Swaron os: Feeling Incomplete

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys... Dis is an os written by my behna Sakshi for the 50th SWARON||VRUSHAN AT celebration... Most of you must have read it n those who have not pls do read it..
She is inactive these days as she is in hostel but even den she has written dis for all her friends.. pls do read n leave ur valuable comments n likes.. it means a lot to her..


SWARON OS: feeling incomplete!!!!!


10 days... God damn 10 days.. I asked him full in attitude, not to even look at my face and come into my vicinity these 10 days.. But dint thought it would made me suffer as well... Oh I so miss the magic to be around him.. Completeness to he in his arms.. Pleasure to see amount of love for me in his eyes.. Enjoyment to tease him.. And above all to look at his adorable face... I could feel the pain of separation more than him I guess. But u have to be away from him.. I hv to convince him.. I dont want to stay away longer and moreover I dont want him to get sick... OMG why the hell you take so many tests of people in love...



Love the word that made her blush to the deepest shade of pink.. She was truly deeply madly getting affected by this feeling.. It was running inside her body along with each drop of blood.. As her each heartbeat could pronounce only one name

Sharon- Swayam Swayam Swayam...

She mumbled and then smiled shyly and hid herself inside her duvet to avoid anyone seeing her profuse blush...

9 days 12 hours and 53 minutes.. She was counting looking at her phone and then made a puppy face ..

Sharon- how am I going to stay away from you...

Still lost in his thoughts she heard her ringtone.. Without even checking who it is she smiled.. She knew who it could be???

She picked up the call and said..

Sharon- To tum nahi maanoge???

Swayam- arey!!! Aur kitna maanu??? U asked me to stay away from you.. Itni deadly cheez I am following.. And dont worry.. Phone se cp nahi failta...

Saying so he laughed.. She could hear his laugh. What a melody it was.. She smiled and said...

Sharon- I love your laughter...

Swayam- and I love your blush..

She blushed more..

Swayam- yeah a lil more...

She smiled and said

Sharon- pagal ho tum..

Swayam- tumhare liye..

She smiled and said..

Sharon- Accha ab you sleep.. Kal you have to handle the cultural events planning and kitne time se we couldn't have any fest in our college.

Swayam- oh to ms perfect gs is active again.. Yes ma'am..

Sharon - better...

Swayam- ab tum plz gs ke role se meri gf ke role me waapas aa jao..

Sharon- ohkay!!! To Swayam my love.. Go to sleep.. As its late and you need rest...

Swayam pouted..

Swayam - ye accha hai... Dono roles me nuksaan mera hi...
Sharon laughed and said

Sharon- good night swayam..

Swayam- but..

Sharon- Swayam.. You are precious to me so I want you to stay healthy... Aur uske liye abhi you sleep... We'll talk in morning...

Swayam- precious ??? Me???

Sharon- yes!!! More than any treasure...

Swayam- I so love you Sharon...

Sharon- feelings are mutual my lover boy...

He smiled and said

Swayam- not fair... I dint understand...
Sharon- omg I've got a buddhu bf..

Swayam- ab to I am yours.you cant do anything about it..

She blushed again.. How the lord he manages to do that...

Sharon- I love you.. A lot se bhi bahut zyada...

Swayam smiled and said..

Swayam- your words make my life heaven Sharon... I love you...

Sharon was aww at his cuteness and the way he made her feel special yet again...

Sharon- good night.. I am dying to meet you..

Swayam- and I am already dead..

Sharon- Swayammm...

Swayam-Accha sorry baba... Good night and do take care of my princess... Love you..

Sharon- third time love you too.. Good night...

Saying so she cut the call and smiled.. She opened the voice she recorded while talking to him and listened to it.. She badly wanna hear his voice and could speak to him overnight but she dint want it to be difficult for him.. So she forced him to hang up...

She closed her eyes listening to the worlds sweetest melody ever.. Those three words from him for her..

"I LOVE YOU SHARON"

She could hear it whole night...

Hearing his voice she slept and landed directly into his dreams... Next day..

She opened her eyes with the message tone of her phone and not much to her surprise it was him as usual..

"good morning sweetheart... I hope you are feeling better.. I know you hate to be at home so for your tp I've sent you something.. Open your Skype"

Sharon was so pleased.. She has always failed to understand how come he manage to get to know what she is feeling..is this the level of his love or height of her luck... She smiled and kissed the message..then she thought "Skype"...
She opened her laptop and as soon as she logged in he was there flashing on her screen..

SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT CALLING

She smiled and was about to answer with video.. She stopped and messaged him..

Sharon- oh to its your trick to see me..
Swayam- :-( plz once..
Sharon- no...
Swayam- Sharon... Pox wont affect me online <3 plz..

Sharon smiled at his restlessness and she herself was dying to see his adorable face but she teased him a lil more..

Sharon- old dialogue mr.shekhawat.. Try something new... :-P

Swayam- ohkay.. So mis rai prakash doesnt want me to talk to her.. Ohkay as
Your Wish Is My Command

She smiled and called him.. Within a sec he answered back with video and there he was.. Same adorable face same same deep.brown.eyes same love in those eyes with a little glitter of happiness.. Same killing smile and same cute hair. She kept looking at him or rather say staring at him.. Oh how hell she misses him around her...
She was looking at him god knows for how long and then she heard him

Swayam- So someone is missing me..

