RM FF-The Story Of Both Of Us Note on PG 38 21 September - Page 4

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My_VivJaan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
it sounds interesting dear...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
interesting . continue soon and please pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by tinkerred10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
I'm overwelmed by the response I got for the prolouge. Honestly I did'nt expect so many people to like it.
But a big thank you to all those who liked and commented.I could not reply to everyone but I've read each comment.In my nerveousness of posting the prolouge I forgot to introduce myself ..so my real name is Ridhi and I'm hugeee Rishbala fan :)
IMP:All those people who want pm's please send me a buddy request.
Enough of my bak-bak here goes the Chapter one of TSOBOS..hope you all like it :)
Edited by tinkerred10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Chapter One*


"Meera"..."MEERA"..."MEERA" Her voice echoed through the entire Malik Mansion.She was looking for her new film's script. But as always it was no where to be found.
She rumaged through all the stands in her study but Alas!! still no sucess.And with every passing second her temper was rising.
Then she shouted again..."MEERA".."SULTAN".."Where the hell are you too??""I pay you people for taking care of my house and keeping the things in place".


Sultan and Meera rushed in to study after hearing the voice of their Mam.Both of them without wasting time started searching for the script and after an hour found it.
She silently thanked God that the script has been found.Turning her face towards the two servants she odered them.."Sultan ask the driver to get the car ready ..I'm gonna leave in approx. twenty minutes""Meera...you go get my purse,laptop and a red file that is kept on the bed"
The two servants obeying their mam left the study to follow the oders given to them.

She dialed her PA's number on her cell and she did'nt have to wait for long as the PA answered on the first ring itself."Yes...Mam""Hello..haan Shalini I'm ready to leave and I'll reach the set in an hour...I hope everything is ready""And I can be little late as I have to visit Mom and Dad""Ok...then bye"
She took a deep breath and glanced at her wrist watch that was gifted by her Dad...7:30am...it was the time for her princess to wake up.
Very quietly she entered her lil angel's

room and saw the most beautiful scene. Her princess was sleeping huggin her Mom n Dad's photo frame.Unknowingly a tear fell from her eyes. She quickly wiped away the tears and went towards her bed...carassed her face on which her lil ringlets were falling. She was a replica of her Mom.

Coming out of her thoughts she took her angel in her arms and said"Baby,open your eyes and see the beautiful morning"
Her little angel Dia in her sleepy voice wispered "Maa...j..just..let..me..sleep...fo..for..10..more..minutes" "No baby..see already its very late""Chalo..be a good girl and get up...and your choclate milk shake is also waiting for you"
Dia's eyes shot open upon hearing choclate milk shake.Immdeately she got out of her Maa's arms n ran to brush her teeth.Seeing this a small smile lit up Madhu's face.
"Dia..be ready in 10 minutes I'm waiting for you in the car".."OK..maa I'll be there"
____~_____~_____~_____~______~______~

Phew!!! That was so damn difficult to write. Hope you all like it and tell me about the siggies also in t
he comments below :)
Edited by tinkerred10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Sorry for spelling mistakes
I'll edit it when I get time :)
Edited by tinkerred10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Nice bt very short. Dia must be Rk n Madhu's daughter. Bt where is RK?? Nd u made Sultan nd her pagal mom servnts? Hahaha!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
That was a rocking first part Ridz..👏👏 Madhu has a daughter..? Where is RK.?😕
You made Sultan and Meera, Madhu's servants..🤣Munna, Patil are upgraded.??.😉😆 I want to see some royal BBB of these characters now..😆really waiting to read the second part now..RK may enter the fray in that part possibly..??😉😳

Update soon Ridz !!
Edited by dilnasheen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
really awesomee update dear...
rishbala hving a daughter...soo cute...
nd lolsss u made meera nd sulti servantss...i realy liked it...
update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Nice update . Wat a perfect role for sultan . Loved it . N thanks for pm.

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