Samarpan (An FF) Epilogue (Thread 3/Page 103) - Page 75

Originally posted by: pvejani

ch 31,32,33,34:

all updates beautiful
i dont have words to describe what i felt while reading it

with every update story is getting more and more interesting.

very beautifully written.👏

loved payal's way of handling situation.aarti had trained her very well.

i dont know what to say beautiful👏👏👏...loved very very very much❤️❤️.

thanx for updates and pms

Thank you so much for the sweet words.😊

Originally posted by: maha9

edited on pg.93 dear
love you so much indu 🤗

Love you back Maha...🤗

Originally posted by: freya123

amazing update

Thanks Freya.😊

@Shanti: Thank you so much for all the feedbacks. I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this. Because of your visits to the earlier chapters, I too am reading them again. And well...it's making me a harsh critic of my own self...cause I am coming across a number of instances wherein I feel I could've written better. *Sigh* Hindsights are most always tough.😳

Originally posted by: KrantiGuru_JKR

oh i have so much to catch up and what Epilogue next ...oh story has ended..gonna miss Samarpan

will be back soon..as though my exam has finished now i m busy partying all day and night 😆

Hey Miti. Story ends tonight. You have all the time to come back. I shall be here.😳

Originally posted by: RA17

glad you loved the song di but wat i am seeing is after 5 chapters we are coming to close this with this it made my heart which i may not be able to say but i know you will get it❤️

well sparsh samrpan so hoping not soo soon but life make you encounter with ppl n then the rest is history which you create will indeed look forward to another S 😉

hope you wont say to us seeing less pll visiting forum n you again bring something if you have in your mind and share with us

as this forum has indeed has been blessing meeting nice n humble ppl like you🤗

well and as you know me the lazy one will some in my snail pace n post comments in rest chapters hope you will still guideus n revert how i made you felt on wat you gave to me as samrpan😳

Ria...you are such a sweet heart. You want me to create another S? Maybe..ahem..make it a Hat-trick...right? Ha..ha...that's a good one.🤗

On a serious note, I agree...this forum is a haven in the true sense.

I'll wait for your comments.😊

Originally posted by: KamliKudi

Beautiful story ❤️

Thanks Binde.🤗

Originally posted by: snl2895

nice update👏

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

Hi Indu di.🤗

I had mistakenly commented on thread 2.

Do check it di.It was a kind of essay😆😆😆

I guess that my comment was the last comment😕

Am so sorry again di

for that. 😒

I read from part 26 to 29 all together !!😉 I simply loved the way Aarti's feelings was showed and simply adored the growing love between yash and aarti..😳😳

It's kinda great and really romantic too.⭐️⭐️

Aarti was confused,scared and everything was very very realistic di !!👍🏼

The thriller was interesting too when the Prashant is back !! 👏

The love blossoms at last between them. Aarti was finally got the chance to feel being loved by someone.

Hates off to u Indu di.👏

Take care always Indu di..🤗Love you di.❤️

Hi Disha...So good to have you back. Don't you worry about the Thread 2 comment. I'll visit it and read it and respond to it.

Yash and Aarti's story is romantic as well as inspirational in many ways. Glad you related to it.

Thank you so much.🤗

Originally posted by: rutu83

I've complained multiple times when commenting on a particularly beautiful chapter (an often occurrence) that I simply do not have the words to describe the beauty of your writing. And I'm afraid that is the case once again as I write this time. I believe I wrote for 'Sparsh' that it was marvelously human. I should say all of your writing, not just 'Sparsh', is so.. rich in insights and written with an elegance undefined. 'Samarpan' was such a beautiful journey. It is hard to overpraise it. You've left me speechless after every update. In each update there was exploration of emotion and a jewel of an insight that a reader can take home. And the poetry...each one of your poems made a place in my book of tidbits that I keep. Aap ke likeh har shabd dil se rishte ki dor bandh lete hai. All of your stories are not to be read but felt. Exquisitely simple, beautifully written and a joy to feel is your 'Samarpan' and I thank you for these characters which are going to stay with me for the longest time Induji.

Aha Rutu...such a beautiful, beautiful note. Love you for that pal. You have always ridden the same frequency as mine...and felt the emotions as I felt when writing. That in itself is my greatest reward. Thank you my sweet friend for walking the path with me and giving me so much support. "Mere shabdon mein meri kahaaniyan hain...Aur bhi kuch bahut anmol hai, aur woh hai aapka saath."

Thank you so much. God bless you!🤗