$ Ristey $...naye ya purane (sorry bt discontinued)

Hi ds is sanaya92 wt a story. Cncpt to be posted as soon as possble.

Hey guyz i m back with concept. Hope u'll lyk ds. So here i go... A man is deeply in his thots, her words r ringing in his mind "Ristey naye ho ya purane, rista chahe humne banaya hai ya halat me, lekin usse nibhane ka ek mouka to dena chahiye."His thots intruptd by a knock on his cabin door.A man entrd n he says, "she is here, so wats next."so guys, howz it. Shall i cnt it or not. Plz tell me.




INDEX-
CONCPT N CS- PG 1
CH 1- PG 2,3
CH 2- PH 3,4


CH 3A- PG
CH 3B- PG
CH 3C- PG 7,8
CH 3D- PG
CH 3E- PG

interesting h plzzz post it bt plzzz i want arakshi plzzz plzzz

hmm interesting prologue

continue soon

nd pls pm me th nxt parts

nice prologue

waiting for cs

cont soon!!!

Character sketch

Sameer damsingh rathod:Etf chief, age 30, no 1 know abt his life except 1 bt he hate dt person as only bcoz f him he is now all alone. Dere is a big secret in his life.

Arjun suryakant rawte:Etf 2nd in chief, age 28, aftr d death f his wife Roshni dere is no place 4 any relation. He only want 2 tk revenge f roshni's death.

Aisha kapoor:A tough lady cop. Love her work. Want 2 b a gud cop like her 2 boss n feel 4 sameer.

Sakshi anand:luvly n chirpy girl, crime journalist. Luv 2 irritate arjun. Soon she'll fall 4 him.

Chotu: same as show

shree: same as show

Liza: luv shree secretly n same as show.

MAYA:A girl who has deep connection wid our 2 super hot headed.

There r some more cs, will cme later as story will proceed.

interesting concept
plz add me in ur pm list
n plz do update soon

Chapter-1:


evry1 in d etf sitting in d conference rum n doing dere pending work bt 2 person r shootng glares 2 their seniors. Shree glaring rathod n sakshi glaring arjun. They r thinking sumthing in their mind while staring at 2 headed cop.


Shree (mind voice)- "i wont 4gv u mr sameer damsingh rathod. Tumne galat insan se panga liya hai."


Sakshi (mind voice)- "maine har bar tumhari har baat ko majak me le liya magar tumne aaj meri sabse pyari cbeez ko mujhse dur kiya hai. I'll make u regrat 4 ur act." Aisha noticd shree n sakshi so she decided to ask dem d reason f glaring their seniors. Aisha askd slowly so dt only 2 can hear her, "tum dono is tarah rathod or arjun sir ko kyun ghur rahe ho." sakshi replied, "sukra manao aisa ki me sirf ghur rhi hu warna mera maan to murder karne ko kar raha hai." shree joined sakshi by saying, "tumhara toh maan murder krne ko kr rha he par me rathod sir ko itni asaan saza nhi dunga. Main toh unhe kalapani bhejne ko soch rha hu." Aisha asked again, "par aisa kya kr diya undono ne." shree replied, "yeh mat pucho ki kya kiya balki yeh pucho kya nhi kiya."

nice start...!!

Flashback- in d mrng tym f etf evry1 was doing dere work bt 1 person was nt doing his work actully he was following a man evrywere. Its shree following rathod. Rathod gets irritated by dis. So he asked shree to cme in his cabin. Shree went 2 rathod's cabin. Rathod- "wat do u want shree?"shree understand now its tym to tell him abt his new crush. Shree replied, "actully sir market me ek software launch hua hai n i want u to sanctioned d software." shree was abt to tell d feature f sftware bt rathod said, "shree can u write a letter 4 me 2 d technical dept." shree gets happy aftr hearing dt he thought he is going 2 sanctioned d sftware. Shree- "yes sir." Rathod- "so write. Dis is acp sameer rathod informing u dt i want to stop d upgradation f officer shreekant sen." shree bcme numb aftr hearing dis. Shree- "sir u can't do dis to me." Rathod- "if next tym u talk no think abt any sftware i'll stop upgrdation. Do u get me." shree- "yes." Rathod- "now go back 2 ur work." flashback end. Aisha- "toh yeh baat hai." shree- "aur nhi toh kya. Bhala koi aisa krta hai." Aisha- "yeh thi shree ki dukh bhari dastan. Sakshi ab tum apna reason batao murder plan krne ka."