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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moomin4455

I find the politics fascinating - I always feel like I'm learning so much when I read this story..


More than that I love how you have portrayed Arnav and Khushi here like comrades in arms orchestrating a legitimate semi-revolution/mass reform that is acceptable to the masses...through possibly not-so legitimate means. Your Arnav is brilliant, in control, incredibly intelligent and clinical. Yet in front of Khushi he let loose his emotions, only to be grounded by Khushi. khushi is no less: incredibly bright, sardonic and yet grounded, she brings balance to Arnav here, which I loved reading.

So the big three are forming an alliance...I cannot wait to see the scandals (of which I'm sure there are many) to puncture holes in the coalition. What part will Rathore play here? Will there be civil war as Khushi hopes to see? How can Akash help them to give them the upper hand once more?



I think this was one of the first time they reacted like people and not like robots as I have come to see them. There is immense potential, intelligence and a drive to see things through but the lack of emotions almost make them seem inhumane - and it isn't by choice they are this way. It is because they have to be else displaying emotion would work against them in an argument. However when they are alone, its good to let out what they are truly feeling so that the other takes charge of the situation and really help the other to grow, evolve.

I have a question for you - do you think scandals are really going to work against a party? And if there is coalition, would it really matter?

For the rest of the questions, see this space for more! :=)

- RB
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey i hv read this story long time back n was really impressed with it
but u update it quite infrequently so not able to follow regularly but believe me i would love to
so can u plzzz pm me this one also..plzzz plzzz
curious to know ...what role akash will play now
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting story. Would love to follow this to the very end. You have a very intimate knowledge of politics. It is a refreshing read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well, they haven't been upped yet. The coalition is a very volatile one, given Bhanu Pratap's previous exploits, it's safe to say it's not going to be very popular once they shake up things at the Supreme Court. Sadly, the Indian Judiciary has failed to recognize it's power and responsibilities, in 66 years of Independence. Akaash ,I fear is right- a civil war would mean too much collateral damage. I don't know why Akaash is here, but if he is , they can actually solve this problem faster. That is, if he is on their side. The coalition though made me think- a religious fanatic, a self-proclaimed communist( who I'm sure travels first class and has a Merc) and a thug- isn't that a description of our current MPs? Oh we forgot to add those foreign-educated Rolex wearing scions of erstwhile princely states.
P.S. Sorry for the late comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Raila1014

I just read the whole story in one go. Phew! Girl, you got some,talent. Wow, I am impressed. I am not into political thriller, maybe too disillusioned with the way they work to think anything can be done. But I love this well thought, well planned and well researched story that you are executing flawlessly. Seriously, I could picture the movie in motion for this story. I do hope you copyright your works. I must tell you, you are probably the only writer on this forum with the range of topics you have covered. In all your stories.


Now back to this one, a coalition wil be needed with Akash to fight the immediate threat but what will be the price that Akash will want after being deceived by them. What about Daddy Rathore? Me think, he stands to gain from BP' s new alliance. Does Arnav know how highs father died? And the players involved in his death.

Behind every politician is the supporting cast that makes them look good like Arnav and Kushi. The brainy ones don't inspire the public usually so a charismatic front is required and this where Akash will come in. The master's son will help the devotee's son succeed where their fathers failed.



The mystery of Arnav's father death isn't something I am concentrating on. For the sake of completion, I will be touching up on it but it will mostly be the campaigning and the elections. Rathore likes to win and he wants to have his terms in the ruling government. For example, he comes from a mining rich area so he may demand ministry surrounding that domain. But Rathore is a seasoned politician who knows what happens in these sensitive coalition. This one especially is really difficult to sustain, is it not?

- RB
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: V323

Let me be very honest here -- I do not enjoy politics. I don't say that politics is a bane and shouldn't exist, and nor do I say that is all about the corruption, because it isn't. I would be a great failure as a student of political science (which I am) if I said so.

But fact remains that I don't enjoy politics. Frankly because in our country, its been reduced to nothing but money. Is politics synonymous with money? No. Has politics been reduced to nothing but money? Yes.
I would have loved to meet Arnav and Khushi someday. Maybe ...
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In theory, Arnav and Khushi's plan sounds perfect ... putting it in practise however ...



Ironically not many here, including me, enjoys politics but it doesn't mean one needs to shy away from it. The story is not about corruption or money or even power though the necessary thread to hang on for such long does seem that way. Its an exploration of political scenario and touch about historical events which drove the policies to what we are seeing today.

