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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vaani21

Sorry for the late reply!

Nice update, and you write very well👏
Thanks for the PM!!


thanks a lot vaani! 😳 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
frankly speaking..the music u embedded in your update was heart touching...i like soft music and it gave me a feel like i am in some auditorium where the picture is going on and i am mesmerized with the scenes and surroundings...thanks for lovely updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sp110

frankly speaking..the music u embedded in your update was heart touching...i like soft music and it gave me a feel like i am in some auditorium where the picture is going on and i am mesmerized with the scenes and surroundings...thanks for lovely updates...


thanks a lot anusha for the lovely comment 😳 🤗
i love this music too 😳 glad u like the scenes and surroundings 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

"Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

The flight had taken off and was stable in the sky now...it was raining below...this cloud filled with water was just a little below their flight...and the beauty of it was breathtaking...madhu, hesitating a little finally turned to look outside the window...and was left staring outside...

After a while, "rk mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho?"

Rk : kyuki main tumhaare andar chhipi uss choti si maasoom bacchii ko miss nahi karna chahta...bilkul waisi jo uss raat andhere mein aakar mere galle lagi thi..😳


Madhu just stares at him...

Chapter 24 - LONDON

In The Flight

Rk : aise kyu dekh rahi ho? ruko ek minute (and he gestures an air hostess to come to their seat)

Air hostess : yes sir, do u need anything?

Rk : yes! Get a blanket.

Air hostess : sure sir


After 2 mins the air hostess comes with a blanket and to madhu's surprise she opens the blanket and carefully puts it over Rk. Rk smirks at madhu when he notices her frown. The air hostess goes away blushing and a little embarrassed.


Madhu : rk yeh kya tha?

Rk : demo tha biwi, waise shayad mere left mein kuch jal raha hai 😈


Madhu hits him on his arm and says, "bilkul bhi nahi" and she calls out to the male helper who was distributing meals " can i have an Indian veg meal please?"😳

And he hands out one meal to her saying, "here madam"

Madhu smiles at him and says, "thank u and can please see why this screen is not switching on?"😳

"yes madam, one minute" and he bent towards madhu and faced the screen which was in front of madhu's seat. Rk was left fuming in jealousy

"here, done madam" 😳


Rk : ok ! thank u! (sarcastically) 😆

Madhu (while staring at her meal) : patidev! Mere right pe kuch jal raha hai ?

Rk : haan aur ab tumhein bhi jalaayega (winks)

And he just turned to kiss madhu on the cheek before madhu could even think anything or look anywhere.😳


Madhu looked at him bewildered. Rk winked back at her saying, "don't worry biwi! yeh british airways hai, yahan chalta hai!" madhu smiled while rk continued, "aur agli baar aisa kuch tumne kiya toh yeh kiss kahin aur hogi" and lets out an evil smirk.


Madhu : dekhte hain!

Rk : Aaahaan!

Mumbai

At the chawl

There is a knock at the door.Padmini opened the door and uttered, "raat ke 11 baj gaye hain...thi.." but,her words were cut midway and she found herself embraced in trishna's arms while trishna declared "maa! Maa mujhe film mil gayi! Maa main itni khush hoon ki bata nahi sakti" and then as realisation dawned on trishna that she was angry with her mom, she let go off the hug.


Padmini : tu baith yahan...thik se bata mujhe

Trishna : jaanedo maa


But, Padmini went into the kitchen and brought a sugar cube to feed Trishna. Trishna was excited and could no longer hold n to her anger so she started giving out the details, "aaj hi director ke saath meeting thi aur phir film ke baaki logo se milne ke liye raat ko ek party thi bas wahi se aa rahi hoon.." Padmini was listening with interest and both of them continued into their conversation while lying on the bed.


Trishna : maa main glycerine ko phone karti hoon. woh sunegi toh bohot khush hogi

Padmini : woh abhi flight mein hogi. Kal bata dena.

At London- Hearthrow Airport

Rk and madhu checked out and waited for their luggage to arrive.


Madhu : rk main kabse tumhein pooch rahi hoon par tum ho ki..

Rk : shant biwi! maine tumhein kidnap nahi kiya! Haan sachmein, dekho tumhaara phone tumhaare paas hi toh hai!

Madhu : arre phone, rk mujhe didu ko phone karna thaa, 9 baje hain main ek phone kar leti hoon. maa ne bhi kaha tha kuch baat karni thi.

Rk : Shh! Kitna bolti ho tum! madhu abhi wahan raat ka ek baja hoga , kal baat kar lena


Madhu nods a yes.


Madhu : rk tumne kaha tha hum spain jaa rahe hain, hum london mein kyaa kar rahe hain!?

Rk : paanch ghante mein joint flight hai,abhi paas hi hotel mein rukna hai. Ab sawaal-jawaab khatam ho gaye toh chalein? Hotel ki gaadi wait kar rahi hai.

Madhu : main nahi chal rahi Rk. Tum jaao!😆

Rk : thik hai. (and then he bent to pick up madhu)

Madhu : stop it Rk. (embarrassed)

Rk : kyu? 😈


And madhu starts walking ahead while rk smiles and follows, dragging along a suitcase.

Next day morning

In the hotel room

Madhu wakes up stretching her arms and notices rk besides her who is still sleeping and then her eyes stop at the clock on the wall and...


Madhu : RRKKK!!

Rk wakes up with a jerk and is shocked to hear madhu's scream.Sounding a little worried he asks, " kya hua madhu?" 😲

Madhu : rk time dekho! Humaari flight miss ho gayi! Maine kaha tha tumse alarm rakhne ko!

