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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome..!!! Loved VirMan moments and she re-lived the incident but ike the support she has from her sister and husband..Waiting for next..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
another awesome update
loved it
loved the balcony scene
and the foursome
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update ..manvi was still haunted by her past..but now im happy as she has decided to move on !! love the way virika & specially virat have been supporting her throughout !! the virman moments were cute !! update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey. M usually a silent reader but since I read ur this story I couldn't stop myself from commenting on ur story I just loved ur story just loved how virat supports manvi n love's her unconditionally. Hope u continue soon. N a request can u pm me when u update next. Plz plz plz continue soon will b waiting 4 ur update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update she decide move on
in her life update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 10: Taking a New Step Together

I am trying my best to complete this before the show ends and the forum closes. If you want to stay in touch with me after the forum closes add my Facebook account, nimi sharma. I will post more stories as I write there most probably. Thanks again guys for all the comments and likes. A big hug to all of you, I will miss those of you that I won't be in touch with after the forum closes. 🤗

Manvi POV

I woke up the next morning and this time he was still home, I stared at his shirtless body and blushed as I caressed his strong muscles. He moaned and pulled me closer, "good morning baby," he said pulling me on top of him. "Vvirat, where is your shirt I asked confused and then got my answer looking down at my own body, I was wearing his t-shirt, I froze thinking of what happened last night. "Virat you didn't, how could you even after you promised me you would wait," I randomly blurted out. He sensed my worry and held me close, "Manvi, you threw up all over your clothes last night, I tried getting you to the bathroom and you didn't want to get up nor did you let me up. I didn't want you sleeping in cold clothes so I took your shirt off and let you wear mine, nothing else happened, I promise he said kissing my hair. I looked at him and still was not convinced, I was literally shaking in fear when I got up, so much for the new beginning I promised him. "Baby I can wait for you till you are comfortable but I want you to at least be able to trust me. I promise I won't hurt you but it hurts so much when you doubt my love," he said as he looked away from me sad. I didn't know what to say, I hated all these emotions that filled me but I hated making Virat sad as well. I sighed not knowing what to do and realized that he got up to shower. I was able to walk a little now and made breakfast for him but he left when I came back from the kitchen. I didn't know what to do, I promised him I would try to move on yesterday and ended up just going back to where I started, scared of everything around me. I decided it was time to make a change, I would give Virat what he wanted. I looked through my wardrobe and picked up a sliver saree that he gave me when we were in Chandighar. I had Di help with decorations and she teased me all day about the surprise but I knew he needed it.

Virat's POV

I came back to see the room decorated with flowers and candles everywhere, it literally looked like our suhagraat. I smiled when I saw Manvi wearing the saree I got her, I loved the color on her. She walked over and slammed her lips on mine scaring me with her boldness. I gave in at first but when she pushed me on the bed and starting taking off my shirt and simultaneously unpinning her pallu, I held her hand. "Manvi what are you doing," I asked as I fixed her pallu. She looked down as tears started to stream down her face. "I thought this was what you wanted, I am sorry Virat, I am the worst wife ever. I can't even give you a single happiness," she cried as she got up to go the bathroom. She slammed the door shut leaving me utterly confused at what just happened. "Manvi open the door, we need to talk," I sighed as I remembered my hard words to her in the morning, this was all my fault. I finally decided to break open the door and saw her just sitting on the floor thinking. I shook my head and picked her up, she was still in her trance and I didn't know what to do. "Baby, you ok?" I asked her confused at what was going on. She broke down completely. "Virat I know it's a lot to ask but can you wait a little longer, I am not ready yet. I tried to break myself out of this shell but every time I try those horrible memories fill my head," she finally said looking at me distraught. I smiled at her, "Manvi I will make every single one of those memories go away, just give me one chance, ok," I said leaning in to kiss her lips. I felt a jolt of electricity run through me as I deepened the kiss.

