swaron..give me evry thing tonight

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Posted: 12 years ago
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~~~~give me every thing tonight~~~~
Okai guys so this is the 3rd and final OS on the this topic...thought lets not drag it and end it beautifully...well now its up to all wheather i end it beautifully or not...plz do comment...wud love to know you guys POV...

Car stops in college parking area
Swayam:"dil ajeeb shay hai, ajeeb cheezain karny ko kehta, ajeeb cheezain mangta hai" (swayam's one hand on stearing wheel and other arm is lean on window and face at sharon while saying this)

Sharon:"aham aham aur kya maang raha hai mr shikhawat ka demanding dil" (face at swayam and says it in very soft and romantic tone)

Swayam:" khwahishain tu hazaaro karta hai par iss waqt mrs.shikhawat k saat kahi akela rehna chahta hai, sab se dooor jahan bas mein hun tum ho aur hamari muhabbat ke geet feza mein gunguna rahy ho...college jane ka tu bilkul bhi mood nahi ho raha...(Giver her very romantic look and hold her hand in his arm close to his heart)


Sharon:" hummm tu baat sun leni chahiye tumhy apny dil ki warna naraz ho jaye ga" (flirting)

Swayam:"i knw ryt! Mein bhi wahi soch raha tha" (take the car out of college without attending a single lesson)

Sharon:" swayam hum jaa kahan rahy hein par?"

Swayam:" tumhay future house"

Sharon:" kya hum tumhary ghar? But meine simmi rinni ko messege kiya hai that i m comming college today"

Swayan:"so wot, abi phir messege karo and say u r not comming" ( pass cute smile while driving)

Sharon shys away and start typing text and very happy inside about spending more quality time with swayam

Swayam:"there u go...puhonch gaye"

Both enter the house & therez a romantic silence in house

Swayam:"my home sweet home" (voice echos and words get repeated)...(swayam likes the echo and say) i...i...i...love...love...love...you...you...you...sharon...sharon...sharon"

Sharon get very happy and also say i love swayam which echos again three times

Sharon:"so...wots the plan"

Swayam:" hmmm...okai lets go to my room first thn we'll see" (grab her hand and take her to his room)

Swayam:" i love this place...and u knw y?" (Look deeper in sharon's eyes)

Sharon:"why?"

Swayam:" coz yahan ki her cheez se tumhari yaad juri hai sharon...when i first sew u, my heat confessed to me here on this couch...i realise here only that how deeply i've fallen in love with you...sharon! Iss room mein beth kar mein hamara future plan kiya hai...yahan meine tumhari yaad mein poetry ki hai, dance kiya hai, rejection saha hai aur tumhay liye tanhayun mein roya hun, khush hoa hun basically mera her emotion or mere har secret iss room ki deewaro ne mera hamdard ban kar share kiya hai thats y this place is very dear to me"(gets emotional)

Sharon:"bohot hurt kiya hai na meine tumhy( tears role down the face)

Swayam:"hy sharon...stupid me tumhy rula diya...sharon tumne khushiyaan itni zyada di hai k ab koi dard matter hi nahi karta"(wipe her tears and sit her on the bed and kiss her forehead)

Sharon:"i love u alot swayam"(hug him tightly...crying voice)

Swayam:"chalo chalo ab bas koi nahi roye ga..."(wipe his own tears) tum yahi beto i'll make coffe for us...tab tak tum ye meri personal diary par sakti ho"

Sharon start going thru his diary and suddenly she stops on a page where therez a hand drawn heart bleeding...and start reading...

'Pata nahi sharon ko mera pyar naza kyun nahi aata... Kyun har baar wo mujy chor kar chali jati hai, par tum kitna b door chali jao sharon my heart will always worship you and will never give up on you coz mera pyar tumhary liye eternal hai'...and then therez painful poem...

' Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hai

Mujhe Phir Tabah Kar, Mujhe Phir Rulaja Sitam Karnewali, Kahin Se Tu Aaja

Aankhon Mein Teri Surat Basi Hai Teri Hi Tarah Tere Gum Bhi Haseen Hai..haan Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain

Jidhar Bhi Yeh Dekhen Jahaan Bhi Yeh Jaayen Tujhe Dhundhati Hai Yeh Paagal Nigaahen

Main Zinda Hoon Lekin Kahaan Zindagi Hain Meri Zindagi Tu Kahaan Kho Gayi Hain Tu Jo Nahin Hain To Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain Yeh Maana Ki Mehfil Jawaan Hain Haseen Hain Tu Jo Nahin Hain Toh Kuchh Bhi Nahin Hain'

After reading this sharon burst into tears and go to washroom"i am so sorry swayam,,,,am sorry i've hurt u alot...but i promise will compensate,,,i will love you so much k mein khud ko bhi bula dungi just like u did"...she wipes off her tears and go out to kitchen

Swayam:"bas ready hai coffe,chalo lets go"(two cups in his hand and sharon follows him)

Both sit back with bed crown with coffe mug in hands

Sharon:"swayam i hve an idea"

Swayam:"wow grt amazing bohot acha hai"

Sharon:"pehly suno tu...lets play word assosciation"

Swayam:"just a minute(put his mug on side table and come close to sharon)okai ready lets play...u start"

Sharon:"okai so first word is...zindagi?"

