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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rachna1970

wow ,,Amzaing update Indu👏👏👏

Loved every bit of it
Payal is truly Yash n Aarti's daughter n she proud it so smartly⭐️
Loved the journal conection❤️
Last part was awesome Where Aarti console her angel
m going to miss this Beautiful story Indu😭😭
Thanx a lot for giving us Samarpan🤗

Waiting for Epilogue




Thanks Rachna. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

WOW 😛 what a beautiful end to a awesome story indu dear 🤗
But i will miss your update so much dear 😭

Thanks Maha...Samarpan ends like any other story does...There's no point stretching it, right? Just as when PV1 ended, we all felt sad, but at the same time there ws a sense of satisfaction that the makers ended it at the right time...without adding unnecessary tracks.


Now coming to the update...
i have no words to praise my cute payal !!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️ she is really an angel dear
And she is exactly like her mumma arthi even though she never gave birth to her. such a cute mumma-daughter relation...

Payal sure is her mother's clone in character. Even at three years of age, she had instantly known that Aarti would be her mumma...they had that instant connection. From thereon the relationship only deepened.

and badi dadi's wish is so cute dear... in the hospital bed, she needs special items 😃 wow what a a cute granny !!

She is quite a riot, isn't she? 😃

arpita-rahul ... OMG is rahul this much good character...😲😲😲
he is stopping arpita from approaching payal..
but is she talking like a mother. she is a greedy duck 😡😡 how dare she use now payal to get money !!!

Rahul is a shade better than Arpita. He knew when to retreat gracefully...especially since there was no justification to their actions.


I was really shocked when that evil bitch blurted out all truth to payal in such a entirely lieing manner... but the trust that arthi had on payal is so great dear ⭐️ she is her real mother ... even when yash hesitated arthi supported so strongly.. so strong connection yaar !!

Now comes the slapping portion of arpita..
each and every question payal asked to her.. went unanswered with mummed words 👏👏👏
well done payal..
this is the real true relation that is even stronger than blood ⭐️

Well, Aarti is normally a docile and peace-loving person who calmly deals with all the troubled situations, as we have seen...except when it comes to her kids. She is fiercely and aggressin=vely protective of them.

Finallly yash collecting all the points against them and blackmaling her was so strong dear 👍🏼
haha.. the rat got caught hehe ... 😆


Yash was wiser after Arpita fooled him that once...and he took all the precautions thereon.😊


Poor payal feels sorry for her reaction with arpita... but arthi and yash is there to keep her so preciously forever 😳😳😳
wow what a cute family hug !!!! i would like to join in it too 😳😳

Indu dear after the epilogue please sweety.. come up with a new ff again dear..
i will be waiting for your epilogue sweeto ...

I am a little behind schedule for the Epilogue. It's been a tough week on the workfront. I'll put it up soon enough.

Thank you
.🤗




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kinny_ranvir

superb story...loved every one in d story except arpita..



Thanks Kinny.😊

Well, Arpita was required to give a completion to Payal's samarpan to Aarti.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

The last chapter of this story was fantastic!


I love how maturely Payal handled the situation. In the end, she chose those who were there for her through everything, her true family. Arpita was a pretty disillusioned woman to think that blood ties conquer all. It's the relationships of the heart that matter most.

So glad to see how things worked out for the Scindias. Aarti has gotten over her past and found solace in her new life with Yash. Both Yash and Aarti get their immense strength from each other's love and trust and from their family.

I loved this story that you wove so brilliantly just as I loved Sparsh. I hope you will still continue to write about Yash and Aarti even after Samarpan. They are immortalized in your works.




Thanks Nina.

Disillusioned and overconfident...that's what Arpita was when she presumed that luring Payal away from Yash and Aarti would be a cakewalk.

Yash and Aarti she their insecure past and found themselves in the safe cocoon of each other's love and understanding. This was samarpan...a wholesome surrender!

I am going to take a long breather after this Nina. I don't know when I'll write again. I need to have an inspiration to do so. Let's see.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Leevi05

awesome update as usual...

good decision by payal😃
so sad ff ended
plz come back with new one😉



Thanks Leevi.

I am happy I could bring this story to a logical conclusion. I have no plans for another one yet.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update
omggg last part😭😭😭
love this story




Thanks Jasraj.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

😭
tears of both happiness (lovely end, of course par excellence writing) and sadness (samarpan end)

will come back once the tears have stopped




Hey Rutu...chin up pal! I need a better send-off from you.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Indu di.🤗
I had mistakenly commented on thread 2.
Do check it di.It was a kind of essay😆😆😆
I guess that my comment was the last comment😕
Am so sorry again di
for that. 😒

I read from part 26 to 29 all together !!😉 I simply loved the way Aarti's feelings was showed and simply adored the growing love between yash and aarti..😳😳
It's kinda great and really romantic too.⭐️⭐️
Aarti was confused,scared and everything was very very realistic di !!👍🏼
The thriller was interesting too when the Prashant is back !! 👏
The love blossoms at last between them. Aarti was finally got the chance to feel being loved by someone.
Hates off to u Indu di.👏

Take care always Indu di..🤗Love you di.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
I've complained multiple times when commenting on a particularly beautiful chapter (an often occurrence) that I simply do not have the words to describe the beauty of your writing. And I'm afraid that is the case once again as I write this time. I believe I wrote for 'Sparsh' that it was marvelously human. I should say all of your writing, not just 'Sparsh', is so.. rich in insights and written with an elegance undefined. 'Samarpan' was such a beautiful journey. It is hard to overpraise it. You've left me speechless after every update. In each update there was exploration of emotion and a jewel of an insight that a reader can take home. And the poetry...each one of your poems made a place in my book of tidbits that I keep. Aap ke likeh har shabd dil se rishte ki dor bandh lete hai. All of your stories are not to be read but felt. Exquisitely simple, beautifully written and a joy to feel is your 'Samarpan' and I thank you for these characters which are going to stay with me for the longest time Induji.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous update. Giving a short reply as my net having problems and I am writing it from office.

Loved the way Payal handled the situation. She is truly a carbon copy of Aarti. Although, Aarti doesn't gave birth to Payal, but the love, the faith and the values instilled in her by Aarti, make her Aarti's real daughter. Even Yash is scared if Payal leaves them, but Aarti was confident that Payal will come back to their side.

Yash had kept a watch on Arpita over the years. He knew that she will definitely make some problem in future and that's why he collected the documents. Poor Arpita, wanted to draw money in the name of her daughter but that daughter refused to be her daughter.

Loved the way Payal smiled hearing about the journals. She knows who had written those journals as she saw those with her dad always. And she introduced Arpita to Aarti who originally written the journals.

It's lovely from starting to end. Waiting for the epilogue. Happy that next we will get epilogue but feeling sad that it will not continue long...




Hi Shashi...My apologies for the delayed response to your lovely feedback.

I agree...Payal is but a reflection of Aarti. Goes to prove that it is love that forges relationships first and foremost, and is much ahead of blood bonds. Arpita learnt it the hard way...when her own child refused to accept her as her mother.

You have given me such beautiful reviews all through the story...I have no words to thank you with. Here's big hug coming your way...🤗

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