Manvi POV

We were talking about waiting and he seemed like he agreed and then it happened, I felt his lips on mine again. This time it felt like I was melting under his touch as he deepened it and stuck in tongue in my mouth as it gently stroked every corner. I was on fire and moaned his name and he abruptly pulled back. "I love you Manvi, I am so sorry for this morning, I will wait for as long as you need," he said pecking my lips again. He pulled apart when I pulled him back on me, "Virat, tumhe pura haq hai, you have every right, make me urs tonight, please?" I asked him and saw his eyes fill with desire making me blush hard. "Are you sure Manvi, we really don't have to do this," he said pulling away. I pulled him closer and he understood immediately and took my lips in his. Hours later, I was lying on the bed cuddled in his arms, the feeling of our bodies touching was enough to make me blush. This was so different from what happened with Karan. I smiled at him still hugging him. "Virat, thank you. You broke my shell, you gave me a new life. How come this time all those memories didn't haunt me, how did you get them to leave?" I asked him confused and he just pecked my forehead. "I let it happen naturally Manvi that's why. None of this can be forced; it needs time, its love that drives these emotions baby not guilt. When you tried when I came back you were driven by guilt, what happened now had nothing to do with that guilt, the only thing that matters is the love that we share he said pulling me on to his chest.

"Mannu," I gasped as I heard Di. We were so caught up in the moment that I forgot Di was still in the other room. I stared at my Saree and all of Virat's clothes thrown on the floor. I was about to get up when Di walked in. I wanted to run and hide, this was so embarrassing. Virat pulled the covers over me covering my bare shoulders and smiled at Di. "umm, hi bhabhi, could you please give us a minute, tell bhai to just wait in your room, I will be over there soon," he said as he turned bright red as his eyes followed the trail of clothes that came off our bodies. Di turned around embarrassed, "oh my god, sorry Virat, next time let me know so I don't walk in, mannu I even helped you with the surprise at least you could have warned me" she said blushing as she ran out of the room. Virat ran his hands through his hair and turned me towards him "as embarrassing as that was, I guess we should have cheked, ab chalo, I think we should go see Bhai he must be looking for me, unless you want to do something else," he asked smirking. I slapped his chest and he picked me off the bed as we both got in the shower and got dressed again. Virat held my hand as we walked into Di's room, I was so embarrassed at what she saw earlier. "So chote, I see you are happy today," jiju joked as he patted Virat's back, "congrats on the new development," he said giggling some more. I blushed and sat down next to Di. Jiju explained the procedure he would go through to file the case and had me sign some papers. It was late now and we all went to sleep. I felt Virat's arms snake around me under my pallu and I smiled. "Baby I am sorry for what happened earlier, are you sure you are ok? I can't see you in any more pain," he said kissing my shoulder. I blushed and turned around, "Virat, I enjoyed it just as much as you did, that's why didn't want to get up even when I knew Di was back," I finally told him blushing hard. He smiled at me, "so does that mean I have permission to do it again," he asked huskily. I nodded my head yes almost instantly and he began a trail of kisses on me again. After 3 hours we finally had enough of each other and fell asleep making sure this time we put our clothes back on before Di or Jiju walked in on us again.

Edited by nimi00 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res im second!!
unres


very beautiful and neat!!!
this virat is such a sweetheart in understanding manvi...
manvi's initial fear was so justifiable!! virat wiping away her haunted memories of the worst past vt love was mind blowing!!!

(after the show ends the forum will be moved to the archieved section under channel star plus,, in that way the forum will still exist... we can still post new topics and stay live... so there is no worry in missing people!! 😊)

get going!!
Edited by virmanhus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi nimi😛
the story is awesome. i love ur stories.it is one of the best story i have ever read & iam a fan
of urs.😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
virat is such a sweet guy..he understands manvi very much
loved it
poor jeevika soo embarrassed 🤣
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update she is trying to move
but somewhere she still scare
from her past update soon

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