Pyaar Ka Bandhan Chap 21 pg 53

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Hello😛. I am back with a another SS. Thank you so much everyone that liked or commented on my 1st one. I will continue depending on the response since this will be a Jeeman + Virman SS, and I am worried if you guys will like it or not. I know in my older SS Bachpan ki Dosti, I had bits and pieces of Jeeman, but this one will have equal amounts of Jeeman and Virman, so I want to make sure that is ok with you guys before I continue the story. If i continue it will be sometime later next week but like I said that depends on the response. Hope you like it enjoy, and if possible let me know if I should continue or not. Here is the prologue and Intro, enjoy😊
Prologue:

Unconditional love, a love with no bounds, no end, it's a
love that lasts forever. It can turn the hardest of situations into magical
ones that last a lifetime. Phulo ka
taroon ka sabka kehena hai, ek hazaroon mein meri behena hai. Such a simple
line to say, the perfect way to describe the perfect sister; living up to the
title however is the hardest task any sister could take up. Jeevika and Manvi are orphans that grew up at
an orphanage and later moved to their own apartment once Jeevika was old enough
to take custody of Manvi. Since their
childhood they were everything for each other.
If Manvi was Jeevika's heart, Jeevika was Manvi's darkan. Do jism ek
jaan, they truly defined the saying with their unconditional love for each
other. Jeevika fell in love with Viren
Vadhera and now was living in her sasural but has managed to maintain the deep
bond she shares with her sister. Virat, Viren's younger brother has been opposed
to falling in love but has a strong connection with Manvi and though nokh jokhs
and friendship, he gradually develops feelings for her, but the true test of
love will come when he uncovers a secret that Manvi has hid from everyone,
including Jeevika. Will Jeevika be able
to live up to her Ek Hazaroon Mein title when her sister's happiness lies solely
on her willing to go against her sasural? Will Virat be able to withstand the
test of love, and prove the true meaning of unconditional love when Manvi's
secret comes known to him? Is pure love, whether it is from a sister or lover,
strong enough to withstand all the tests that life gives?

Index:

Chapter 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3675520/pyaar-ka-bandhan-chap-21-pg-53?pn=3

Chapter 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3675520/pyaar-ka-bandhan-chap-21-pg-53?pn=5

Chapter 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3675520/pyaar-ka-bandhan-chap-21-pg-53?pn=9

Chapter 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3675520/pyaar-ka-bandhan-chap-21-pg-53?pn=9

Chapter 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89836530�

Chapter 6i:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3675520/pyaar-ka-bandhan-chap-21-pg-53?pn=15�

Chapter 6ii:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90159166�

Chapter 7: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3675520&TPN=19








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Introduction:

"Toh kya hua mummy papa chale gaye, mein hoon na Mannu aur hamesha tumhari saath rahungi." Aaj toh aap bhi mere saath nahi ho Di she whispered as she clutched the file that had broken every single one of her dreams close to her as she cried herself to sleep.

"Didi, aap bhi shaadi karke jaugi?", "Ha Mannu mera dulha aayega aur mein chali jaungi" Im sorry Mannu, mein bachpan mein maazak karti reheti thi jab gusa hota tha, lekin ab toh mein saach mein tujse door hogai na. I hope you are fine, mujhe subha se bhout daar lag raha hai, she said looking at her sister's pictures.

The two sisters were miles apart yet still had a connection, a deep connection from the heart. Jeevika had got married a year ago to Viren Vadhera and was very happy with him in Chandighar, but at the same time was sad to leave Manvi alone in Rishikesh. Luckily, Viren's younger brother, Virat and Manvi were enrolled in the same college. Jeevika was relieved since he would be in the same town, and since he lived in the same apartment complex, he could keep an eye on her too.

"Chalo, Manvi tum kabse ladki ban gai sajne mein, itna time kyun lagare ho?," Virat asked as he knocked on her door for the 10th time. Manvi glared at door and threw her shoes at it in frustration. She was feeling a little better from last night and this chep devar of her sister's just ruined her mood. She was already frustrated with her own life for all her broken dreams and his teasing wasn't helping at all. She finally walked out, much to his relief.

"Are, kya yaar, bandariya jaise lagna tha toh itna time kyun lagaya?" he asked pulling her leg a little more. "Virat aaj mera mood bilkul nahi hai, please can we go," she said coldly as she walked towards his car. She had told her sister that she would be fine on her own, but after much insisting from her jiju, she agreed that Virat would take her to school and back since they were in the same classes finishing their MBA's. The Vadhera's were more than happy when Viren suggested this since they understood the deep bond that Jeevika had with Manvi. Virat didn't mind as he was good friends with Manvi and liked teasing her, he felt a strong connection with Manvi since his bhai and bhabhi's wedding, they had even become partners. "Partner, tum thik toh ho, aaj subha subha meri madubala itni chup kyun hai," he asked her teasing but with a hint of concern at what was wrong. Manvi smiled at him "kuch nahi Virat, sorry I yelled at you, mujhe bas aise hi kisi baat hi tension ho rahi thi," she said trying to hide the sadness that lurked behind her voice. The silence between them was broken with Jeevika's phone call, "Di, aap kaise ho," Manvi asked forcing her voice to sound happy so her sister would worry. "Mein thik hoon Mannu, did you have breakfast?." Manvi giggled, "Ha meri ma, I ate, that too a balanced breakfast, aap ka 20 questions katam hogaya," she said still laughing. After a while she hung up still smiling and Virat just chuckled. "tumhara bad mood ka instant ilaj, meri bhabhi," he said still chukling at the sweetness of the sisterly bond "Ha toh kya hua, nazar lagauki kya hamare rishte ko," she asked back in her sherni mood. "Are nahi nahi janemaan, ab chalo, lets get to class, nahi toh yeh dragon professor ka aag phir se niklegi, pata nahi kesi kesi creatures ko rakhte hai yeh college," he said dreading his accounting class, but smiled when he saw he managed to make her smile again, he hated her bad mood in the morning, it made him feel weird and worried inside, but he was relieved to see her acting normally again.

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woww its me first finally 😃
and really happy that you are back with a new work and that also it being sooo amazing ...the concept sounds really sooo interesting and the intro itself makes me epect soo much from this work of yours😃
waiting for the first chap plz make it sooon 😊
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amazing prologue and intro
continue soon
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awsome intro nimmi
will love to read more
the prologue was written beautifully
eager to know what is up with manvi
thanks alot for the pm
update soon
will be waiting
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awesome prologue
superb intro
plz cont soon
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just loved the prologue and intro,,
jeeman & virman combo wooow gonna rock
continue asap
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Nice Prologue..! Waiting fr the Update n Thanks for the PM!
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AMAZING PROLOGUE AND INTRO NIMI
WAITING FOR UPDATE 😃


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Nimi superb prologue and introduction!! 😃 Manvi hid something from Jeevika and others.. Interesting.. Waiting for the first part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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