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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow gr8 update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

well that was awesome!!
hawww Uday kidnapped manyata???
akashs face must be worth seeing then!!!
jai slapped jagat lol..
poor jagat!!.
update soon!!


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yes that was the only way to keep her with him
yes like someone threw a stinky shoe on his face
she did and he was like
wat when why
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Originally posted by: ...anju...

loved dchappy so much.

luking forward wat twist story takes.

continue soon mona


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well twist and turns are very less
i will try my best to do so

Originally posted by: ...anju...

loved d chappy so much.

luking forward wat twist story takes.

continue soon mona


thank you
well twist and turns are very less
i will try my best to do so

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

Whoa uday back to his arrogant self


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Originally posted by: NaughtyDreamGal

dear ur story all are very awsome but pls u update so late update fast we are waiting ur both story awsome pls pm me n give updates fast chapter 3 was awsome i loved it continue asp n thanks 4 the pm n when u update bdw manveer img loved it...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome update!

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Do continue asap
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Edited by chocohollic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey all this few days have really kept me busy , i had to give both the updates on this sunday , but i was again trapped in the loads of plans so i gave an early update i will not be able to update till the last week of august as i again have another set of exams but after that i am free in middle i will give a promo for both my ss so here is the fourth chapter of "REALITY CHECK" have a happy reading
chapter 4

The guest was watching them , some passed silent whisper while some continued to stare , as akash headed towards his room but jai decided to follow him , akash was totally broken as he sat down on his bed looking at the photo of his dad which was kept in the side table , a lone tear escaped his eyes as jai came she could not see akash this way she knelled in front of him as she said

JAI:akash bhai please don't be like this we must take out some way to get jiji out please akash bhai

AKASH:no jai we need not do anything after all this was supposed to happen a princess was supposed to marry none but a prince the pauper just made a fool out of himself

JAI:no akash bhai she cannot marry him , because he is the reason for all the sorrows of our life and I am sure something evil is cooking in his mind after all he is the reason for the bomb blast for killing our family for …… and I am sure this is his new way to take revenge please don't fall in his trap I am sure he has planned something very horrible for jiji

Akash stared at jai blankly as he asked with his voice filled with fear

AKASH:so do you mean this is the same yuvraaj who ….. was the cause of your parents dead but then how did he come to know about you all

JAI:The other day remember jiji almost got knocked down by a car it was his and so maybe by jiji words he got a hint and then found out our identity

AKASH:if this is then you must go jai be by your jiji side while I find a way out but for now you need to leave , you need to be with her

JAI:ok bhai I will go to Jaigarh Palace


He sat by her side watching her anglelic face , the maids had changed her dressed as she lied down in the king size bed with a pink night dress with the comforter pulled over her body , her eyes closed as he lips parted and there was a small smile on her face , he had been observing her for the past few hours and each second she grew more adorable , he loved the smile on her face , that made her look even more beautiful , as he sat with his hands locked in hers , all his tention was washed away he just wanted to live the moment , as he could not help but place his lips on her cheeks at the very touch a shiver ran down her nerves as she opened her eyes and stared at him for a long time trying to adjust in the new environment and he was busy trying to look into her eyes trying to figure the reason of such lost look but within no time he felt himself pushed apart while she hurriedly tried searching the corner of the bed trying to make an escape but she failed miserable as the next moment she found herself pinned on the bed by him as she screamed at him and tried getting off his arms but it was worthless as he was lost in her beauty his figure went caressing her cheek , her body shook with fright as he smiled at the effect he was having on her and he said

UDAY:welcome to your home princess

MANYATA:what do you mean by H-O-M-E ?

UDAY:I mean welcome to my that is your would be husband palace , welcome to Jaigarh palace a place you are going to spend your entire life wait here like a good girl till I get you some food I am aware that my princess is starving

Saying this he left locking the door behind , she managed to get off the bed and search the door tried but it was of no use so feeling defeated she sat in a dark corner of the room and cried out her hearts , she knew now there was no way to escape and nothing could be done then to cry
MANYATA:why did you spoil my life uday? what had i done to you?

The car was been driven over the traffic filled roads , as the night sky had fallen heavily over the city they both sat at the back seat as the driver looked and pity them , jaggat still had the figure mark on his face as he stared at jai helplessly and as for jai she over looked out of the window no one could even imagine the inner turmoil that troubled the poor soul as the car came to another hault in a signal but with a jerk , that led jaggat hands to brush against jai , at the very touch she was alerted she pulled her hands away while jaggat stared at her blankly , silence prevailed over and he decided to break it as he asked

JAGGAT:jai please believe me I am sorry it was not ..

He was cut short as she replied in a cold tone

JAI:I need not any explanation from you jaggat I have got enough of it he did not speak further as she continued to look outside the window finally jaggat asked the driver to stop the car he followed the orders as jaggat said to the driver

JAGGAT:kaka I have some work here so I will go back home later you take her home safely bye

DRIVER ;but yuvraajsa asked me not to leave you alone

JAGGAT:he will understand and I will come back soon …..bye jai

She refushed to even look at him as he walked off the door , the car started as she turned back to see jaggat disappearing in the crowd of people as all she could do was mumble helplessly to herself

JAI:why did you betray me jaggat ? why did you deal my trust with some money ? why did not you think about me even once

As hot tears flooded her cheek and after a few more hour finally the car stopped in front of Jaigarh Palace



done with this chappy
i did my part and now its your turn
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so that i can improve more
i hope you all like my work


Edited by chocohollic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update...👏
Do cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!
loved it to core!!
plzz update soon!!

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