Originally posted by: Japonica
Finally found the time to read this new one of yours A.
Funny, I'm reading it on a day when I am in a similar state of suspension between the real and dream/ nightmare, wondering what I'm doing and why!
The description of the state of being suspended in the dream, just like an aircraft feels as it is about to land, at the beginning of chapter 3 was stupendous. So many times I've had that eerie experience when I am asleep and dreaming, yet there is prt of my brain that is fully aware of what's going on around, including the fact that I'm dreaming, yet not being able to do anything, while my limbs feel heavy with the sleep.
Khushi's state has sucked me in so totally, that i'm not even going to attempt to make sense of it. Mercifully, you have told us that you have the story written, I'll wait for you to create sense for me.
Is it a 'little' bit mad??? Boy, in the state I am in, it feels completely and scarily mad!! Get us out of this dream like state soon, Aria.
Brilliant writing!
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