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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KiranlovSriti

Shusi you deserve this yar 👏👏👏 so sensibly you solv things in between Jagya and Gauri, all scenes written so beautifully, Jagya Gauri face of, Shivs entry and then Jagya Gauri talk. Awsum I was very excited and curious to knw wat will happen in next ff and you rockd it.

if i deseve thisClap
you all deserve this🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sushiani


</div>if ideseve this👏
<div>you all deserve this🤗

thanku 🤗 hope next ff me Rat ka kaam v tamam ho jaye..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 9:
He said , "ok ". Ganga also followed him .She was happy that now doctersaa is free from all the ties of his past. She asked, " doctersaa , You are happey aren't you know." He nodded in yes. He looked at her she was looking beautiful in that red chiffon sarree. "Have I told you? You are looking beautiful in this saree." he said looking admiringly at her. She was happy to get the compliment from the one she was waiting for.. She smile but her happiness din't last long. The mobile in her bag vibrated.
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She need to go n take the call up. An accident has happened and now she was not ready for his threats but she has challenged him this time so attending his call was must for her.

"Dr.saa , I forgot to give medicines to Mannu.. I will go n bring them you just hold Mannu", she said it in a hurry n left the place..He was confused by her behaviour and wondered "what could be the reason behind it." He looked at Ganga who was rushing out.
Meanwhile, Lal singh, Bhairon,Gehna and Sugna entered the hospital they came across ganga who was walking in a hurried manner.
Basant shouted ,"Everything is fine Ganga?". Ganga's heart skipped a beat when Basanth shouted. " yes..Everyone are fine..Room no. 4, ground floor.."she replied.
Lal, BS, Gehna n Sugna were shocked to see Gauri.. Basanth was about to shout.. but Gehna stopped him by holding his hand.He was surprised by her gesture... she was signalled him to look at her hands.. she was smiling n holding wedding invitations. He controlled his anger and Gauri observed Gehna's condition.She smiled and stepped out of the room.
Meanwhile Near the Parking Place:
Ganga gathered strength she held the mobile n called him.. Ratan received the call.He was expecting her to call. He decided to put her under pressure , he gave a evil grin n cut the call..
Ganga was shocked at this.. She was tensed ,"what new game is this!!". She called him again he did the same. She was sweating even in the monsoon's cool breezes. To her surprise this time Rat called her , she was about to.accept the call.. but the mobile switched off displaying 'LOW BATTERY'. she was disappointed.. and left the place was walking towards the entrance.

In The Hospital:

"How the hell did i forget to tell him about the baby which died due to natural abortion."she thought herself.
It was a very tough phase for her. She can digest pain but not insult n rejection that was the reason why she din't like singhs but their son did the same. He left her , rejected her proposal infront of all near n dear and slapped her on face. It was too much for her, she couldn't handle the peircing looks of her colleagues who gossipped about her. When she was informed that she was pregnant she decided to abort it and it happened naturally due to the stress she had at the time and meeting Dr.Aman khanna was a different story.
Gauri heard someone shouting loudly very close to the reception.She was surprised to see sanchi shouting at Ganga.. Sanchi was blabbering in her high pitch voice.., "You are the reason behind it , you illiterate woman..".
Ganga wanted to gived a good nice reply to sanchi but looking at Anandi's face , she calmed down. Anandi tried to calm her weird nanand but she failed. Gauri with a serious tone asked her ," Will you just stop shouting like hell.. this is hospital. If you have any personal issues go out and fight. Dare not to speak loudly hear."
Sanchi was not in mood to listen, she turned towards Anandi and started ,"You and your social service.. was it that necessary to give shelter to this illiterate villager.. ohh! how did i forget you are also the same right. cleaning mud n dirt ,cooking ,washing eww you do things which servents do.. you all are same. Il.." before she could complete the sentence someone slapped. Sanchi became dumb for a while. It was sumi.
Sumi was completely disgusted at her non-sense, "I thought i was wrong by blaming you for an unexpected accident but you proved me wrong.. I was right to blame you for this accident."
Gauri thought the things are going personal so she must leave the place and she stepped out of the room.
Sanchi tried to explain but sumi stopped her, "You have called Anandi and Ganga iliterates.But for your information Anandi is first woman who pursued B.A degree and Ganga has just given her board exams . Servents does the work for money but we woman do it out of love n gratitude towards our family . You will not understand all this because you are so blind ." said sumi and left the room like a storm .

