ARAKSHI FF : DIL ki Awaaz....:) chp19 updt[IMP Pg 58] - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey first of all really really sorry for not commenting earlier on your story...was so busy at work and home...work is crazy and will be crazy till sept 30 ...u known fiscal year ends..so lot of work to do...
anyway...I m totally loving how story is progressing...Arjun had started caring about Sakshi so much that he does not even know ...So finally their ride have started ...Sakshi's explanation about personal in chapter 6 was superb..I mean what was that...hehehehe...Loved it..
then Arjun and Sakshi small bickering on food..great...Arjun is I think discovering whole new Sakshi everyday and he himself is getting suprised by her getures...Sakshi;s ordring two thali's ...that was another hilarious part and then those goons...ACP Arjun Rawte ho toh action toh banta hai boss...loved how Arjun came on listening Sakshi's voice and saved her from goons...I hope he does not get angry at Sakshi...chalo ab gussa ho gaya, khana ho gaya, action bhi ho gaya...ab toh romance hi hona chahiye.😉 u understand what i mean...waiting for next part and update soon and your story is going at superb pace...i m totally loving it and finally thanks so much for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shaleenrocks

Hey first of all really really sorry for not commenting earlier on your story...was so busy at work and home...work is crazy and will be crazy till sept 30 ...u known fiscal year ends..so lot of work to do...

anyway...I m totally loving how story is progressing...Arjun had started caring about Sakshi so much that he does not even know ...So finally their ride have started ...Sakshi's explanation about personal in chapter 6 was superb..I mean what was that...hehehehe...Loved it..
then Arjun and Sakshi small bickering on food..great...Arjun is I think discovering whole new Sakshi everyday and he himself is getting suprised by her getures...Sakshi;s ordring two thali's ...that was another hilarious part and then those goons...ACP Arjun Rawte ho toh action toh banta hai boss...loved how Arjun came on listening Sakshi's voice and saved her from goons...I hope he does not get angry at Sakshi...chalo ab gussa ho gaya, khana ho gaya, action bhi ho gaya...ab toh romance hi hona chahiye.😉 u understand what i mean...waiting for next part and update soon and your story is going at superb pace...i m totally loving it and finally thanks so much for pm...


Please dont be at alll !!
Thank you soo much for reading AND replying !!!!
Thank you very much for liking my story...Yes he is caring but is it real care or somthing else ull cime to know in my next update...Yes finally they are on their way...!!!! Thank you for liking it m happy you enjoyed it and it did not turn out somthing silly...thanks alott..!!
Thanks for liking that food thing also...i knoe it was not that funny but just wanted to add some kind of talk...coz our ACP is quite quiet while driving so had to bring him out and what better than our bhukkad Sakshi...!! Yeah hes shocked , surprised, irritated ,and what not by our Miss Anand...!! hehehe...Arjun has always been doing that no ??? hehehe sving miss Anand...!!Angry or no angry u'll have to see in the next update...and i know i know...but truly speaking m badly ignoring that...i really have NO idea hoe to write that ...i cn bring a situation but i really need time to bring that in my story...
Thank you soo much for liking my story ...an PM is all my pleasure...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago



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Hello guys I am back with another part...thanks a lott yo all those who commented liked and also to the silent readers...thank you very much...


Recap...

Sir...ap chinta mat keejiye...khaki mein aj bhi itni takat hai ki vo kisi ke bhi rang uda de...aur jab tak ap jaise officer's hum logo ke liye examples dete rahenge tab tak hum log kabhi apni raah se bhatak nai paenge...Jai Hind Sir...' he said and left...

...

[Chap 9...]


(Arjun turned to Sakshi...and without saying anything went near the SUV...)

(Sakshi now was confused to ask for mercy for them or for HERSELF...she just followed him ...)

Arjun...vo mai...'

How dare you Miss Sakshi Anand ..!! Jab maine tumhe Saf Saf mana kia tha ..to lock the door and STAY INSIDE...then what the hell were you doing outside ??

Arjun vo main...'

Kya arjun ??haan kya arjun...!! Tumhe ek baar mein kahi hui baat samjh kyu nai ati hai ?? Kyu tum har bar aisi bevkoofi kar deti ho ki tumhai vajah se sabko problem ho jati hai ?? I really don't get tumhari problem hai kya ?? Pehle vo train ek stupid se reason se miss karna..then all of a sudden office se bina btae gum ho jana...aur ab ye !!! Mere mana karne ke baad bhi tum car se bahar kyu ai ???

Arjun vo mujhe vo...'

(Arjun pinning her to the SUV...)

Look Miss Sakshi Anand ...!! I don't know tmhae dimaag mein har time kya chalta rehta hai...and i m not at all interested also...just a request jab tak hm log sath hain for god's sake do as i say...Tum meri responsibility ho ...vaha pohochne ke baad whatever you want to do you do ...I don't give a damn !! Lekin for time being GROW UP Miss Sakshi Anand !! please grow up...!! come out of your fairy land !! Life koi mazaak nai hai..har samay hasna har samay mazaak karna...If your life is perfect does not mean sabki life perfect ho !! Apni akhe kholo , Keval apni khushi nai dosro ka dukh bhi shayad dikh jae...aur tumhari fizool ki hasi band ho jae...

(Sakshi was badly crying now...she really did not know how to react to this...in the mean time a man came to her and said...)

Madam ji...ye apki bottle...ap vahi bhool gai thi...' the man said and turned to go

Thank you bhaiya...' sakshi said wiping her tears and trying hard to give her trade mark smile...but was unsuccessful... and the man went

Kya hai isme...??' said arjun without turning to her

Vo..isme..vo ..kuch nai hai...bas...'

