|| You are my life|| - Rantara Fanfaction

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|| You are my life|| - Rantara Fanfaction

The story will start from when Raghu screamed at Antara as he thought because of her Aji's feet got burned.


Prologue

"Out!" Raghu screamed at Antara. For a minute even Ajji was scared of Raghu. "Didn't i tell you, one more mistake and you will be fired? How can you be so
irresponsible?"
Raghu asked and grabbed her wrist. She flinched in pain as he grabbed her injured hand without noticing. "Raghu.. it's hurting!" Antara
was crying now. "You deserve this... I hope you can feel the pain that Aji is suffering from!" Raghu said coldly. "Raghunath!" Ajji called out from behind.
"Leave her hand!" Ajji ordered but Raghu tightened his grip even more. Antara just couldn't take it anymore. She jerked his hand off, grabbed her bag and ran out of his house.

"Ajji you ok?" Raghu asked in a concerned tone but instead he received Ajji's scolding, "What did you just do? Why did you scold that poor girl? Leave
scoldig u even hurt her?
" Raghu was confused. "Not even a single drop of hot water fell on my feet instead the hot water fell on Antara's hand! She saved me" Ajji completed. Raghu was completely ashamed of himself. "Listen to someone before jumping into any conclusion." Ajji said angrily.

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On the other hand Antara ran out of Naik Niwas and went home straight. She couldn't control her eyes. As soon as Nur Apa opened the door Antara ran to room so that she could escape her Apa's nonstop questions. Nur Apa didn't ask her cuz she had lots of work to finish. Antara closed the door of her room and cried not because she was in pain because of Raghu's harsh words.

"You deserve this..."
"Out!"
"How can you be so irresponsible?"
His words rang in her mind.

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Ishan went out to play with his friends when the clock struk half past 4. That was his usual play time. Raghu was sitting inside his garage staring at nothing in particular and recalled Antara's words.

"Raghu.. it's hurting!"
He closed his eyes in pain and threw the glass which was kept aside him.
Raghu saw Ishan passing by so he decided to ask him about Antara. "Hey!" Raghu called put. "Hmmm..." Ishan replied. "How's your sister?" He asked directly.
"Why? What happened to her?" Ishan asked as he was unaware of the incident. "Nothing... go play.." He said as he got that she didn't say anything.


Precap

As she opened the door she saw him standing.

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Guys I hope you all liked it.. Please leave ur precious comments. Be it good ur bad please share ur thoughts upon this FF cuz ur comments encourages me to write more.
Will update soon
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Edited by -MallyluvsJ2M- - 12 years ago
Chandni- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that was awesome please PM me when you update thanks :D
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Awesome prologue👏

Eager to read more😊
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it's awsome
pls pm me next time..frnd req send all ready.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww awesome prologue:D
hey don't forget to pm me :)😉
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OMG SUCH AN AMAZING ND WONDERFUL START...CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE PLZZZ UPDATE SOON ND PLZZZ PM ME :)
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Wow
Awesome beginning
Please please update the first part soon!!! 😊
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Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

OMG SUCH AN AMAZING ND WONDERFUL START...CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE PLZZZ UPDATE SOON ND PLZZZ PM ME :)

thanks a lot dear
will try to update soon.
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Awesome prologue dear
continue soon n pm me :-D

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