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Thought of penning down this part'it was there in my mind for how long even I don't know'.this story is kind of my own dream'as the title suggests'this dream of mine was a constant one'nd I kinda made it into a story wid my imagination..so I thought to make it memorable one by sharing wid u guys'let me tell u first'this iz simple story..no drama'nothing watso ever''.if it has any resemblance wid any of de other writers plz do inform me'.so here iz de first part,,itz small one coz..i wanna kno'.if u liked it'I will post de next part soon enuf'.

part 1

A man well groomed'sitting on a white horse'was coming towards her'..he was hidden in de mist'.she couldn't see his face'so she came closer to see who dat mysterious man was'he was coming closer'nd closer'de girl could almost see his face

that was until '"sexy ..sexy..pa pa..pa..u my girl.." (sexy mama-bombay rockers-my fav song) started πŸ˜†'

Geet-oh shit 😑!!...that was dream😭'..kya yaar iss stupid fon se mera dream karab hogaya πŸ˜•..it was sch a beautiful dream'nd I was about to see deman's face' I forgot to off the stupid alarm'mmm koi bath nahi 'abhi bi time hai'.bandh karthe hai ..or phirse sothey haiπŸ˜›'nd will try to see de face of de stranger on white horse😳

After 10 min or so''..her door started banging ''when no sound came frm de inside..de door burst open'and 2 girls stood fuming 😑 at the figure who was sleeping peacefully unaware of the storm about to hit her'and dat was A girl as beautiful as the sunrise with brown eyes,unkempt hair and dimple adorning her face when she smiles''her name was geet 'was sleeping peacefully

The girls looking at her den at each other smiled'rather an evil smile😈

One of the girls slipped into de toilet adjoining the room and returned with a mug full of water..

And together both..

1''''''''''''''''..2'''''''''''''''.3

SPLASH..!!!!!!!!!!

They dumped the whole content onto geet's head'πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

Geet- kya..kya hua'kaha hai barish,πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ'.startled looked around '.nd saw de 2 devils with de mug'.

Geet-(fuming) 😑😑 'kuthi '''.kamini'.chodunghi nahi 😑''hath me lagan a mar dalunghi thum dono ko 🀒'.

1st girl-hahahha '.dekhne layek thi thera chehra'πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›.

2nd girl- aur nahi tho kya,,,,,,we tired everything'frm shouting 'to waking you up'.but u didn't budge frm de bed'so this was de last option'nd we njoyed it very much'..actually ur lucky geet '.samira(sam-1st girl) keh rahi thi ki'we should kick you out frm de bed πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ'but u kno me'I said poor soul 'leave her butt alone..zarurath padenghi'πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›

Geet-butt hoga thera sir 😑'..yaaar acha sapna dekh rahi thi πŸ˜•'sab karab kar diya'.

Sam- ..urgh.😑.!!! get up lazy bones'.itz time for college'u have only 20 mins to get ready'...nd u kno there iz at least 20 mins diffrence frm college to hostel...ready na hui tho'.1st lecture miss hoga' aur thughe patha hai na'wo prof kitna kadus hai'..yaar utt ja 😑'. There is still 225 days left for you to dream😑 aur waise bhi same hi dream dekhethe hai...koi stranger on a white horse...yaar grow up itz modern days now..kon sawari karega horse par...itz de age ducati nd u wa ayi thera rajkumar guadi pe..'.me aur nora(2nd girl) chel raha hu' badh me milthe hai'..hamara kam tho pura hogaya..

Geet- kya'20 mins'.y didn't u wake me up earlier''.aur kya wo kadus ka claz hai first hour'aur kya kaha ..mera stranger ke bare me kuch kaha tho mar dalunghi 😑'thum log jar aha hu'dhokey bazo'.at least w8 kar'.akhir hamiri dosti ke khatir'aur ha ducati ya horse...munda tho mera hi haiπŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ...so no taunting him..

nora- wa..wa kya zamana aaya hai'help karo'aur thane hum bhi suno''ab chal drama queen'we aint gonna do anything to ur dream boy..πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ

Geet- urgh,.😑.!! mughe bhi koi shok nahi uss stupid diverse college jane ki''where they put people into classes according to the dress they wear nd where their parents work 😑''.