- RB
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Posted: 12 years ago
Confession: I read all chapters, in almost 24 hours period and parts of which were beyond me..
I will comment separately now, once i re-start reading..
but lady, (don't know your name, pardon me!) u are a fabulous writer.. As one of the readers said, Mindf$^#^ at its best (the offher FF of yours is the BEST at it tho; need to know which one? :P)..
Its difficult for me to understand so many things and the challenge is to go with the characters mind.. Law, one of the things i wanted to pursue once I get time in life.. seems difficult and scary now..too scary to even read and attempt..
but a challenge..
How do you do that!
N as for the last chapter I read, Akash heard all! now am scared..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RockBarbie



I think this was one of the first time they reacted like people and not like robots as I have come to see them. There is immense potential, intelligence and a drive to see things through but the lack of emotions almost make them seem inhumane - and it isn't by choice they are this way. It is because they have to be else displaying emotion would work against them in an argument. However when they are alone, its good to let out what they are truly feeling so that the other takes charge of the situation and really help the other to grow, evolve.

I have a question for you - do you think scandals are really going to work against a party? And if there is coalition, would it really matter?

For the rest of the questions, see this space for more! :=)

- RB


I don't think scandals affect a party from the outside, but the effect can be subtle and a 'retinkering' of party policy. Key figures, unknown but influential figures that are suddenly brought to light by scandal can be removed, or as often happens displaced from important positions. It's a opportunity for party ties to cement and consolidate or even begin to fragment, but I doubt it will be apparent from the outset. Over time, it may be the catalyst for change...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moomin4455


I don't think scandals affect a party from the outside, but the effect can be subtle and a 'retinkering' of party policy. Key figures, unknown but influential figures that are suddenly brought to light by scandal can be removed, or as often happens displaced from important positions. It's a opportunity for party ties to cement and consolidate or even begin to fragment, but I doubt it will be apparent from the outset. Over time, it may be the catalyst for change...



I had thought the same but Karnataka politics and even TN politics for that matter changed that perspective. The parties plummeted when they couldn't handle scandal after scandal and people were tired of the current government. In the end, the replacements of people weren't enough and it hit the party so badly that almost a decade of work was gone down the drain. These things affect greatly in an election year.

Like how politicians believe that public memory is short, the same public also relies completely on fresh memories than over a period of time. Not everyone can pull off a splendid victory after being subjected to much media and public speculation. The pasts of Karnataka, TN and AP are best examples for that.

- RB
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 34:

"That will be the death of democracy."

Khushi recovered first. "It's already on its death bed."

Akash chuckled. "May I come in?" He asked turning to Arnav. Arnav hesitated for a moment and looked around the kind of information that was spread around the ground.

"Sure," Arnav exhaled and felt the tension seep out of his skin.

Akash walked inside the apartment and occupied the floor space emptied minutes before by Shukla. "This is exactly why I didn't want you two to be around during this period. You are both meddling idiots." There was fondness in his voice and a deal of exhaustion. Arnav threw him a bottle of mineral water which Akash caught expertly. He exhaled softly after taking a several gulps of water and screwed the cap back on, relief spreading across his face after quenching his thirst.

Looking at the bottle he noted, "As of today at least four countries in Africa that are undergoing severe water damage. There are at least another four which are border line waterless. Here, in our country, we have villages which lack water supply, electricity let alone hospitals or schools. We are closing three decades of introduction of Anganwadis in 1975 yet the outreach doesn't even constitute 10% of the total population who are in need of the services. Children die inside these facilities because of poor infrastructure or gross negligence. The cities continue to expand in exponential proportions while villages have started to look like old age homes and morgues. How long…how long should this have to go? Why do we have to read in newspapers that a child walked five kilometers every day to go to school and pass tenth standard boards? It isn't something to be proud of; we have to be ashamed that the basic right of the child was not satisfied by the government. Our country has more NGOs than actual government offices yet we have the maximum number of people on government salary. The status of education system-"

Khushi moved first and hugged Akash sideways. Arnav was impassive and watched Akash twist his hips and put his arm around Khushi's waist. He rubbed his temple and tried not to give into the violent burst of emotions erupting in the pit of his stomach.

When Akash pulled away from Khushi, Arnav noted her wince when she turned back and slid to her original place.

"It's too late to ask, threaten or intimidate you two to stay away from this but I guess you two never listen to anyone else but each other." Akash recovered from emotional pit he had fallen into and maintained a nonchalance expression. "What's the real reason for you two to be interfering in the elections anyway?" Annoyance crept in his voice.

"You know Akash, for all the things you preach you seem to forget one tiny little detail." Arnav said, condescending. Akash waited for Arnav to continue. Arnav chuckled. "Your precious democracy."

Akash looked as if someone slapped him.

"I don't doubt your intentions Akash, I know very well that infrastructure development would be your highest priority close to national security when you come to office. But…let me, a common citizen, choose you. You cannot see Khushi mocking our country's democracy yet to toy with the very fabric of it leisurely for achieving your goals. You cannot win this election without dirtying your hands Akash-"

"Don't preach me about corruption Arnav. I am willing to pay the cost for my actions and delineation of my morality along the line. I am willing to make that compromise. Frankly, I don't care shit about how we are going to win this thing anymore. All that matters is, my government has to be in power, that's all." Akash's voice was clear.

