Though am aware of the fact that am not good in writing. Here is my little and first OS written on ranatra and I dared to post it here.
One more thing I have to mention that is ,which inspired me to write this is non other than raghu's sunnah so the title also follows sunnah….. and here I present my OS..
'Hey Miss Call Sunnah'
Every where it was peacefull, every thing looked blissfull. A small smile appeared on his lips.he was relaxed and evry thing seemed settled down for a while…. He felt he was home after a long…..
Yes its Raghu…. Our dear Raghu standing on his terrace looking into antara's balcony. He was happy …. Why he won't be happy? … after all his dream has come true. Today is a unforgettable day in his life. Which he thaught wont be possible in his life but is a reality now.today he married antara in most unexpected way. His love of life…his antara. After fighting so much for his love…. Finally she is his only his….
He was remembering every thing that happened in his life from the time antara came to his life. How they used to hate each other, how they fell in love and how they fought for their love. He could not even imagine that time, he will fall in love the same girl with whom he used to fight so much. He heard a voice breacking his thaught… it was aaji calling out for Raghu…
Aaji: chintoo are tu idhar kya kar raha hai . teri shaadi hui hai aaj. Who bhi teri antara ke saath. Yaad hai na?
Raghu: haan aaji. Aise kaise bhool sakta hoon. Haan waise bappa ko na meri taraf se thank u bolne ka. Who kya hai na ithni madad ki unhone our aage bhi unki madad chahiye. Who aisa hai ki ab miss call ko handle karna hena life long…
Aaji : chal hat. Jyada drama nahi karne ka. Jha waha teri biwi teri kashmeer ki kali wait kar rahi hogi teri… ya phir aisa karu ki use yahin pe boolavu. Tum donon ki love story bada ne me yeh terrace ka bahooth bada haath haina more or less. Isiliye suhaag raath bhi……… bulavoon kya?
Raghu: kya aaji tum bhi na kabhi kabhi kuch bhi bol deti ho, me chala
Raghu enters his room. Antara was waiting for him and she was very angry on him since he left her alone there and was missing for a long. She felt different being in the house. Even before she used to come there before but it was as a caretacker of aaji and now she is a bahu. All at house except aaji were not happy with their marriage. So as soon Raghu entered she started bursting on him
Antara: kaha gaye the tum. Me yahaan kitni akeli mehsoos kar rahi thi
Raghu: kamal karti ho yaar kaha akeli ghar pe aur bhi tho log hai
Antara: Raghu me mazzak me mood me bilkul nahi hoon
Raghu: hey miss call aaj humari shaadi hui hai. Tho plz no jhagda wagda ok samji
Antara: tho tumhe yaad hai humari shaadi hui hai. Really!! Great. Our tum mere saath hone ke bajai kidar gaya tha. Jao me tum se baath nahi karoongi
Raghu: hey miss call sunnah… hey sunnah… chal teek hai baath nahi kar sakthi lekin baki sub kuch kar sakthi haina?
Antara: kya mathlab hai tera? Baki sub kuch mathlab?
Raghu: badi samajdhar banthi ho tum hamesha. Abb kya teri akal pe thala mara hai kya? Are mach mach sacch kehtha hai yedi ki yedi hai tu
Antara:kya karna hai? Our tum ne mujhe yedi kaha. Jao me tumse baath bolna tho chodo tera chehra bhi nahi dekoongi
Raghu: are me kaha tumhe yedi kaha who tho mach mach ne bola tha. Use tho me dhekloonga.tum gussa math ho. Waise chehera nahi dekhogi tho our bhi difficult hoga na?... kuch karne keliye
Antara: yeh tum kya kehrahe ho tub se karna hai karna hai. Mujhe kuch samaj me nahi aaraha hai. Ajeeb baath karthe ho tum. Me taak gayi hoon our sone ja rahi hoon. Good night…
Telling this antara lay down on the side of the bed
Raghu:yese kaise so sakthi ho. Ab tho karna baaki haina fata fat karke so jathe haina. Our tum tho padi likhi haina. Sub jaanthi ho. Ab har baath tho me samja nahi sakta. Chal teek hai boldata hoon aaj tho humari suhaag raath hai tho kuch ding dong hona chahiye…. Haina samji… miss call hey miss call are sunnah … yeh sunnah
Are yetho sogayi….. bappa iss yedi ko thoda akal dena….
Guyz how was it… plz bura bhi thi like karo and comment is must. Good or bad , any suggetions.plz I will be blessed to read any sort of comment. Love you all.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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