At The reception:

"What could have been the reason? Sonething is bothering her. She smiles a minute n next minute she looks tensed. Is someone irrritating her.." he was thinking and continued ,"Is it sanchi? yes , it might be possible.. everytime when she looked sad she had a talk with sanchi .Either it be when we were packing up to udaipur or when i took her to shopping mall.. " his thoughts were given a brake when mannu pulled his tie. Mannu was playing wiyh his collar n the badange left hanging back of his left ear.It caused a tickling sensation n he chuckled.
"Arrey my dost , please forgive me.."he held his face with his palm n tickled him . Both of them were having fun. It was delightful sight for Gauri who has just observed them. She smiled looking at them.
She thought to herself , " What does I give him by saying that he has lost another child because of my stupidity. Seems his good deeds gifted him son in form of Mannu.. Why taking out the happiness.."she realised she has tears at the edge of her eyes and also observed that jagya was looking at her.
He narrowed his eyebrows n asked, "What? What happened?". she smiled ,"Nothing , won't you introduce me to your best friend."
"Mannu beta meet Gauri aunty." he said teasing her. "I am not aunty.." she was argued.. "Aaunti.." said Mannu in his cutest voice.
Gauri melted ," Aww!! I am in love with word aunty now.." by saying this she pulled mannu's cheeks.
"You are so lucky Jagdish to get a friend like him. Have u ever thanked Ganga for what she has done."she looked at him..
He said "No..". " Look that girl, Anandi's nanand whatever her name is blaming Ganga for nothing .Take her out she will feel better." Gauri replied.
He nodded and left the place and rushed to the room so that he can take Ganga out for a while. Ganga was standing quitely looking at sumi sumi who was sad n angry at same time.
"Ganga, come out once.. please. Gauri said we must go and bring some medicines from other place.. come" he said in a serious tone. sumi said her to go with him.
Jagya was surprised of his ability of saying instant stories.. for a moment he was on cloud nine.She asked him worriedly , "Anything serious dr.sa? why medicines from someother store.But for whom?I asked the nurse she said there is nothing serious.."
Her rapid fire questions irritated and amused him."Stop questioning please. Someone needs a treatment and that someone is very important to me." he was talking to her in a loud voice. She was shocked to a bit but shook her head.They both sat in the car .He was driving and his usual habit.. he adjusted the mirror so that he can take glances of her.
Mannu was sitting in Ganga's lap. Mannu switched on the radio and clapped. Jagya and Ganga both smiled at him .
He was driving fastly.Monsoon it is the smell of wet soil n cool breezes had it effect on Ganga .She her stressed eyes were relaxing . The song playing in radio was old ones.. and it started to rain.

chukar mere mann ko
kiya tune kya ishara..
Badala yeh mausum
lage pyaara jag saara

Jagya was taking glances of her. She was looking out of the window enjoying the song. She closed her eyes and her hair were making waves in air. He smiled and looked back at the road."She was hiding all this sanchi's non sense from me.." he was thought to himself.
Car stopped with a jerk . He stepped out of the car to check the problem . She just remembered that he has fresh wounds on his forehead. she took the umbrella place mannu in the seat and stood beside him holding umbrella. He asked her ,"Ganga go inside , you will be drenched in rain." he applied some some pressure n pushed her a bit. The place she was standing was slippery due to mud.. she slipped and he caught her by waist..
Just then Mannu changed the channel and the song 'Hum Tum' was playing..


Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum Hum Tum
Tum Hum Tum
Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum Hum Tum
Tum Hum Tum
He was staring at her beautiful face .He gave her the grip to stand but she slipped further into the damp surface. She almost hugged him now... She looked up helplessly at him. He was lost in her eyes completely.. The perfect round eyes attracted him. He put the hair spread on her cheek behind her ear ,softly brushing her cheek.She was embarassed.
Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum Hum Tum
Tum Hum Tum
He was back to his senses when a speed car passed next to them with its continuous weird horn sound.He was surprised for what he has done.He poured some water in the coolent and sat in the seat. Ganga was totally embarassed at that time. She just sat calmly hugging Mannu like a teddy bear. He changed the radio channel but Mannu again put the same channel back.. pushing his mom n pakka dost into embarassement.
"Mannu.." he said n started the car. He looked the other side cursing himself in a low voice, "What has happened to me..You are an idiot Jagya.. you are idiot.."
Ganga asked, "Woh.. where should we go to bring medicines..", "No, it was a lie.. i thought to buy icecream to Mannu.." he said in a hurry .At that moment he couldn't say that he wanted to take her out.
"Dr.saa , In a weather like this you want to buy ice cream?!?" she did laughed a bit . He was relieved at her response.. "Oh! yeah i am fool.Lets go back to Hospital.."

They drove back to hospital .

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so how was it.. 😃
Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why are you nervous ? This was a super update . . :) haay mannu is such a sweet heart for changing the channels . . I actually like Gauri and love that you made her positive . . Sanchi get slapped 😆 that was a surprise nowadays both of them are thick as thieves.. Update soon i wish we get such scenes on the show as well
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Eris-

Why are you nervous ? This was a super update . . :) haay mannu is such a sweet heart for changing the channels . . I actually like Gauri and love that you made her positive . . Sanchi get slapped 😆 that was a surprise nowadays both of them are thick as thieves.. Update soon i wish we get such scenes on the show as well

thanks vibz
mannu doing susu on sanchi..(I wrote it some where in previous parts)
sanchi getting slapped are my all time wishes😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sush,did he just touched her waist when ganga is wearing a saree.OMG!OMG!I am dead.And the song,hum tum,its my favourite.Lovely yaara,but why nervous!Gauri mujhe achchi lagi,strange,but all credit goes to you.Slap,sumi slapped sanchi,she shoukd have kicked her.Sush,fantastic.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its awesome awesome awesome Sushi 🥱 Sumi ka thapad to Sanch wow great one, and Gauri lov talk wid Mannu its surprizd Gauri becum so nice. Aww and the finaly the much awaited JaGan rain scene..it was so hot but very beautifull to and Mannu playing cupid 😉. shabash Mannu 😳 I actually imagine the scene. Full entertainment Sushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shankythebest

Sush,did he just touched her waist when ganga is wearing a saree.OMG!OMG!I am dead.And the song,hum tum,its my favourite.Lovely yaara,but why nervous!Gauri mujhe achchi lagi,strange,but all credit goes to you.Slap,sumi slapped sanchi,she shoukd have kicked her.Sush,fantastic.

tumhe acha laga..🤗
I was nervous because of @bold☺️
sumi slapped yes.. sanchi deserves more than that😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KiranlovSriti

Its awesome awesome awesome Sushi 🥱 Sumi ka thapad to Sanch wow great one, and Gauri lov talk wid Mannu its surprizd Gauri becum so nice. Aww and the finaly the much awaited JaGan rain scene..it was so hot but very beautifull to and Mannu playing cupid 😉. shabash Mannu 😳 I actually imagine the scene. Full entertainment Sushi.

gauri ko dr.khanna ne badal di..
thanks kiran glad you liked itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 12 years ago
Achcha laga main maar gayi yaar.Oh god that was sooo...awesome.Thanks sush.

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