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Posted: 12 years ago

Epilogue

One Month Later...

"One final question Ma'am?"

"Please go ahead."

"Smita, the protagonist in Samarpan, went through a number of negative relationships in her life before meeting Varun. Do you think it is really possible in real life to come away unscathed if someone has suffered such negativity in the beginning of their lives?"

"Of course it is possible. It's just a matter of perspective. Each and every person who has been part of our lives helps in broadening our horizon of consciousness...and that involves all the so-called negative relationships too. Once you come to terms with the realization of Why the negative relationships were in your life, you have learnt to pave way for a future sans such negativity. Life has it's own way of teaching us lessons and to decide for ourselves which direction to take. Don't you think so?"

"But Ma'am, in reality will someone like Smita ever achieve peace of mind after such traumatic experiences?"

"Aha!..."Someone like Smita"...By saying that you are making her seem like a model victim of sorts, whereas by the end she ceased to think herself as one. In fact, if you ask me, after she met Varun, she met the warrior side of her own self. As far as achieving "peace of mind" (making finger quotes gesture) is concerned ...it's a phrase that is just so subjective. Well, I am no philosopher, but I can safely say that acceptance brings peace...peace that was always there within you, waiting for your acceptance. Simply put, you have your peace of mind when you surrender to what's on your mind. Letting go is acceptance, and not denial of what happened. What you see as the end of the road is actually not...there's always a bend...and there's always someone or something to guide you to it. (pausing for a fraction of a second) Hmm! To be more clear, I would like to read the last two paragraphs of the final chapter?:


Varun held her gaze and said, "Smita, when I wasn't even aware of it, you showed me how lonely I was; then you smiled and suddenly I felt whole. You made me feel again and showed me that there was someone who loved me and needed my love. Now, I say the same thing to you, darling, that there is someone who needs you and who wants to take your loneliness away. I need you...and know that you need me. Will you marry me?"

Smita looked back at him for what seemed an eternity, and then she smiled, nodding. As he pulled her into his arms, happiness radiating from his smile, she couldn't help thinking, "Varun is right. I can feel it...I can feel the peace in this surrender. There's no place I'd rather be than here...in this moment...emotionally and physically. No memory of past and no worry of future can spoil what is now."


The reporter looked up as understanding dawned. Aarti smiled at him, and he smiled back, "You are right. I have my answer. Thanks Ma'am."

As the press conference concluded, Yash stood up holding Aarti's hand and announced, "Thank you very much for gracing the launch party of my wife's book. Our family is much obliged. Please move to the Banquet hall for some music and dinner." He looked around proudly at the elite gathering at Aarti's book launch party. Mr Swami had done a wonderful job with the prelaunch publicity. He had pulled all the stops...press releases, online events, tagging the book bloggers, the literary circles, the reading clubs, and so on. Initially he had passed on the book discreetly to a few known critics who owed him favors for a behind-the-scene feedback. The verdict was unanimous; each one of them had come back with a thumping review: This will be a winner all the way.

As the rest of the family moved in to congratulate Aarti, she turned to Yash, "Did I do OK?" spoken softly with a slight quiver in her voice, noted only by him. He threw his arm around her and smiled, "You did much more than OK...You did fantastic."

The children came and embraced her. Payal was all agog with excitement and pride, "Mumma! You were enchanting. You speak so well. I am so...so proud of you. My friends are waiting for you back there. Should I get them?

"Sure angel...and thanks."

As Payal rushed to the group of youngsters standing at the end of the hall, Aayu whispered, "Err...mumma!"

"What's it Aayu?"

"Actually, I couldn't understand half the thing you said...all grown-up stuff. But I clapped the loudest...so did Karan and Rohan. They have gone to get something to eat. They'll meet you later. OK if I join them?"

Aarti smiled and gave him a final squeeze, "Go...The dessert table is on the left." Grinning from ear to ear he ran off.