Precap- college''.boy- aagayi hamari college ki shaan or maan

Okay guys that's it the first part'😳'u must have got a hint something abt de story right'πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ'..'plz doo comment tl me ur views should I continue or end it here'.please do comment'.

. part 2- pg 1

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Part -2

Geet- kya'.πŸ˜‘πŸ˜• 20 mins'.y didn't u wake me up earlier''.aur kya wo kadus ka claz hai first hour'aur kya kaha'thum log jar aha hu'dhokey bazo'.at least w8 kar'.akhir hamiri dosti ke khatir πŸ˜›
'

Nora- wa..wa kya zamana aaya hai 'help karo'aur thane hum bhi suno πŸ˜•''ab chal drama queen'

Geet- urgh,.😑.!! mughe bhi koi shok nahi uss stupid diverse college jane ki''where they put people into classes according to the dress they wear nd where their work' parents

... '.

Geet came out wearing a simple salwar suit'tied her hair in a plait 'nd a simple kohl adorning her eyes'.three left for college in nora's car

...

In the car

Geet- (panicking) πŸ˜• 'nora slow de speed yaar'..no1 iz goin for labour ova here 'slow a ltl ..do u want to pollute entire delhi wid overspeed smoke

'.

Nora- geet just shut up 😑'.firstly there wa jaise hum late horaha' nd secondly mughe nahi miss karneka uss kadus mr.oberio ka claz miss karnkeka'did u 4get or should I remind u wat he did to the other students who came late last time'pura haftha common toilet clean karwaya'.πŸ˜›ajeeb aadhmi hai late aya..aur punishment keliye toilet clean karwaya' 'I don't want to clean somebody else messπŸ˜‰'.if u want geet..mein abhi issi wakth thughe yaha beech raste pe chod dethi hu'walk karke college ana'.tik hai..aur pura haftha toilet clean karna πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›

..

Sam- kyaaa'''.😲.toilet aur mein'.nahiii'.😲 .mera nails kaarab hoga'yaar speed karna'.hum iss geet ko yaha chod dethi hai πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

'.

Geet-'kya 😲'arre wah sam.thughe mere phikar chodkar thera nails pe padi hai'..😑w8 ill show u wat dis GEET MGR '.thera kya banathi hai

'.

Saying so both geet nd sam had a fist f8'..aur beech mein agaya poor nora

'

Nora-(angrily) 😑 stop it u two'.wat r u KG children'πŸ˜†.my nieces behave bettr than u'now stop f8tn nd let me concentrate on de road'aur nahi tho kal newspaper 'first headline hoga'3 hot girls dead in a road accindent'..nd mind it u two I don't want to see my mangled face in de newspaper'..so u better both behave'or else u two will be out de nxt instant'.nd will have to walk to college'aur ha f8tn issliye hua than a ki sam u cant clean de toilet alone'..πŸ˜ƒno worries now geet will be there wid u..πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ once I remove de 2 of u out of dis car.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

'.

Geet nd sam both togthr '(pouting)😳 sorry nora'. Hum phirse f8tn nahi karega

'.

Nora- hahaha'u had to see urself'..πŸ˜›πŸ˜†u wer like really KG students'...πŸ˜†okay okay'nw be still''..


Geet- waise nora,sam.. 'Tj hai kaha hai' haven't seen her wid u guys 'wer iz she 'yesterday wen she called she was like'mere sath hi utt kar college jayega'ab hai kaha wo

'

Sam- naa she had some problem wid her car..so went to garage first thing in de morning to fix her baby' πŸ˜†.thujhe patha hai na wo kithni possessive uski babyko lekar

'

Geet- (laughing)πŸ˜† yea I kno 'how could one 4get she even had naming ceremony for dat stupid carπŸ˜†πŸ˜› '.lolz'maza agaya tha uss din'hass haske chaddi gili kar betta,πŸ˜›πŸ˜³,'..finally she had to kick me out'.frm de ceremony'.wo ayegha na'I mean will she come today to 'akhir uski baby ka thabyat karab hai na πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ

'.

