swaron...a night to remember by ammie

934800 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#1

~~~A night to remember~~~

Finally sharon is comming back to college a after 10 day(absent due to chickenpox) swayam is very excited & cnt wait to see her so goes on his bike to meet sharon...& singing...dinak din dana...wo dhun tu bajana...dinak din nachon mein...gaaye dill jhoomy zamana...tujy batlaunga mein mann ki...mann ki sari baatien...guzaray kesy meine ye din raatein...

Swayan on sharonz window" knock knock" sharon is in the bed as its very late at night
Sharon:Iss time pe kon aagya?(mumbeling while removing blanket and getting of the bed) she turn the light on and see swayam in the window...her face brights up all of sudden and run to open the window...as swayam jump in sharon grab him & hug him with arm around his neck so very tightly that swayam feel lockd up and he smils and put his arms around her back and hug her as tightly.
Sharon: (arms still around swayamz neck and facing at his face ..very close) "i missed u so so sooo much"(kiss him on his cheeks)
Swayam: kiss her on forehead " agar itna miss kar rahi tu mujy aany q nahi diya apny paas" (with the word paas he grabs her even close to him)
Sharon: agar tumy paas aany deti tu tumy b meri bemari lag jati...& i cudnt let that happn(after saying this sharon put her head into his chest)
Swayam: smell her soft hair and thn put his chin on her head as it is right on his chest)
"Sweetheart mjy tumhari di hoi har ik cheez se ishq"
Sharon:"really now(smile &push him back on the bed and fall on top of him)
Swayam:"bachao!bachao!ye larki meri izzat loot ly gi hahahaha"both laugh out loud
Swayan look at sharon and remove her hair frm her face"sharon tum teek ho na?" Sharon put her head in swayamz neck and her arms on his arm that they look like one body"i m fine swayam aur tumy dykny k baad tu i feel so much more good and happy ummm(kiss on his lips) i love u"
Swayam:"love u too"(move her on a side lye down with her side by side playing with her hair)
Sharon:(put swayam's hand around her back) "tumne mjy miss kiya?
Swayam:"ye koi poochny ki baat hai silly ofcourse miss kiya every second miss kiya itna miss kiya k sary gang ne tumara naam le le kar mujy bohot buly kiya(innocent look on face)"
Sharon"awww(give swayam baby hug) ma baby...i will see thm okai baby"
Swayam"simmi...simmi or rinni ne sab sy zyada buly kiya"
Sharon:"awww must hve been cute...wish i was there"
Swayam:"bohot bewafa ho tum u r taking their side...madam i m ur boyfriend.. u shud be taking my side...u r mine only gt that streight okai"
Sharon:"ufff...kitny posessive ho tum...but i love it jab tum iss tarha muj pe apna haq jitaty ho...swayam mein sirf aur sirf tumhari hun...hamesh hamesh k liye aur usky baad b"(sharon starts kissing swayam's eyes forehead, nose and thn slowly lock lips with him)
Swayan: "oye hoye meri jaan chali jaye gi...agar itna pyar karogi..."
Sharon:"mein jane hi nahi dungi coz tumari jaan ab meri hai samjy?"(grab swayam from color close to her self)
Swayam: "yes...samaj gya princess" swayam sit up & sharon place her head on his thie as if hez her pillow
Swayam:"bohot late ho gya hai ..i think i shud leave now"(running his fingers in sharonz hair while saying this)
Sharon:"No...plz stay dnt go"
Swayam:"sharon! Kya hogya hai tumy aur kaka(servent) kya sochy ga"
Sharon:"btw ye meri line honi chahiye thi as being gal...& kaka gaaon gaye hai so thats it u r staying"
Swayam:"okai baba i will how can i say no to ma princess...and i m more thn happy to saty bt on one condition?"
Sharon:"and what is that?"
Swayam:" well i am gna sleep here on the bed with u"
Sharon:"kuch zyada nahi ho raha hai"(with lil naughty smile on face)
Swayam:" fine thn mein chala jata yahan se"
Sharon:"shut up!tum kahi nahi jaa rahy ho...& ye lo(pass pillow to swayam) tum so sakty ho"
Swayam:" soch lo haan...mein abi warn kar raha hun...i can loose control..."(looking at sharon with such passion)
Sharon:"u r allowd to"(sleeps in swayams arms...sharing one pillow and one blanket)
Swayam:"mjy neend kesy aaye gi...mein tu saari raat tumy dyk dek kar guzar lunga"
Sharon:"mere majnu boy friend mein yahi hun tumhary paas tumhari banhon mein...kahi nahi ja rahi...so jao"(she put her hand on his eyes to close thm down)
Raat dheery dheery dhal rahi hai aur sharon rai prakash swayam shikhawat ki baanhu.mein sukoon se so rahi hai...jab k swayam apny dono haton ko sharon k surround.kiya hai...jese k wo ik bohot precious treaure ho...or koi ussy chura ka le na jae...is dar se wo usy bhot tighy hug kiye sogya hai...

"Banho k darmiyan...do pyar.mil rahay hein...jaane kya bole mann...dholy.sun k badan...dhadkan bani zubaan"

