here! i fixed the mistakes. 😃
Shiv:"Meri halat par hassi ah rahi hai tume... Acha hai...haslo, paas nahin aoonga mein tumhare. Humesha apni mann maangi karogi kya? Kabhi meri baat suni hai joh mein tumhari sunoon?... Kitni baar bola tha meri zindagi se chali jao, lekin nahin jaana tah tumhe. Aur ab jab bol rahan hoon ke mat jao tho...chale jao... Jao... Nahin rokoonga tumhe, lekin baar jitne bhi log hai, sabko bol kar jao tum... Ke mera dokha, us dokhe ke aage kuch bhi nahin hai, joh tum mujhe dene ja rahi ho... Meine kab bola ke mein acha pati hoon? Na meine kabhi koshish ki, aur nah kabhi tumse pyar kiya... Arre tumne toh barey barey vaade kiya teh... Kabhi saath nahin chodogi mera. Aur na jaane kya kya... Meine joh kaha, woh kiya. Sabko bata kar jao, nahi tho tumhaare jaane ke baad woh mujhse kahen ge...
Gauri:"Mere paas aaiye Shiv... Bahut kam waqt hai mere paas."
Shiv:"Apne waqt ki pari hai... Agar tumhaare paas waqt nahin hai, toh mere paas bhi waqt nahin hai tumse baatein karne ka. Jaanti ho kitne saare kaam hai mujhe? Kitna bara aadmi hoon mein? Mahen Kapoor ka beta, Shiv Kapoor hoon mein. Jiske naame ke peeche..."
Gauri:"Mera naam judaa hai... "
Shiv: Jaana zaroori hai kya?"
Gauri:"Majboori hai... Is baar mein.. mein aapki baat nahin sun rahi hoon. Mujhe uski sun rahi par rahi hai... Magar agli baar, mein apna karam, apne saath likh kar le aoongi... Mujhe jaana hoga... Mere paas aaiye Shiv... Mein jaa rahi hoon Shiv..."
Shiv:"I'll kill you...if you die I'll kill you, i swear ... I'll kill you" ....nahi jaane doonga mein....nahi jaane doonga...gauri!
gauri: "humara saath yehi tak tha shiv....bohut thode waqt mein, meine bohut saara waqt jiya hai aap ke saath....bohut saare uthar charav dekhe hai....magar aab mere terne ka waqt aa gaya...aab mujhe jaana hoga shiv...yehi mera karam hai.....
😭 😭 😭 bye gauri....you'll be missed.