The evening at Scindia Shereton stretched longer than expected. The buzz about the book had attracted many out-of-town media people and litterateurs as well. All of them wanted to have a personal word with the new writer on the block. Aarti found herself surrounded by a throng of people all the time. Yash never left her side.

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Payal checked her phone for her social network messages before turning in for the night. Aayu had gone to his room after bouncing around her room for quite a few merry minutes, chatting with her about the party, and feeling mighty proud of their mumma...till Yash had come and directed him to go to his room after the Goodnights. It was much past his regular bedtime, and he had to get up early next day for his Tennis lessons.

Payal yawned and checked her mail for a last look. She almost leapt up with joy and ran to Aayu's room.

He was already asleep. However, Payal couldn't wait to share the news, "Wake up Aayu! C'mon...wake up."

Aayu stirred and sat up, rubbing his eyes, "Di...what happened?"

Payal hugged him with a laugh, "I couldn't wait. I had to congratulate you now."

"Congratulate me? What did I do?" Aayu was wide awake now. He just couldn't recall what he had done that got her so excited.

Payal sat cross-legged on his bed and beamed, "You won the Runner-up prize in the International Photo Contest for Kids conducted by National Geographic."

"WHAT???...But I didn't..."

"You didn't. But I did. On your behalf."

"Really Di."

"Yup...A friend of mine had mentioned about the contest. So I sent a few of those Nainital pictures you clicked. I wanted it to be a surprise. I saw the mail confirming the prize just now."

Aayu jumped on her lap and hugged her tight, "Oh..thank you...thank you...thank you Di. My wonderful, wonderful Di." The next moment he was on the floor pulling her down, "Come...come...Let's go and tell papa, mumma."

"What? No...no...not now, Aayu. We shouldn't disturb them now."

"Why not?"

"You have to understand...They have had a hectic day. They must be very tired. Tell you what...we'll wake them tomorrow with the Great news...OK?"

"OK Di. If you say so." He felt low for exactly half a second and then looked up with a twinkle in the eyes, "But both of us can celebrate, right?"

"Aayu...what do you have in mind?"

"They sent home the remainder of the chocolate cake. C'mon Di...let's raid the fridge. And Di..."

"Yes?"

"May I sleep with you tonight? I'll be too excited to fall asleep alone."

She laughed and ruffled his hair, "Of course! As your Fairy Godmother, I grant you your wish...You are the champ."

And giggling softly they sneaked toward the kitchen.

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Yash entered the moonlit room to find Aarti standing near the French windows...looking out. He closed the door and walked up to her, hugging her from behind. She let her head fall back on his chest. Together they gazed at the moon-bathed garden in a companionable silence, drawing comfort from each other's presence. Swayed by the flower-tinged fragrance of her hair and the warmth of her soft body, he shifted her into his arms. At that moment, all he wanted to do was to feel her next to him, to revel in her success, and to dazzle in the spark of her being...a spark that brightened his entire universe. There was nothing more he wanted...there was nothing more he wished.

"Yash."

"Hmm!!"

"Thank you."

"For what?"

"For everything...For being you. You know I am the luckiest woman in the whole wide world...cause I have my very own genie."

"Really? So, does my lady wish for anything in this moment?"

"Only one thing."

"What, my love?"

"An eternity with you...and beyond."

"You got it."

*************The End*************

Edited by InduG64 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Friends,

With the Epilogue, I come to the end of "Samarpan." At the end of the five-month journey I feel deep satisfaction for having concluded a story that became very close to my heart and my daily life.

All the credit to this smooth journey goes to you all...for being there for me and never once giving up on me. A simple Thank You seems so trivial against what I really feel for each one of you. Whether writing a comment or pressing the Like button or just gracing the thread with your silent presence, you have nudged me along with love and support. There's no return to such companionship...only love.

I bid good bye now...Hopefully we'll meet again someday...somewhere...