~~~A night to remember~~~

Finally sharon is comming back to college a after 10 day(absent due to chickenpox) swayam is very excited & cnt wait to see her so goes on his bike to meet sharon...& singing...dinak din dana...wo dhun tu bajana...dinak din nachon mein...gaaye dill jhoomy zamana...tujy batlaunga mein mann ki...mann ki sari baatien...guzaray kesy meine ye din raatein...

Swayan on sharonz window" knock knock" sharon is in the bed as its very late at night
Sharon:Iss time pe kon aagya?(mumbeling while removing blanket and getting of the bed) she turn the light on and see swayam in the window...her face brights up all of sudden and run to open the window...as swayam jump in sharon grab him & hug him with arm around his neck so very tightly that swayam feel lockd up and he smils and put his arms around her back and hug her as tightly.
Sharon: (arms still around swayamz neck and facing at his face ..very close) "i missed u so so sooo much"(kiss him on his cheeks)
Swayam: kiss her on forehead " agar itna miss kar rahi tu mujy aany q nahi diya apny paas" (with the word paas he grabs her even close to him)
Sharon: agar tumy paas aany deti tu tumy b meri bemari lag jati...& i cudnt let that happn(after saying this sharon put her head into his chest)
Swayam: smell her soft hair and thn put his chin on her head as it is right on his chest)
"Sweetheart mjy tumhari di hoi har ik cheez se ishq"
Sharon:"really now(smile &push him back on the bed and fall on top of him)
Swayam:"bachao!bachao!ye larki meri izzat loot ly gi hahahaha"both laugh out loud
Swayan look at sharon and remove her hair frm her face"sharon tum teek ho na?" Sharon put her head in swayamz neck and her arms on his arm that they look like one body"i m fine swayam aur tumy dykny k baad tu i feel so much more good and happy ummm(kiss on his lips) i love u"
Swayam:"love u too"(move her on a side lye down with her side by side playing with her hair)
Sharon:(put swayam's hand around her back) "tumne mjy miss kiya?
Swayam:"ye koi poochny ki baat hai silly ofcourse miss kiya every second miss kiya itna miss kiya k sary gang ne tumara naam le le kar mujy bohot buly kiya(innocent look on face)"
Sharon"awww(give swayam baby hug) ma baby...i will see thm okai baby"
Swayam"simmi...simmi or rinni ne sab sy zyada buly kiya"
Sharon:"awww must hve been cute...wish i was there"
Swayam:"bohot bewafa ho tum u r taking their side...madam i m ur boyfriend.. u shud be taking my side...u r mine only gt that streight okai"
Sharon:"ufff...kitny posessive ho tum...but i love it jab tum iss tarha muj pe apna haq jitaty ho...swayam mein sirf aur sirf tumhari hun...hamesh hamesh k liye aur usky baad b"(sharon starts kissing swayam's eyes forehead, nose and thn slowly lock lips with him)
Swayan: "oye hoye meri jaan chali jaye gi...agar itna pyar karogi..."
Sharon:"mein jane hi nahi dungi coz tumari jaan ab meri hai samjy?"(grab swayam from color close to her self)
Swayam: "yes...samaj gya princess" swayam sit up & sharon place her head on his thie as if hez her pillow
Swayam:"bohot late ho gya hai ..i think i shud leave now"(running his fingers in sharonz hair while saying this)
Sharon:"No...plz stay dnt go"
Swayam:"sharon! Kya hogya hai tumy aur kaka(servent) kya sochy ga"
Sharon:"btw ye meri line honi chahiye thi as being gal...& kaka gaaon gaye hai so thats it u r staying"
Swayam:"okai baba i will how can i say no to ma princess...and i m more thn happy to saty bt on one condition?"
Sharon:"and what is that?"
Swayam:" well i am gna sleep here on the bed with u"
Sharon:"kuch zyada nahi ho raha hai"(with lil naughty smile on face)
Swayam:" fine thn mein chala jata yahan se"
Sharon:"shut up!tum kahi nahi jaa rahy ho...& ye lo(pass pillow to swayam) tum so sakty ho"
Swayam:" soch lo haan...mein abi warn kar raha hun...i can loose control..."(looking at sharon with such passion)
Sharon:"u r allowd to"(sleeps in swayams arms...sharing one pillow and one blanket)
Swayam:"mjy neend kesy aaye gi...mein tu saari raat tumy dyk dek kar guzar lunga"
Sharon:"mere majnu boy friend mein yahi hun tumhary paas tumhari banhon mein...kahi nahi ja rahi...so jao"(she put her hand on his eyes to close thm down)
Raat dheery dheery dhal rahi hai aur sharon rai prakash swayam shikhawat ki baanhu.mein sukoon se so rahi hai...jab k swayam apny dono haton ko sharon k surround.kiya hai...jese k wo ik bohot precious treaure ho...or koi ussy chura ka le na jae...is dar se wo usy bhot tighy hug kiye sogya hai...