But, rk went back to sleep!!! Uttering, "so jaao biwi! koi flight miss nahi huyi" 😆

Madhu : jooth kaha tumne?? 🤔

Rk : haan kaha ! ab so jaao, phir salmaan khan se milne jaayenge! 😎

Madhu : rk tumne pi rakhii hai?

Precap :

Rk : biwi ab wish toh kar liya par, meri birthday gift kahan hai??


PS: i hope u liked it 😳 waiting as desperately for ur likes and comments as Rk is, for you know what! 😉

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

"Mistrusting trust"


Recap:

The flight had taken off and was stable in the sky now...it was raining below...this cloud filled with water was just a little below their flight...and the beauty of it was breathtaking...madhu, hesitating a little finally turned to look outside the window...and was left staring outside...

After a while, "rk why are you looking at me like this?"

Rk : because i don't want to miss the hidden little innocent girl in you..just the same who had run to embrace me that night in the darkness...😳


Madhu just stares at him...

Chapter 24 - LONDON

In The Flight

Rk : aise kyu dekh rahi ho? ruko ek minute (and he gestures an air hostess to come to their seat)

Air hostess : yes sir, do u need anything?

Rk : yes! Get a blanket.

Air hostess : sure sir


After 2 mins the air hostess comes with a blanket and to madhu's surprise she opens the blanket and carefully puts it over Rk. Rk smirks at madhu when he notices her frown. The air hostess goes away blushing and a little embarrassed.


Madhu : what was that?

Rk :was a demo biwi, isn't something to my left burning? 😈


Madhu hits him on his arm and says, "not at all" and she calls out to the male helper who was distributing meals "can i have an Indian veg meal please?"😳

And he hands out one meal to her saying, "here madam"

Madhu smiles at him and says, "thank u and can please see why this screen is not switching on?"😳

"yes madam, one minute" and he bent towards madhu and faced the screen which was in front of madhu's seat. Rk was left fuming in jealousy

"here, done madam" 😳


Rk : ok ! thank u! (sarcastically) 😆

Madhu (while staring at her meal) : patidev! isn't something to my right burning?

Rk : yes, now it will burn u as well (winks)

And he just turned to kiss madhu on the cheek before madhu could even think anything or look anywhere.😳


Madhu looked at him bewildered. Rk winked back at her saying, "don't worry biwi! this is british airways, here its allowed!" madhu smiled while rk continued, "and next time you try to act smart this kiss will find its place somewhere else" and lets out an evil smirk.


Madhu : we'll see!

Rk : Aaahaan!

Mumbai

At the chawl

There is a knock at the door.Padmini opened the door and uttered, "its 11 in the night...where.." but,her words were cut midway and she found herself embraced in trishna's arms while trishna declared "maa! Maa i got the film! maa i can't tell you how happy i am" and then as realisation dawned on trishna that she was angry with her mom, she let go off the hug.


Padmini : u sit here...tell me in detail

Trishna :leave it maa

But, Padmini went into the kitchen and brought a sugar cube to feed Trishna. Trishna was excited and could no longer hold n to her anger so she started giving out the details, "i had a meeting with the dorector today and there there was a party where the whole film cast and crew had gathered to meet,i'm just coming from there..." Padmini was listening with interest and both of them continued into their conversation while lying on the bed.


Trishna : maa i'll call glycerine. she'll be very happy to hear this news.

Padmini : she would be in the flight right now. tell her tomorrow.


At London- Hearthrow Airport

Rk and madhu checked out and waited for their luggage to arrive.


Madhu :rk! since when i'm asking you but, you...

Rk : peace biwi! i haven't kidnapped you! yaa , seriously, see your phone is still with you!

Madhu : oh phone, rk i had to call didu, its 9 so, i'll just call now. maa also said she wanted to talk.

Rk : Shh! how much you talk! madhu it one in the night there, talk tomorrow


Madhu nods a yes.


Madhu : rk u had said that we are going to spain! what are we doing in london!?

Rk : five hours later we have a joint flight to spain, now we will wait at a hotel nearby. now if your questions are over shall we make a move? a car sent by the hotel service is waiting for us.

Madhu : i'm not coming Rk. you go!😆

Rk : alright. (and then he bent to pick up madhu)

Madhu : stop it Rk. (embarrassed)

Rk : why? 😈


And madhu starts walking ahead while rk smiles and follows with dragging along a suitcase.

Next day morning

In the hotel room

Madhu wakes up stretching her arms and notices rk besides her who is still sleeping and then her eyes stop at the clock on the wall and...


Madhu : RRKKK!!

Rk wakes up with a jerk and is shocked to hear madhu's scream.Sounding a little worried he asks, "what happened madhu?" 😲

Madhu : rk look what time it is! we missed our flight ! i told you set an alram!

But, rk went back to sleep!!! Uttering, "go to sleep biwi! we haven't missed any flight" 😆

Madhu : you lied?? 🤔

Rk : yes i did ! now go back to sleep, then we'll go meet salman khan! 😎

Madhu : rk are you drunk?

Precap :

Rk : biwi you wished me but, where's my birthday gift??


PS: i hope u liked it 😳 waiting as desperately for ur likes and comments as Rk is, for you know what! 😉

Edited by war_is_peace - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...the flight scene was too cute..loved it!!!😳😳
n next is going to be RK's Birthday..woohoo can't wait 4 it!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...flight wala scene was do cute...😳😳
Thanx for PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
So the nxt update is gona be rk's bday.i think hotty is gona get naughty.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sangeet6690

awesome update...the flight scene was too cute..loved it!!!😳😳
n next is going to be RK's Birthday..woohoo can't wait 4 it!!!


thanks honey 😳
yeah the b'day is gonna be fun 😉 😆
also, another surprise awaits u in the nxt update 😳

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