Swayam:" beautiful"

Sharon:"couple"

Swayam:"hum"

Sharon:"love"

Swayam:"ishq wala love"

Sharon:"dil"

Swayam:"pagal"

Sharon:"sharon"

Swayam:"meri hai"

Sharon blush away with each reply and hide in his arms

Swayam:"so how was ma replys?"

Sharon:"very romantic"

Swayam:"ary romantic se mujhe yaad aaya i want u to watch ma most favourit movie...the vow...i always wanted to watch it with u"

Sharon:" okai lets watch it"

Swayam put the projector on and run to get some popcorn from store...comes running back as he dnt want to miss the begining scene coz its very romantic therefore jump in the bed with popcorn

Sharon:"careful...gir jao gay"

Swayam:"ary kuch nahi hota"(pass her popcorn bowl and lye down in her laps facing projector screen with blanket on"

Its very dark in the room and all the curtains and lights are shut and there is only one light tht is screen light,,, the whole atomosphere is highly romantic

During the movie sharon was playing with swayam's hair and putting popcorn in his mouth...where swayam was in a very romantic mood and was keep kissing sharon between the movie

Movie was over now both wanted to ma make some dinner.

Swayam:"sharon mein chahta hun k tum mere liye khana bnao...apny haatu se"

Sharon:"par mjy tu khana banana nahi aata"

Swayam:"chalo hum dono try kary hein...it will be fun"

Sharon:"sounds fun..lets go"

Swaron enter into kitchen, sharon tied back her hair & swayam wears a hat...they both romance alot more thn cooking...specially wen sharon was trying to mould flour swayam comes back from behind and put his hand around her in the flour and kiss sharon on her neck face and lips...sharon thn become naughty and put flour on his face...and run away...swayam run after her and hold her in his arms and put flour all over her,,,sharon' s clothes all messed up but thy carry on with the masti...thy also burnt haandi lil bit as thy were too bzy kissing each other...finally dinner was ready.

Sharon:"mein ab pehnugi kya...mera dress kharab ho gya"

Swayam:"tum meri koi shirt pehen lo...chalo room mein chalo i need to change as well"...( swayam picks her in his arms a take her to the room)

Sharon comes out of washroom wearing swyam's while shirt

Sharon:"kitna loose hai ye swayam"

Swayam:"kitni cute lag rahi ho"

Sharon get shy and swayam hug and kiss her

Swayam:"chalo ab jo khana pakaya hai wo tu kha le...mjy bohot bhook lagi...agar khana nahi mila tu tumy kha jaonga"( he bits her neck and leave a mark on sharonz neck and it was first ever love bite mark sharon had on any part on her body)

Sharon:"acha mjy khao gy,,,i will eat u mr shikhawat"(she also bite on his neck and leave a mark)

Swayam:"hawww dono k neck pe mark hai...agar college mein kisi ne dek liya tu"

Sharon:"tu dekny do wese bi kal hum sab ko hamary baary mein batany waly hain"

Swayam:"yh ok chalo lets eat bhook lagi hai yaar"

Both sit on dinning table and feed each other...after thy ate

Sharon:"raat ho gai hai drop me home now"

Swayam:"excuse me...kya bola abhi tumne"


Sharon:"ghar drop kar do"

Swayam:"i dnt think so u r staying here tonight"

Sharon:"but swayam..."

Swayam cut her words in mid and say
"Sharon kal mein ruk gya tha na so plz tum b zid mat karo warna mein phir kabi bhi tumhary ghar nahi aaonga"

Sharon:"okai...okai fine...i will stay"


Both enter the room...swayam lights up the candles to create romantic atmosphere and both get into bed...both stare at each other so deeply that swayam make move towards sharon coz he cnt control himself any more and slowly lye down on top of sharon...sharon move her face to a side and smile and this was a sign of surrendering herself to swayam...swayam starts kissing and making love to sharon for the first time and sharon feels very happy that finally and official they became each others completly in every which way,,,be it emotionally, mentally and now physically too.

Somewhere in the backgroud the following song is playing while swaron are lost in each other making love:

"Tonight I want all of you tonight Give me everything tonight For all we know we might not get tomorrow Let's do it tonight

Don't care what they say Or what games they play Nothing is enough 'Til I have your love

Let's do it tonight

I want you tonight, I want you to stay I want you tonight

Grab somebody(sharon) sexy, tell 'em hey Give me everything tonight Give me everything tonight Give me everything tonight Give me everything tonight

And yes swaron finally gave everything to each other tonight with no regrets but with love and passion that they had for each other for years...all the wait is over tonight...its a night of happiness, completion of two people & meeting of two souls and becoming one body as it was all meant to be...




Good night people...let love birds be alone now... ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome ending...romantic, naughty n passionate...😉😳...those shayari's written by Swayam in d dairy is ur creation?? i mean very nyc👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..
hey...can u give me d links of previous chaps...i missed those...
but even thought i didnt read the previous this one really gud...
and cute too...
i loved the way swaron bunked the college...
how they spent tym together...
i loved swayam's dairy too...i mean that part...
food making section was awsm...at the end they madesmthng...hmmm...itni masti ke baad bhi not baad...
ohh i forgot the word game...dat was cute too...

Rohan :)
Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was superb...
amazing ending
romantic
passionate
naughty... 😉😉
loved it
thanks for the PM
please do write more...
would love reading ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was superb...
amazing ending
romantic
passionate
naughty...
loved it
thanks for the PM
please do write more...
would love reading ...

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