Nora-'waise geet'v know ur eager to get to college akhir 😳'thughe waha thera majnu w8 kar raha hoga na πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

'

Sam- ha'sahi kaha thune'.woh ek munda '.poor guy cant u see his love'.ek saal se thera peechey aaraha he aur thu he ki'no sir noo..thank you πŸ˜† 'wats so wrong wid u'cant u say yes to de poor guy'.πŸ˜‰.see he his frm a rich family' πŸ˜‰well behaved hai'aur phir kya problem hai'.hmmm kahi aur tho nahi hai thera mann me'ha batha,,de'waise plz don't say itz ur mysterious dream guy'.noo rubbish abt him

'

'

Nora- ha sam sahi keh rahahe'.poor avinash(avi) '..have to ask u..since u seem aloof to love 'nd all geet'.v had a gr8 doubt ki kahi thum ..😳wo nahi hona..πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰'she asked smirking

Geet- (angrily) 😑 thumahara wo ka mathlub kya hai'sach sach bathao 😑

'

Nora- (laughing ) mera mathlab wo'jo girls ko love kartha hai..πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ'lesbian..πŸ˜†

'

Saying this both sam nd nora hi-fied each other nd burst out laffing seeing geets reaction

..

Geet-(very very angry) 😑😑 theri tho mein'.mar dalunghi'mein aur lesbian'yaar im de the most staright person alive πŸ˜‘πŸ˜†

Sam- so y cant u say yes to dat majnu πŸ˜›of urs' huh'.poor guy'akhir their ek yes mille tho who kushi kushi marjathey πŸ˜†

'

Geet (mumbles softly) ha ha if I say yes to that guy'de nxt day u will have attended my death ceremony 'make dat two first uss avi ki den mine'mar dalenghi who mujhe kissi aur ko dekha tho'na baba na.😲.i love my life too much so I should stay out of this πŸ˜²πŸ˜†

'.

Nora- oii..geet did u say something'have u gon mad'kudh se bath kar rahi hai??

Sam- if she iz mad then it confirms de crazy things she had done in de past 😎

'

Geet- kya'mein aur paghal

..

Both sam nd nora 'ha thum

Saying this all three of dem burst out laffin

'

Geet- wat.. u guys very concernd abt me'wat abt u guys.😳.?? ha bathao πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ'I haven't seen any bfs or lovers wid u guys'..every proposal wch comes to u guys r rejected'so wats ur xcuse'tl me miss samiera shah'nd miss naureen gupta ha uss tj ko bhi math bulna wo bhi har bhar reject karthey hai'kahi thum log apna prince charming keliye w8 nahi kar rahe'kahi thum log wo tho nahi she asked while smirking nd smiling

Nora- first of all geet itz nora nt naureen'yaar kitini baar kaha hai nora bulane ko πŸ˜†'aadhath nahi hai uss name se'nd nxt rahi rejects ki'I nva have seen de right person'to say yes'lets take de long ride'if milgaya tho first of all ill let u kno geet 😳

Geet- okay okay'.u escaped..(nd mumbles softly)thera prince charming tho mein dunde chukka hu.nd smiles secretly.nd she speaks loudly'itz nt easy to kick every 1 of ur rejects around to shoo dem off'bahuth mehnath karne padi

Aur sam wats ur xcuse

'

Sam- I haven't met mr- right guy who matched me in every way'whether itz personality ya gentleness'haven't met one'so im still single nd nt ready to mingle easily

'

Geet- thum dono ko na 'moon ya Jupiter se lecher ana padegha ladka'

Waise guys hamara gang ka naam rakhna chahiyr THE REJECTS 😎'.nt in our sense but for others ..kyunki frm wer I have seen u guys u reject all'so itz apt for our gang πŸ˜†

..

