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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2


Asad was shocked to core "packing...", that means zoya is leaving. But WHY. Had he been so ignorant to her that in suppressing his feelings for her and avoiding her he had hurted her to such extent that she has lost all hopes and is leaving now. How. How could I hurt her to this extent. asad cursed himself but didnt moved anywhere from the door.

Dilashad in order care for her beloved jaaan zoya stayed with her that night and asad also spent the whole night in front of zoya's room.

Asad knew he had to stop her and he would talk to her about everything so he got ready earlier than any other day and was waiting for zoya to come out.

The thought of zoya leaving made his heart cry in pain and fear of loosing her finally made him to accept his feelings and now he just wanted some moments with her to tell her everything he feel for her and tell her that he would die if she left him.

And then she came out with all her bags packed and all set to leave. asad was shocked that zoya was leaving right now only.zoya went to the kitchen with all teary eyes and emotions bubbling inside her for the two awesome ladies she had met here her phoopi and her tamatar.

Asad was still not able to take it any more. There zoya hugged both the ladies and let her tears slow coz this would be the last time she was seeing them and she knew it. The moment asad gets to kow the truth she will no more be even remembered here in this house which was her home. She knew if anything was out before mr. khan before she leaves she will have just hatred in his eyes for her that she didn't wanted so she had kept quiet since yesterday and so did the other two ladies. Though she wanted it so much to tell everything to him have his support by her side to take everything but she cant.

Asad now stood up and shouted with al his might "what is happening here since tomorrow I have enough of this drama now out with it and please tell m e what happened?" his voice desperate in last'. At that moment tanveer entered the hall and by now she knew everything that had happened yesterday and wanted to take full advantage of this situation but thought to wait till zoya was gone coz she wanted no interruption when she tell asad a new plot of her plan and so no cross questioning to prove that she was poisoning asad's brain'..

All were taken back with his such outbrust but zoya was happy to see the concern for her in his eyes and that only she wanted to take along with her as her last memory of her mr. khan. And everyone sticked to the plan and no one answered asad and the ladies took zoya to the main doo with her luggage.

Edited by arshi_ke_dewane - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nice story... pls continue and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Very nice..pls pm me the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Let me guess... she knows who her father is.. and she is going to stay there...

Nice the way you keep it secret to Asad and also to us!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...pls update the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's very interesting. I guess Zoya found out about her father. Or maybe it's something else! I can't wait for the next part. Please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one
please next update should be longer one and pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3





Asad was shocked that even after so much no one was speaking a word and zoya was actually leaving now. He just ran to the door and blocked her way to go out.

Dilshad was happy the way her son was reacting but she knew today zoya has to go. There was no other option left.

"Why are you leaving me???" asked asad desperately... dying every second seeing her sad face.

Zoya smiled. After a whole day zoya finally smiled. But asad saw the pain in her eyes. She was not smiling coz she was happy. It was a sad smile. His heart got stabbed a million times seeing her in that condition.

"you had only said mr. khan that I'm messing up ur life. Miss musibat farooqui is leaving ur life so you can live a better life." she knew she wont be able to stop her tears now so taking asad's shocked states advantage she moved past him to the taxi waiting out for her.

And she left just like that. Till the time asad got out from his shocked state she was gone. He was not able to accept that she had actually left him. he cursed himself for saying her all that few days back when she confessed her feelings. He regretted his each and every word but it was late now.

Dilshad knew what was going in her son's mind. She didn't wanted her son in that state so she decided that now zoya is gone she can tell asad the truth and she will be having time to make asad understand things before he came face to face with zoya next, she for now she thought is impossible as zoya would definitely not come in front of asad and asad after knowing the truth wont want to see her ever again.

dilshad called asad to her room and while leaving to her room she told tanveer that she has to do very important talk with asad and as she (tanveer) is having an important work for which she got call this morning can leave alone.

Asad got it clear that dilshad want no one to hear what they want to talk so he himself got taxi for tanveer and made her go from there and tanveer having no option left coz it was razia who had called her.

In the room dilshad told asad what all had happened in his absence yesterday. How Gaffur and zoya got to know about their relationship as father-daughter, how he came to take zoya away. She told asad that he also asked zoya if she want a father she have to forget them (khans - asad's family).

Dilashad said "asad. zoya had always wanted a family to whom she can depend upon, to whom she can call as her own so I decided that zoya should go with him. We have no right to snatch away any thing from her coz we love her. Love means scarifies asad and for zoya we can do at least this much. "

Dilshad further added "asad zoya was all shattered as she have to leave u, leave you. But she knew if you go to know that siddique sahib is her father you would have started hating her and she didnt want that and also she had decided not to tell u anything unless she is gone so she could take the happy memories from this home and the last remembrance that every one here cares for her."

Dilshad finished with a heavy heart and all ready to take on her son's anger, but the out burst never came. She was surprised to see her son crying in her lap. She saw confusion on his face, whether to get angry on her or to love that girl more.

Asad was angry. Yes he was, but on himself. He was angry because he was not there when she needed him the most. He had seen her crying when she first found out that he was dead. He was their to see the happiness on her face when that news turn out to be false. But he was not there when she found out who her father was. He was not there to comfort her while she was going. All he made her think was he would get angry, he would hate her, but never made her feel that he loved her, loved a lot.

He was very angry on himself and now he voiced all his feeling in front of his mother. Whatever she heard from her son's mouth made her to do a small happy dance. She was so happy that her son was in love in love with the girl whom they all loved and whom she had dreamed to be her DIL.

Dilshad knew he was still a little confused what to do now. How he could go to that siddique house for zoya. How he can bring her back.

Dilshad again took the charge and thought of clearing his confusion "asad when ur father was leaving us he had two choices whether to make his love priceless or prove that pride and power is everything and he choose pride and power, and you know u are not ur father's son u are my son and in my belief love is everything its priceless, its everything what a person needs in life and every sacrifice in life worth it…..."

She knew she had to give a hard push to asad's feeling so she used his weakness that he don't want to be like his father and things worked. She saw the determination in her son's eyes for his love and at that moment dilshad also resolved that let anything come by now she will make zoya only her Daughter in law.



** sorry for mistakes and buddy stellar_sheen for pms...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just caught up with this

Interesting



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Posted: 12 years ago
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yippie i guess it right

Nice update... let see what asad going to now...🥳

waiting4 the next update...

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