka rehta hai vo BORE hone ki bat kar ra hai !! Liza taunted shree
Guys not again i beg of you please not again...!! sakshi said annoyinly
Han yar DAMMIT aur SYS ke sath sath hume apne TOM AND JERRY se bhi off de do please...chotu addded
So guys humlog kab nikal rae hain ?!! sakshi asked turning to everyone in turn
'vo..vo.. 'shree blabbered
bolo na kitne baje ka plan hai ? sakshi asked again
'vo ..sakshi...arjun sir..ne ..vo..' liza tried to explain
please yar dont tell me ki you all have decided k hum arjun k sath ja rae hai ??!! sakshi asked with a big question mark on her face
'Kyun apko koi problem hai Miss Sakshi Anand ??? a voice came from behind and every one turned to see arjun who was standing with his hands crossed on his chest and staring at none other than our very own miss anand...
'vo..actually nai..par..'sakshi stammered
'Well in that case hum yaha do din aur ruk rae hain' arjun said cutting her short
'Did he just say HUM ?? sakshi whispered trying to recollect what he said
'Yess i did Miss Anand !!- arjun said with a loud and stern tone and continued 'Yahhan pe thoda paperwork bacha hai to vo khatam karke hi mai a paunga AND kyuki ye month ka end hai to mujhe apki report bhi chaie..Miss Anand' arjun said to a confused sakshi
'lekin vo to main vaha bhi...'sakshi tried to explain but arjun cutting her short said in a commanding and taunting voice'Agar kisi ko yad nai hai to mai bata doon ki report publish hone se pehle ,main report padhta hun taki kisi ki bevkoogfi ke karan public tak koi aisi vaisi khabar na poch jae !! '
To this sakshi in a defencing and loud mode said 'Ap mujhe mat sikhaiye ki kam kaise kia jata hai, i know my work very well !'
'Vo to mujhe dikh raha hai, kam se zada logo ko shadi ki padi hai as if khud ki hi shadi ho' arjun said taunting her
'FINE tumhe tumhari report mil jaegi , and haan hun mai excited kyuki ye meri best friend ki shadi hai !' sakshi said getting annoyed
'Ye mat bhulo k tumhari best friend ki shadi mere dost se ho rai hai ! mai to pagal nai ho raha !
'ise pagalpan nai khush homna kehte hai, khair chodo mai bhi kisse bat kar rai hun..THE ARJUN SERYAKANT RAWTWE!! sakshi said in a mocking way ( others were just a spectators to all this always but this time shree gathered all his courage and said 'Sir mai kya keh raha tha...' before he could even form his sentence in sakshi's defence arjun added cutting him short'Vaise to koi case hai nai but agar tum chaho to i can assign you certain work, ETF mein kam ki kami nai hai shree ...SAMJHE YA...SAMJHAUN ??
'Nai sir mai to bas yai keh raha tha ki..( turning to sakshi) Sakshi work comes first ! sir bilkul thek keh rae hai...!! (liza laughed at this but controlled herself)
[after an hour...]
'guys its 8 !! we should leave warna train miss go jaegi ! said liza loudly
'chal sakshi bye take care of yourself..parso milte hain..'chotu said turning to sakshi
'sorry yar sakshi ' shree said with a sorry face
'Kisi aur ki galti ke liye tum kyu sorry bol rae ho shree...kuch logo ko khud to enjoy karna ata nai hai aur dosro ko bhi enjoy karne nai dete ...well i guess meri khushi cheenne ka copyright leke aya hai ye akdu bhagwan ji k pas se..!! chalo you guys enjoy...achha hai ab mujhe shadi mein kam nai karna padega...ill be like a chief guest you see 😃...'sakshi
said giving her trademark smile and wishing happy journey to her friends
(shree, chotu and liza left for their journey and sakshi resumed to her work with no other choice being given..)
[after 2 hours...arjun's cabin..]
(arjun was busy completing some paperwork , sakshi entered)
'Ye rahi pehli report aur baki ki teen reports pe mein kam kar rai hun to vo bhi apko kal subh tak mil jaengi...'sakshi said keeping the file on the table with a sad and angry tone
'Aur agar main ye kahu k mujhe sari reports aj hi chaie to ??' arjun added turning to her
'FINE'- saying so sakshi turned to leave, and reached the door when he said from behind..
'Chalo mai tmhe ghar drop kar do..' sakshi could not make out any sense and connection between the two sentences and said
'But abi to tumne kaha k you want the reports to ab ..? ' she perplexed
'But ab to main keh raha hun na k tmhe ghar chod do..chalo..' saying so he got up and left , leaving her behind
'this man is beyond my thinking !! ' saying so she followed hesitantly
( Arjun heard that but before he could throw a question before sakshi his mind did its part and he thought ..why did he not allow her to leave with others ? why did he offer her to drop all of a sudden? did he feel bad when he saw her sad ? It was not so urgent that he had to ask her to stay back and finish the work even he knew this..then why ??
There were many questions but no answers...or there were ??
Even if there were none knew...or may be it was known also, but no one was ready to accept it..or may be our ACP needed some time or some TRIGGER...
[to be continued...]
How was it ?? please do tell ill be waiting...thank you..
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