Nora- thu ayi badi sati savitri πŸ€“'poor avi ko tho har bar reject kathey aye haina'.hes sch a sweet guy 'he like u for ur simple mind,nd choice'aur thu hai ki uski zindaghi mein chudail πŸ˜†banker ghoom rahe hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ

'

Geet- kya mein chudail' 😲if I am chudail, dem ur vampires πŸ˜†'.wo Victoria wali vamp uss eclipse mein

'

Nora nd sam to gthr kya VAMPIRE 😲

''.

Sam- vamp ya human'wo Edward Cullen jaise kissi milley πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ'.(lukin up) hai baghwan mujhe Edward jaisa ek pathi dena plz πŸ˜‰

'

Geet..mumbles there liye mein ne Edward nahi but koyi aur vampire chuna hai

..

Sam-geet thune kuch kaha thune.??

Nahi tho

Nora- but guys I want Jacob..he iz hot' πŸ˜‰ nt CullenπŸ˜›

nahi cullen hi hot hai πŸ˜ƒ

Ek min ,,,ek min,,,if u guys take Edward nd Jacob'.poor bella kya kareghi waha πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

'

Kyu'uska kya..she has her duaghtr to luk aftr'aur nahi tho kya'she even has entire Quileute tribe to drool

..

Hearing this all three burst out laffing..

aftr de usual nok-jok they reached college'on getting down after parking their car'geet got out first'.but de nxt instant she was lying flat on de ground 😲'b4 she wetn flat down she could only hear was 😲

Geeet

Nd THUD..!! geet was down

Both sam nd nora--'geet geet'thu teek hai na'.chutney tho bani nahi na'πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

Geet-(panting)🀒 guys pehele iss hathi ko tho mera body se nikal kar phek de...warna sach mein chutney banegha..aur finally u have to scoop me wid a spoon..πŸ˜›πŸ˜†

'

Tj-kya kya kaha' 😑geet thujhe mein hathi dikh thi hu'..urgh 😑.!! damn u 'nd both started

rolling on de ground f8tn'.both sam nd nora had to literally jump upon dem to stop their fight

'

Passers by whistled nd commented'wooohooo'kya zamana hai'bedroom seedha college mein aagaya'.hearing this tj fumed nd shout at de near by people

'.

Tj- kyu' 😑ethni shok hai..q mein leghkar ticket kareedh le..free show haina πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰

'.

Hearing this all 4 started laffing'passers by'gave dem luk wch clearly said weird people kaha se aaya look

'.

All 4 stood up'nd tj started hugging one by one

Tj- im sooo happy to see u guys'missed u tooo much 😳

'

Geet- awww 'mera baby'ethna miss kiya hamein πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

'.

Tj- nahi tho kya 'haven't seen u guys for one week'didn't I say to u guys lets have a stay toghtr'then wat happened'naa'no1 was interested'..i can understand sam nd nora'.but gee twat was ur issue'u stay in hostel na'.hostel ka warden thera sasuma thodi na he'aur hosten thera sasaural'y didn't u come

'

Geet- stammering-wo 'wo ..aha..wo kya hai na ki mujhe urgently ghar bulaya tha'aur jana pada'said she victoriously thinking finally she escaped

But alas frends like those who need enemies

'

Nora- but last week I called rano ma..nd she said u didn't come home 'so frm wer did u suddenly appear in front of her'she narrowed her ..nd luked at her suspiciously

Geet luked here nd there'suddenly de earth lukd much bettr place dan de face of her frends'wah wah..kya quality hai mitti ki'ghar bana hai tho isss mitti se banneka'' πŸ˜›πŸ˜†.finally she couldn't contain de silence..nd luked at her frends 'nd said rather in small tone--😳-'..leave it guys' chal tj aghle hafthe zaroor hum sab pj party rakhenghe'.wat say

nora still suspicious...hmm okay..

Tj- hmm..okay'.but no last min cancelling'promise

'

All three -'promise'πŸ˜ƒ

geet- yaaar marthe martje bach gaya...ya jesus,allah,baghwan..iss bachi ka raksha karna...har bar..aise sitautiions se bacha lena..pleeez 😳

precap-college-...boy-lo aagya hamara college ka maan or shaan

That's it guys part 2'precap still de same''If u want me to continue plz comment 'I really wanna know ur views'.

