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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys for not updting my work. A bit busy in my other work.So frm now i promise u guys dt i vl updt daily.


So cming to story i know its a boring. All f u r a bit ok ok alot confused abt story so let me clear some points.

1- ACP Maya is Nasha now she is undercover with her whole team.

2- She has some past connection with both Rathod n Rawte.

3- She hates Rathod n cant even see him in front f her.

4- my work is based on d relationship. It vl depict d relation f father-mother-son-daughter-brother-friends-love-husband-wife.

So enough f my bak bak lets move to story.
Next part vl cme in few hrs.
Edited by Samara92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER- 3F


After fighting with goons f Raman both ETF n NCB team goes inside club where Aisha is fighting with some goons. Bt its getting difficult for her to fight in saree. Arjun n Anant approach to help her.After dt Arjun n Anant asked d whrabt f Rathod n Maya respectively.

Arjun- "Rathod kaha hai."

Anant- "Maya kaha hai."


Aisha replied-" Rathod sir Maya k piche gaye the. Maya uper deal finalise karne gayi thi or sir uske piche gaye the."


Suddenly dey heard d sound f bullet fired n all rushed to d room frm whr sound cme.And dere dey found Rathod n Maya on bed rolling frm one side to another side.(dont take anything wrong.)


Finally getting d chance Rathod pinned Maya's both hand on bed n snatched her gun frm her. Bt she was quick enough to get out f hold n out f bed too. She is going to hit Rathod with Vash bt only to b stopped by Arjun. He hold her frm her waist n take d vash frm her.


Arjun- "Maya...Maya. Stop it. Dont behave lyk a child."


Maya- "Arjun leave me otherwise it wont b gud for u. I told him to not cme in front f me."

Arjun- "Maya. STOP!"

After dt she calmed herself n said.



Maya- "Arjun tell him to go away or else i vl kill him."



Rathod- "I m nt going anywhr u understand dt."



Rathod-" Wat do u think urself r u a supergirl. Jo akele yeh sab kar rahi ho."


Maya- "who d hell r u to ask me n why sud i gv u ans."

Rathod- "u better know who m i."


Maya- "bt i dont consider u d same."

Rathod- "its not my problem."

Both f dem just glared for dem one more tym n stormed out f room.

Arjun just chuckled at two n looked at Raman who was unconciously fallen on floor.

Arjun- "chotu. Le jao isse."

All cme out f room to party hall.
Edited by Samara92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
beautiful update samara...

pls continu soon...

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