Take care. I love you all.🤗
Indu
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely epilogue indu di a great ending to a great story👏👏👏

aarya love for eternity and beyond we will cherish it
i m literally crying i m not able to comment more😭 i could not imagine how i will keep myself without ur samarpan every week😭
i whole heartedly enjoyed this journey with u and samarpan and i feel lucky to be part of this wonderful journey
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will cherish this memories forever di
hopefully we will meet again di 😃😃

hoping we will get to read more fictions and to learn from u di waiting patiently
all the best di 👍🏼 will miss u

hopefully u will be active in the forum😃😃

always with u ur friend
Edited by roserosey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow di great epilogue👏
I am going to miss "Samarpan" so much😭. The journey of "Samarpan " is marvelous di.
Thanks for writing such a beautiful and heart touching story.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
How can someone say "the end" to something that's beautiful? Somehow, sometime we know that it has to happen. We have reached the end of this heartwarming story of love, realizations, forgiveness, of soaring above the negative and ugly episodes of life to become stronger by accepting such as part and parcel of life and come out still a winner like Aarti and Yash did separately and together. The strength to survive is in the acceptance - not as a surrender but as a lesson of life to prepare you for the next big wave that will hit and make you flounder. But in between and above these waves are the crests of triumphs and peace knowing that there are people who love and believe in you unconditionally. SAMARPAN!

Thank you Indu, for the many lessons of life that you have woven into the story that touched and inspired many hearts (as you said) in the last five months while we excitedly waited for every chapter.

Thank you for sharing your gift of writing and storytelling . . . for the hard work, patience and perseverance to see it through the end . . .

Thank you for the friendships that have been formed: first, because we love the concept of "Punar Vivaah" and actors who made it come alive and secondly for someone like you and the others who have kept the torch aflame with all your creative stories . . .

Truly THANK YOU!👏

Will patiently wait for the next story 😊 😉

Cynthia

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Indu for taking us on this beautiful journey of two such special souls...they truly deserve their happy ending!!!!
I am NOT going to say goodbye as I'm sure you'll be back with another beautiful Aarya story!!!!
God bless you and do return soon with another beautiful tale...looking forward to another journey with you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Indu,
So finally we've got the epilogue...my Sunday wait was fulfilled...
A perfect end to a great story...to call it a story would not be right...it is a beautiful journey where many of us have gone through so many emotions...one which must have enabled us to reflect on the finer aspects of our living itself...
I always believed that when one writes, along with the entertaining element if we could touch the hearts in doing so...conveying to the readers to contemplate on their manner of existence...and make them feel worthwhile when they've been on the right track...feeling proud that being righteous always is a reward in itself...then the job is more than done.
Never can a good act, a kind thought, a thoughtful deed go unnoticed in nature and it is returned to you unawares by Providence...
Aarti's genuine nature had to be rewarded by her being presented a 'genie' in the form of Yash!
Thank you for a great piece of literature...and May you be blessed abundantly...
Kind regards and loads of love...
Shanti😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful epilogue👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
A perfect ending for this fantabulous story⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Wow the book was launched!!😃
Loved the moment of payal gave photograph's surprise to aayu❤️..Wow,he won the contest..So cute😛
Aarya love forever❤️..Lovely 😳and superb ending👏 👏

I am going to miss Samarpan so much😭 😭
Thanks for giving us beautiful story🤗
Eagerly waiting for your new story and also best wishes for you dear🤗 🤗

😳 🤗
Edited by Sri_Radha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what can i say that i haven't already... but each of the comments before, i agree with

lots of love and well wishes induji🤗❤️

and should you ever decide to write professionally, please let me know. i'll be that crazy girl with a huge smile in the line to meet you 😳😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic ff with wonderful updates through out. Congratulations for creating this beautiful story. To be honest I have learnt a lot from your characters, selfless love and optimistic nature of yash, arthi emerging out of darkness willingly once a ray of light(yash) is introduced, yash and arthi's interaction/conversing with kids-how they naturally instill them with wisdom and love for all. Like i said before, i loved how well payal handled the truth and her biological parents. I just wish my kids also grow up to be as loving siblings, courage to face the world in any circumstances and love their family.

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