Edited by suhaa0_O - 12 years ago
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thank you...πŸ˜ƒ
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omg geet and her froendz r hilarious.. cant stop laughing.. bechara avi.. pj party.. geet sooo does not want it..cont soon hun
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character sketch-

geet -


bubbly, sweet simple nd cute...living de life wid motto..."jeeyo tho bephikr jeeyo"...nd "watever happens..happens for de best"...drama queen in de gang...totally bindaaas...nva takes any taunts or comments to heart...love her gang very much..nva did she think she culd get sch awesum frends despite her background...she stays in de hostel even wid de constant prestering frm her frends to leave in their house...even as PG...noo our geet says she wanna leave de way like rest of them...hearing this her frends always gives her de weird luk...like she is experimenting her life itself...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›

nora- naureen gupta


de matured one in de gang...nva accepts anything very easily...she first analyse it ,calculate it...den pass de subject or accepts anything...same bindaas...frm a very known nd rich family.frm de Gupta interiors nd construction...she's her daddy's girl ..nd mamma's shaithan...childhood frend wid sam nd tj ...became frends wid geet recently ...but for an outsider even geet seems like their chaddi buddie frend..

samiera shah -sam


...sam de jungli billi in de gang...de feisty cat..she very well educated in back answering...same comes frm a very well known family ..de shah enterprises...wch deals wid de entertainment business...very rich ...but nt spoil sport...treats every1 as equal...love her gang very much ...especially geet...who just joined in 1st year.

tj- tanushree jeet...but commonly known as tj frm her childhood

i love her frm saraswatichandre)...de emotional one...frends wid sam nd nora since she was in diapers...couldnt rmbr a day widout any1 of them...nd frends wid geet who joined in 1st year...



all 4 r studying in delhi university for fashion designing...geet opted for indian works whereas the rest opted for western...all three except geet r modern yet tradional...geet is simple,dressed simple ...nva did she wear any western ...her motto..wen sum1 asks or taunts abt her dressing is "kapde hai...khana nahi ki mein preference raku" meaning for her she prefers changing eating nd se food stuff ...but not her dressing...wen asked by her frends y she wears salwars...she says' yaar mein experiment kar rahu clothes ke saath'...
geet joined delhi uni for 1st year..nw itz been 6 months dat she met de other three...their gang is very famous throughout de uni ...nt only in fashion designin college but everywer...they r loved for their bindaas cool attitude...they r nva haughty, or mean unlike sum people...even though all three xcept geet is rich ...r nva proud abt it ..kehthe hai..."dad ka money hai" hamara thodi nahe ki waste karu "
geet stays in de college hostel ...nd visits home in weekends



rest guys read de story plz...to kno more abt dis gang..πŸ˜³πŸ˜†..guyz i dunno de abcd of fashion designin...to write dis i had to litrerally take training classes frm my bestie(she iz doin fashion designin)...soo plz ignore if any mistake arises in future πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ


w8 w8 main bhul gayi meet...

avinash aka avi-- geet's majnu ...doing mba 2nd year



new intros ...

riya-

de college babu accoreding to de guys...but for our gang nd de rest of de gals de college bimbo...rich dad's spoil sport...very keen in wasting her dad's money...very haughty nd mean..looks down at people...doing fashion designin 2nd year...senior to our gang

rahul- riya's chamcha - doing mba 2nd year



vicky-

for now let him be mysterious πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ doing mba 2nd year in delhi uni..


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omg geet and her froendz r hilarious.. cant stop laughing.. bechara avi.. pj party.. geet sooo does not want it..cont soon hun


thank you mayur 😳...writing abt geet nd her frends was easy...coz those r me nd my frends dialogs nd routine..😳.i just wrote it ova...i nva had to imagine or think for their dialogs πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
will soon continue..πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by suhaa0_O - 12 years ago

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