This brought her back to reality and she couldn't help blushing... She was caught staring at him and he was in front of her grinning.. The only way to get back was to slip into her diva mode...

Sharon- you have only 5 mins.. Shoot !!!

Swayam- thats unfair...

Sharon- everything is fair in love and war my boy...

Swayam- I am gonna kill that person jisne ye line banayi..

She giggled and said

Sharon- 4 Mins 25 secs..

Swayam- ohkay ma'am... Accha listen since you might get bored at home why dont you pass ur time.. So for it I am sending you some.files have a look and if anything not understandable let me know...

She smiled..

Swayam- how much time.is.left??

Sharon- 1 min 20.sec

Swayam- kya.. Mai bhi itni si baat bolne me itna time le liya..

Sharon-1 min

Swayam- ok ok ok.. Plz do take care aur tension mat lena and I love you.. And I am missing you..

Sharon- I love you too.. And I am not missing you.. I am dying without you.. See you 8 days later..

Saying so she cut the call..she knew if she would be there he would surely catch her actual condition.and she would.not be able to stop her tears..

She looked at the files he sent..

There were two folders one she opened and found were the details of the college event and he has sent her each and every possible point and has put a sticky to tell her what she need to approve...

How adorable is he.. She thought.. Doing work would relax her...
She opened another folder and found his and hers pics and dances till date and a sticky.. Mujhe ya dance ko miss karo to ye folder open kar lena.. It'll help u to relax..

Her eyes now brimmed with tears.. Tears of joy.. Tears of love.. Tears of being blessed... She opened his picture and maximized it till it was zoom to cover 17 inches of her laptop screen.. She kept admiring him and kept blushing...

Day by day it was making her hell difficult to stay away from his embrace.. Daily he use to do something cute to dont let her feel lonely at home..

She had always wanted a guy like him. Who inspite of knowing her in and out her weaknesses and her complicated nature would stand by her always...
How cutely he dint let her feel low on the marks she was afraid to come in front of the world..
His unconditional love has proved her to be the luckiest person on the earth to have him all hers... .

It was the day of her return.. He insisted to pick her up but she denied and forced him to meet in the college.. He had to agree and she always got failed to understand how easily he listens to her and keeps all her words..

She entered and the whole gang was waiting for her in the BB court.. He was there too.. As soon as he saw her she saw his eyes becoming a lil moist and her view too becoming a lil blur and thats when she realized ki it was tears to feel complete.. She saw him and he saw her.. Avoiding rest of the gang and entire college she ran upto him and hid herself into his chest feeling complete now.. Here.. In his arms...


with love,

Sakshi...


Ps: pls dont forget to like n comment.. she ll feel really happy to see d response.. thank you for reading..


Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Behna🤗🤗🤗

am so so so lucky to have a sisy like u... seriously tu mujhe kabhi kissi bhi cheez ke liye no nahi bolti n ur always der for any kind of help i need...
ur nt here but phir bhi u helped us so much for d AT celebrations😳😳

Coming to d os dis is so brilliant sisy👏👏
i ve read it like 3 times before n one more time now...
dis is beautifully written..
sharon ke POV se brilliantly u have written it..

I simply loved it yaar..
Der convo.s were so cute dat i could not stop blushing myself..
Swayam itna perfect Kyun hai.. Woh already world ka best boy friend hai yaar..
D cute cute things he did to make her feel special were so heart touching..
D pain in both der hearts for not meeting each other was clearly seen..
Dat skype call Wen she he was like mein itna sa bolne mein itna time laga diya dat was dam cute..
I love swayam yaar
Brilliant os saky 👏 👏
Ur one my favourites sisy 🤗
Tu yahan ho ya nahi ho don't stop writing..
I love to read ur works..
Swaron you 🤗

Luv,
Ur sisy 😊
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey my swthrt(my pagal)🤗

This is one of the most adorable OS i have ever read😃😃...her love for him..selfless...she is ready to bear pain to see him healthy...her desperation..his adorableness ...😳😳😳

Her blush ...his laughter ...i loved the way u kept the reality of SwaRon intact ...pagal ho tum...tumhare liye...ahaaa...those words were blissful...i loved loved loved the adorable conversation ...the teasing ...the care..the endless love...

I loved the skype convo...the desperation of swayam to see her...it was pure magic...u made me love them even more.,...

Love u baby...keep writing

Love
Deepika
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is so beautiful i loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was simply amazing...just totally loved it... 😊
poor majnu boy trying all his attempt just to get glimpse of his lady love...
and laila who is eagerly waiting for 10 days to get over...
they both are simply adorable... 😳
loved their convo...bechara Swayam...just got 5 mins to talk to his love... 😆
his just simply perfect bf...who knws itz gf really well... 😃


Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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10 days of Love
Gud Wrk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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10 days of Love it
Gud Wrk ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesomeee OS sakshiii...👏👏
the skype part poor swayam was sooo desperate to see her sharon...
thank u sooo much for the PM sweetypie...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb and lovelable os... loved it...
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I read d OS at the golden jubilee of AT
N trust me I loved it...❤️

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