REALITY CHECK CHAPTER 6 PAGE 32 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update Mona,

Loved it,
enjoyed Manveer part the most😳.
Thanx 4 the PM😊.


thank you so much di
and i too enjoy while writing it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panchaali

Nice update...loved the Manveer part 👍🏼


thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

hey mona nice update

i really feel sry for jaggat but jay's anger was correct
this akash is getting into my nerves
best part was abt manveer scene

UDAY:welcome to your home princess

MANYATA:what do you mean by H-O-M-E ?

UDAY:I mean welcome to my that is your would be husband palace , welcome to Jaigarh palace a place you are going to spend your entire life wait here like a good girl till I get you some food I am aware that my princess is starving

nw waiting what will akash do


thank you so much
yes her trust had been broken and moreover everything will be fine
maybe by the promo you will start to like akash
yes i too love writing manveer parts

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey.. Mona...

That was fabulous...
Uday toh seedha kissed Manyata...
But Manveer scenes were too good...
This Akash is getting on my nerves...
Ab pata nahi kya karega...
And J...
I hope J understands ki yeh Jaggat ne nahi kiya...
Update soon...
And thanx for he PM...


hey
i am glad that you liked it
yes it implies that he cares for her
but maybe after the promo you will start to like him
she will understand
sorry i have my exams from the following week
so cannot update till the next month

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm update mona


thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari

hye!
read all the update, its awesome
loved it to the core
do continue soon
waiting to read further
please pm me if possible


i am glad that you liked me ss
sorry i have my exams from the following week
so cannot update till the next month
can you please send me buddy request as there is
some problem with my email verification
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

very nice story loved it
manveer awsome
update sooon
thanks 4 the pm
continue soon lovely


thank you so much
sorry i have my exams from the following week
so cannot update till the next month

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chocohollic


thank you so much

give the promo

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

awesome upadte

superb
loved it!!!!!!
uday nd manyta so cute
jai ko jagat pe guussa aata hai
wowww
thxx for the update


thank you so much

Originally posted by: serat

plzzz

update
plzzz
plzzz


give the promo
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Posted: 11 years ago

Promo

They were in a state of panic , as jai sat there crying and manyata trying her best to console her , uday was busy in the phone , he contacted all his high sources it had been more than 24 hours his brother was missing and jai could never forgive herself for this , the reason jaggat went missing was because of her , she wanted him back in her life , she needed him back in her life ,. She loved him

She sat with the ice cream in her hands , a part of it melted down and fell on her dress but she completely ignored it and continued to stare at him as she finally broke the silence and asked

JAI:do you really love jiji

He nodded his head in a yes and continued to look at the waves hitting the shore as she smiled and said

JAI:I promise to help you uday

He watched her , how angelic she looked in the dress , her milky skin glowed in the marine blue grown and her hair was into an elegant bun she truly was a princess as he held her hands softly and took her down the stairs to announce them as a couple in front of the whole world

He got the chance the deal was broken he had won , finally he fulfilled his mother 's wish although he did betray his father but he was happy that he had saved so many people life as he saw the police taking away his father , but a fear crept in his mind instead of guilt his dad had a dirty smirk as he said

GIRIRAAJ:no matter what but I will come back and seek my revenge son

A smile passed his face , as uday looked at him helplessly begging him to change his decision but akash was firm as he sternly replied

AKASH:do not worry if someone has to go then it would be me as I know how happy she will be with you do take care of her uday

UDAY:akash please don' t do this you can't go like this please


this was a small glimse of the upcoming
chapters of reality check i hope
you all enjoyed
thank you

Edited by chocohollic - 11 years ago

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