Swaron os: Feeling Incomplete

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Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Aww my Vikram! This was one awesome OS. Actually yeh tera pehla OS hai jo main padh rahi hoon aur mujhe bohut bohut acha laga!
Yeh padh ke mera mood ON ho gaya 🤣

Ab toh mahine mein do baar likha karo aur apni behna ko bolo post karne ko!

Edited by nami2811 - 12 years ago

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Simply awesome os! Why is swayam so perfect? Sharon is really very lucky to have him!

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paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Swayum is sharon's lover boy trully.. in sickness and in health.

nice one., specially the ending. i had imagined the exact same ending in the show as well but pretty women was good too :)

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swaronloverme

@swaronloverme

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome os

I really liked the way u potrayed swayam's emotion

thanks for the pm

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Sakshi you write so awesome! You wrote an OS for my bday which was superb and this is moree superb than that!
Woh 10 days toh bahut sad the -_-
But jab swayam jaisa boyfriend ho toh kisi ladki ko aur kya chahiye!! Sharon is soo lucky i tell you :p
And coming to your OS you perfectly showed what swayam shekhawat can do for his lady love and till what extent does he cares for sharon.
Sharon's pov was nicely explained, that even she was dying to see him.

Lovely writeup :)
Thanks shilpaa for posting this n for the pm!