SS: Saazish... part 12 A- 18/6 pg. 38 - Page 4

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Zoya's reaction to whatever Asad said is great. I was surprised because I expected a mad and angry Zoya. Great chapter! Thank you very much for the pm! 😊
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Part 4 was awesome

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Read all the parts in one go.. Thanks !! Story is going on beautifully.
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TEASER...




LADY: BILLO UR COUNTDOWN BEGINS NOW
BILLO: WHO THE HELL YOU ARE????
LADY: JANE SE PEHLE MERA KAAM KARTI JANA MAIN TUMHE BAHUT DUA DUNGI...
BILLO: MAIN TUMHARA KAAM NAHI KARUNGI... ASAD MERA HAI MERA HI RAHEGA...
LADY: TUM KHUD ASAD AUR ZOYA KA NIKAAH KARAOGI... I CHALLENGE YOU...😉
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I know, I know I'm super late but I don't control life friends. Some things makes us do what we don't want to do. "QH frustration fever..."

Well this update was due few days back only but I had a crazy idea of live writing in the update box and then as soon as I pressed the post update button, DAMN network error and all what I wrote got lost.

And now I'm here with cropped version. My first time writing an update is horrible and writing it again makes me crop most of the things so it happened with this also, bear me if this is super horrible...

PART 5

When Tanveer came back she saw everyone relaxed and calm. She thought what might have happened that these people are calm, is zoya coming back, no that cant happen Asad is gonna hate her like hell when he know whose daughter she is.

Tanveer hoping for best went near asad and asked him what happened and why the house looks so quite.

Asad : obviously its gonna be quite Tanveer, Zoya jo yahaan nahi hai.

Next Dilshad filled her with the news of them bringing Zoya back to this house soon. Listening this the colour of Tanveer's face got faded. She thought how can they bring her back when they know who she is, so Tanveer being Tanveer thought of poisoning Asad's mind said...

Tanveer: Asad she is a Siddique. You know what all they have done to this house and still you want to bring Zoya to this house. What if she does something her father wants to destroy you.

Asad felt anger raising inside him thinking of what all they have faced because of the Siddiques but somewhere he knew Zoya name doesn't fit with them. And thinking of Zoya took all his anger away but brought a sadness that she is not here.

Asad: I know tanveer and I cant forgive them for what they have done but zoya doesn't belong there she belongs here with me... I know who zoya is and what is she capable of and she is not at all capable of betraying me tanveer...

Asad said all this in a very calm tone which irked tanveer a lot... But next second she found herself in a small trouble...

Asad: but tanveer how do you know who zoya is and all what happened. Yesterday you were with me and today also when things happened you were out????

Tanveer thought ohh come on tanveer think of a good excuse you cant tell him that razia is your master and she let her know everything cause I deliberately failed her plan to send zoya back to NY not letting both razia and zoya know about this...

Tanveer: vo asad actually this news has spread in the society I don't know how. While coming back some aunties asked me about this and when they found me clueless they told me all this...

Asad though didn't accepted her answer was going to inquire more but dilshad intrupped them and asked them to join the dinner...

Dinner was unusally quite as zoya was not there. Each one of them was missing zoya. Tanveer though tried to start some conversation didn't got any reply cause every one was in there own thoughts of zoya.

After dinner tanveer was in the garden when she received a call from an unknow number but picked it up.

Tanveer: hello, whose this???

Person: salam billo rani... how are you???

Tanveer was baffled to discover that someone other than razia knows her by this name...

Person: itna kya soch rahi ho tanveer??? Yahi na ki main tumhe tumhare uss naam se kaise janti hun... Main sirf tumhara billo rani wala naam hi nahi billo rani ke saare kaam bhi janti hun...

Tanveer: kaun ho kauln tum????

Person: batana hota toh jab tumne pehle pucha tha tabhi nahi bata diya hota????

Tanveer was scared and she cut the call. She didn't want to keep any contacts with people who know her as billo rani. She has seen the consequences of having contacts with razia now when she was trying to build a better life though with wrong ways she didn't wanted any problems. But she didn't know it was just the start of her problems...

Asad was silently sitting on his bed. Sleep has refused to be with him tonight. He was missing zoya badly. Right now he thought he could do anything to just see zoya, have a talk with her. He had two thoughts in his mind either to call her or to go and see her.

The thought of going to meet her was tough and risky at this hour of night but what is life without risks and so with this thought asad decided to go to SM and meet zoya. He silently made his way out of his house, he thought sneaking out from his own house is so difficult how can he manage to sneak in SM...

Asad was poor with his sneaking out skills and so dilshad saw him going out at this hour and she knew where her son was heading to. "Young love" she thought and went to sleep and left her son deal with this sneaking in and out thing...

Here asad was standing out in the backyard of SM thinking how to sneak in here as he knew nothing about this house. First he thought of calling ayaan but dismissed it the very next second thinking how much ayaan will trouble him with this fact known that ASAD AHMED KHAN sneaked in at late hours in his girlfriend's house...

'zoya what have you done to me...' with this thought he went near a window on ground floor which was opened in the direction of backyard...

Precap: more fun awaits as we watch the adventures of the beginner in the game of "sneaking in & sneaking out"

Edited by arshi_ke_dewane - 11 years ago

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