"Banho k darmiyan...do pyar.mil rahay hein...jaane kya bole mann...dholy.sun k badan...dhadkan bani zubaan"



To be continued
Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

20

Views

3.4k

Users

16

Likes

51

Frequent Posters

Ayesha_Hasan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
First of all, Lovely title, Ammie..
And then the OS...
It was really cute and romantic...
Really loved it a lot...
Swayam will never change...
He is gonna be a MAJNU forever..
And Sharon was so happy to see Swayam at her house..
And then the romantic scenes were written really very well...
Hehe!! I even blushed while reading it..lol..
And They even slept together in each other's embrace..
Really cute scene..
Loved it a lot, dear..
Do keep writing more..
934800 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Thnx aysha...am blushing by ur commnts lol...thnx for encouragment love u loadzzz[B][/B]
swaron9113 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
awesm os
do write more nd more.
Ayesha_Hasan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Thnx aysha...am blushing by ur commnts lol...thnx for encouragment love u loadzzz[B][/B]


Love you too, Ammie🤗
Swaronvrushan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Ammie second os... and again...it was out of this world...I love it ammy...
934800 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Thnk u all for appreciation...means alot
Sanskruti_tanha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
heya dear lovely os , maine bhi IF pe apni journey os ke saath hi start ki thi , n i noe how it feels when u get good feed backs , n seening dat u r a newbie i did not miss the chance to encourage u as others did to me . 👍🏼 so good luck n do write more .😉
Edited by Sanskruti_tanha - 12 years ago
sweetydiyafrien thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
wonderful and amazing os... loved it...
shanya8 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
sweet os di i mean loved every line n word of it n romance specially 😳😳 u know i luv romance n haa u r an awesome writer well my 1 request do rite something 4 taarey 2 plzz😭😭 i want it plzz if u have time plzz do it 😭😃 n di keep writing like dis n i ll always comment like dis😆😆😆 lol well will always comment pakka 😃

Related Topics

Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima · 5 months ago

A Love Story Sealed in Dance Dreams The sun shone brightly over the beautifully decorated outdoor venue, where fairy lights twinkled even in the...

Expand ▼
Channel V Dil Dosti Dance thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse · 10 months ago

Hello, I don't know what came into i pen it down. Hope you like it. COVER BY @EXOTICDISASTER It was supposed to be just another evening at...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".