(Arjun with no patience left snached the bottle which was not closed properly and the liquid oozed out on sakshi's hands )

Aouch...!!' screamed sakshi

(Arjun turned the very next second...and saw sakshi holding her hand...which was red by now...)

Kya hua ?? Dikhao...!!'

Nai kuch nai bas thoda sa ...i am fine...lets go...'

Show me...i said !!

(Grabbing her hand he looked at it ...it was burnt...)

(He saw the bottle and what he saw shocked him...'Cutting Chai...?? he whispered

Vo actually mujhe laga may be you need it toh mane socha...'


Flashback...

Lock it and don't you dare come out !! Ab SAMJHE YA...SAMJHAUN ..???'

Sakshi : Dhang se pani bhi nai pene dia !! Adku kahika...pata nai achank se kya ho jata hai ise...Where's my water bottle..?? Here it is...thank god mai apne sath bottle le ai nai to paani ke liye bhi iss akdu ki permission leni padti...huh...Vo kya hai ??? Chai...!! Arjun ko abhi puri raat drive kana hai...aur aaj to usne ek bhi bar apni cutting chai nai li...lekin Sakhi uska SYS bhool gai !! Lekin chai bhi to important hai !! Aur phir SYS kaun si nai baat hai !! Jab tak vo aega mai leke a bhi jaungi...aur a bhi gaya to zada se zada ek aur SYS mil jaega...kam se kam chai to hogi ..age pata nai mile bhi ya nai...

(Thinking so she came out...this is when those 5 men noticed her and came towards her...)

Men 1 : Akele akele kaha chali ja rai ho ??

Men 2 : Hum chale tumhare sath...

Men 3: Poochna kya hai..chalte hai na...vaise bhi iska hero to lagta hai ise chod ke chala gaya...

Men 4: Arey koi baat nai yaar ... Hero chala gaya to kya hua ..hum to hai...vaise bhi ..itni der se uske sath thi..bore ho gai hogi...hum to 5 hain...

Sakshi: Dekho tum jante nai ho tum kisse aur kiske bare mein baat kar rae ho...

Men5: Arey jaan pehchaan ke liye to poori raat baki hai...itni bhi jaldi kya hai ??

Sakshi: Dekho i am warning you...agar apni bhalai chahte ho to Arjun kea ne se pehle yaha se chale jao...else tumhe ko idea bhi nai hai tum kisse dushmani mod le rae ho...

Men 2: Achha to hero ka naam Arjun hai...aur tu kya hai Dropadi ?? hahahaha...

Men 1: Arey bhai lekin paanch to hum hain...pandav to hume hona chaie tha !! Aur ye humari Dropadi !!!! hahahahahaa

(Its just a reference...in Mahabahrat there were 5 pandavas and Arjun was one of them ..and they had a single wife named Dropadi...)

(Sakshi just tried to ignore them and went and gave the bottle to the dhabewala to fill it with tea .. 5 of them followed her and after sometime they encircled her ...Sakshi was trapped now..one of them came close to her and grabbed her hand ...and pulled her to the car ...)

Leave my hand !! Hath chodo mera !!!! How dare You !!!! '

This is when Arjun heared her voice...


[Flashback ends...]


Arjun did not know how to react...to fell sorry ?? But she actually did not follow his instructions...!! To be angry ?? But she went out for him...!! To be thankful ?? But anything would have happened if he would have been late even by a minute...!! To be worried ?? But he did not care about her..she was just a mere responsibility...!! Or she wasn't ?? Was she a mere liability ?? Then why did it pinch him so badly seeing her in pain ?? ?...

Questions were increasing in number and the number was increasing of unanswered questions... Did they have any answer ?? Who had the answers ?? May be the answer was inside them or may be not... Time will tell will these questions be answered or some questions will remain unanswered always...

[To be cont ...]

[So How was it ..??? I know i know may be that Dropadi one was bit more...actually i felt thoda zada ho gya but still please bear with it this time...I am having my tests these days so could not afford to rethink and write again...AND yes I have prepared INDEX on first page in case you missed or miss any chapter...PLEASE DO GIVE YOU FEEDBACKS...Next part will be updated very soon because I am not very satisfied with this part...please do give your feedbacks...]

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Posted: 12 years ago
I know I know MEN nahi MAN hona chaie tha so PLEASE...SORRY...!!!😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update...I knew that Arjun would blast her...feel so sorry for Saakshi, she went out all the way just for him, but he is right in his own way as well. Anything could have happened to her if he was just a mere second late

Please update soonnn...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome post!
so she disobeyed him for him..to get his cutting chai!
Cute...loved it
cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome! Mainu bahut vadiya lagya tera update.
oh ta bechari ohde vaaste cha lain gayi si, te hun ohte hi ohne apna saara gussa utar ta:(
Bad ACP, pehlan ohdi gal ta sun lenda
P.s. Ghar pahunch ke tumhare reply ko check karungi :-P
Hun Samjhi ya Samjhavan :-P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you soo much for liking it...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Great update...I knew that Arjun would blast her...feel so sorry for Saakshi, she went out all the way just for him, but he is right in his own way as well. Anything could have happened to her if he was just a mere second late

Please update soonnn...


Thank you soo much for liking it...!!!
Yeah afterall our ACP is not thattt calm ...and Miss Anand was also too much this time...neither of them were wrong on their part but...afterall SHE is more important than his CUTTING CHAI...!!
I'll update very soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome post!

so she disobeyed him for him..to get his cutting chai!
Cute...loved it
cont soon!


Thank you soo much for liking it ...!!!
Yes...what other than ACP himself would have compelled anyone to ignore his SYS...
Thanks for liking it..
Will update very soon...
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