swaron breakfast date part 2 updated/banner added

Page

Next Last

bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

this os has been dedicated to shilpa swaron aka shilpa dii...
shilpa dii dekhlo i kept my promise...😛
this is my first ever os written so plsss itne jute chapal mat marna...phike hue tomatoes are welcome...
this os is a two shot os...
here u go with first part...😊

credit goes to arsha vrushan aka racheal...thank dear...🤗
it was a sunday morning n a rainy day...
sharon was alone in house she messaged swayam tht they will hav their breakfast date nw...
swayam read the message n was jumping in exitement...
swayam thn messaged tht he will b there in 30 min...
swayam n sharon both were getting ready so tht they can b precentable in front of each other...
thn finally both get ready n swayam was about to leave for sharon's house n their sharon was waiting for swayam...
finally swayam came n ring the door bell...sharon in hurry go towards the door n opened it...
thn two love birds finally see each other n LLHH...
(swayam was wearing a casual white shirt with denem jeans lloking adorable as always n sharon was wearing white tee n shorts...)
thn finally both come from their worlds n sharon asked swayam to get in to the house...
thn both walked slowly in the house fingers entangled with each other...
thn in drawing room swayam asked sharon tht wht she will eat sharon came closer n said "the aumlate u made tht morning with ur heart"...thn they both shared eyelock (backgroung pehla nasha instrumental)...
finally they come out of the trance n swayam said ur wish is my command and at this statement sharon blushed a little...😳
thn swayam started walking towards kitchen n suddenly turned n asked sharon tht "AGAR ME KAHU KE MUJE TUMHARE HELP CHAYE THO TUM KAROGII"...(asked in naughty tone)
sharon replied "FINE ITNA KEH RAHE HO THO AA JATE HU VESE B YAHA AKELE ME BORE HO JAUNGII, n winked swayam...😉
thn swayam came to sharon n give him her hand n thn both leave for khitchen...
p.s. written in hurry so kindly ignore gramer mistakes...
p.s.s i knw its super lame but kindly give ur statements...its valuable for me...😊
promo- swaron kitchen romance ab yeh mat puchna kesa romace kyunki i will not tell...😆

Edited by vrushaan - 12 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Bhavi that was so smaall
...pls update fast...and yes first part was beautiful...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
Bhavi that was so smaall
...pls update fast...and yes first part was beautiful...

patience bai n thankyou for ur precious coment...
shilpa dii ko tho dekh lene do phir update krungii...😛

Quote

SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey it was not at all lame but ya too short!""In fact I love reading such os on swaron!!!And plz continue soon!!!n do pm.me next time plz !!!

Quote

pooja123456

@pooja123456

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

sweet!
jaldi next part update karo

Quote

Sadaf Khalid

@sadafarsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Bhavi that was awsum

Vry nyc

Will be w8ing for the next part :)

Quote

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Inna chota😆😆😆😆

But it was cute and adorable 😊...ur wish my command and LLHH ...bring back the golden memories

Continue soon dear😊...cute 1st part😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

Quote

-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

Bhavi u really wrote it for me woh bhi with in a day 😊 😊
Thank u so so much 🤗 🤗

Yeh tera first os hai Kya mujhe toh laga u have already written 😲
How sweet of u to dedicate ur first os for me am so touched yaar 😃 😃

Hmmm waise padh liya maine.. First part kaafi chota hai but great start 👏
Beautiful tha first attempt ke liye mast n i know ur devil mind is sure working in full speed for second part n am also sure ke it ll be of more high level than my expectation 😉 😉
Samaj gayi na of Wat am tryin to tell 😉

Swaron breakfast date nice idea... Yeh part bahot small tha toh itna Kuch bolne ko nahi hai..
But i really liked dat help waali line n sharon.s reply for dat.. N d epic line of always your wish is my command 😊 😊

Beautiful start am more excited for second part cos actual story toh wahi hai.. Jaldi update kar am waiting..

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

Quote

Vishaka

@-Vishaka-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

bhav tera devil mind toh kafi fast doudata hai...beautifully written yaar
but itna chotu update 😭chal iss bar chod deti hu kyuke tera 1st attempt hai...bt i want big update next time...
Swaron alone in kitchen.. 😳 waitng for next and update asap

Quote

...Diya...

@...Diya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Wonderful start .A bit too short but I liked it a lot.Finally , the much awaited breakfast date .Hoping to see one like this in D3 too. Update soonish .
PS: Use some other kind of font size next time if you can 😳
PPS: write on VruShan too