"Why are you telling us all of this to us?" Khushi lost her patience. "You know Arnav and I are going to what we want to do. You are going to do what you want to do. That new coalition will do what they want to do. You have this nave belief that you can change the country in five years. Please don't take example of a state and extrapolate that at national level. There is a reason why it's called center. To start with states don't worry too much about national security or defense budget. Half the time they demand things from center. Your intentions are good but you are not even five percent equipped to deal with the aftermath. Do you think the governance will improve overnight?" Khushi gulped a large intake of oxygen and shook her head.

"The problem isn't the government Akash," her voice was soft and tired.

"The problem is the people." Arnav said. "That thing called democracy which you adore and obsess yet so easily willing to screw over for the sake of power…that thing isn't going to change with change in government. You want to bring about a change? Change people then. Make them aware. Make them culpable. Make them responsible for their goddamn mistakes." Arnav wasn't angry. He had crossed the threshold of anger and resentment.

"Change doesn't come by reading newspaper filled with motivational pieces or watching news Arnav. Come on, our public is more intelligent than that." Akash shook his head.

Khushi laughed. "Our television programs are filled with reality shows feeding on the voyeuristic tendencies and penchant for finding entertainment in misery. And then you have paid news, silly competitions and regressive television dramas which the mass lap it up because – hey, that's the best we can do."

"All the more reason for good governance, don't you think so?" Akash shrugged.

"We can sit here and debate all night about what's right and what isn't." Arnav sighed. "Do you think people will be less corrupt once they come to power? Do you think the other parties will be quiet and don't try to poach your people if you actually form a government? Even hypothesis proves otherwise Akash. Coalitions are created and broken all the time." Arnav rubbed his forehead.

Silence transcended in that room. Each one of them knew what they were doing wouldn't have any consequence of a dynamic parameter changed overnight. Given the size of democracy and the tenacity of the people, things could take any direction based on these months alone.

"The current government wasn't voted because they are the best. They were formed they could build a coalition to majority." Akash said finally.

"Why are you here?" Khushi asked. Arnav looked at Akash waiting for an answer.

"Honestly…I don't know." He chuckled. "Well, my father is pretty put off by lot of things so he is trying to fix things in his own way. I had an inkling that you two would be up to something. If people get a whiff of what you are doing, they are going to demolish you, you know that right?" Akash's voice was strangely clogged.

"Death and taxes are life's inevitability Akash," Khushi said lightly.

Arnav scoffed. "Speak for yourself. I don't pay taxes."

Akash burst into fit of laughter and Khushi joined him moments later.

"I do wish you win this election and make the changes we all want, you know?" Arnav was the first one to recover from impromptu laughing session. "Maybe then I can retire and settle down in a farm in some interior village that doesn't even have a post office."

"Today's breaking news – coalition between Krishna Kumar, Prasenjit Sarkar and Bhanu Pratap have thrown us all to a loop Arnav. They along with few other parties can easily sweep this election. MLAs wouldn't sway easily as everyone knows and is aware of Bhanu Pratap's…sadism. The punishment would be at a personal level if not political." Akash replied.

"Akash, you are lucky it's Bhanu Pratap who is the loose end of this coalition." Khushi said with a hint of smile.

"Come on Khushi, no one is that stupid. Bhanu Pratap will hold out till end of elections and then he will go back to being the monster that he is." Akash chided her.

Arnav shook his head. "Khushi is right Akash. If you know exactly which buttons to push, Bhanu Pratap can be played well." Arnav bit his lip and stared at the floor in front of him, an idea forming in his head.

"I should probably go." Akash stood up. "I shouldn't have come here really," he added as he started to walk out of the apartment, Khushi and Arnav few steps behind him. "It was just…too much today I suppose." He hovered near the threshold. "There is a point when I draw a line, the line which I never cross and with every passing day the line is moving further and further from my moral circle. I…don't want to end up being a person with power but lost all sense of credible morality, you know?" Akash said it in a rush.

"I'll remember to give you a kick when I see such a thing happen," Arnav said honestly.

Akash chuckled mirthlessly. "I shall probably kick your ass or do something…vitriol as a proportionate response to your actions."

Arnav shrugged carelessly. "I guess it's a risk we both have to take."

Akash didn't move from the threshold. When he spoke, his voice was barely above whisper. "Why are you doing this?" It was his turn to ask.

"Someone's got to do it, right?" Arnav said chuckling. Akash looked at him unblinking and dared him to tell the truth.

Arnav's chuckles died and he looked at Khushi with a smile. Turning to Akash he said, "Because we are the people."

Edited by RockBarbie - 12 years ago

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